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Vignettes: Chapter 57
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“He’s at Zoe’s game.”
“He’ll give her a ride home and stay for the party.” Fred said as she entered the room.
“Have your big speech prepared?” Dakota turned towards Bette who scowled.
“Don’t make fun of me.”
Every year Bette ended up telling the story of how Zoe’s name came to be. It was never planned, but Bette managed to work the story into some conversation. And this night was no exception. Zoe bustled into the house and headed straight to the shower with Damien close behind her. Everyone sat outside for dinner and Zoe joined them, running her fingers through her long dark hair.
“What’s everyone over tonight for?” She asked, smiling. She sat down next to Tina and propped her long legs on another chair. Tina squeezed her leg and in return Zoe rested her head on her mother’s shoulder. They couldn’t have looked any more opposite. Zoe’s darker complexion shadowed Tina’s pale skin. The only thing they had in common was their brown eyes.
“We just thought it would be fun to get together.” Tina teased.
“Too bad Alice and Dana couldn’t make it.” Zoe said as she dug into her chicken. “What are they doing? Touring the country or something?”
“Oh don’t ask me. Those two are always up to something.” Tina replied.
Everyone ate and chatted, enjoying the nice weather and good food. Tina went into the kitchen to refresh everyone’s drinks and motioned for Dakota to follow her. She did, reluctantly.
“So, how are things with Joel?” Tina asked as she pulled another bottle of white wine from the fridge.
“Fine.”
Tina put her hand on her hip.
“Look, mom. There’s nothing to talk about. We are just friends.”
“Friends who live together?”
“Friends who share the same bed?” Bette walked into the kitchen and Dakota glared at her. “What? I thought you two might need help.”
“Whatever, I’m not talking about this now.” Dakota quickly rushed back outside leaving her moms alone in the kitchen.
“Now that she’s finally gone…” Bette grinned and took Tina in her arms. They kissed.
“What are we going to do with that girl?” Tina asked.
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I love seeing Bette and Tina’s life unfold – very touching and another child too, you made me all misty. Really, really lovely.
That was simply beautiful. I couldn’t help feeling my heart melt when Zoe held out her arms for Bette to pick her up. I wasn’t sure where you were going to go with this, but I am so glad you are giving us a glimpse into their future. Thanks
Always one of my favorite stories, and you have taken it to a new level. I agree with kg, it is exceptional.
Lovely, Fareast. That was absolutely, lovely.
Beautiful, A child knows who to love and Zoe picked two good ones. thanks for posting
This story just gets better and better. You are creating a beautiful patchwork quilt out of the lives of Bette, Tina, their family and friends.
Fareast, that was really beautiful. I’ve loved the story for a long time.
Exceptionally beautiful story :D
Awww such a sweet story! How cute is Bette! Good job on this chapter.
Beautiful story..Thank you for sharing it with us..Post soon
OMG sssoooo cute..love it..Bette has a wonderfull heart and so does Tina great chapter :o)
K
Beautiful chapter. So sweet. Love your story.
I trust you fareast.LOved how you told how Zoe came to be.Glad this series will continue.
i must tell u this. i stumbled across this story a few days ago and stayed up till 3 in the morning reading it! iam so glad i found it.It’s really heart warming. congrats on the award.
Hey FarEast,
With this leap in to the future I thought that this story was winding down but yet again you have captured so perfectly the human condition.
Zoë entrance into Bette, Tina and Dakota’s lives was at first tear-jerking and tragic then life affirming and inspiring.
Your palette is full of color: every word perfectly chosen to paint the fine details; every phrase, a brushstroke giving texture and depth; every sentence, an image to cherish and visualize and every paragraph, the whole picture to complete the scene and move the drama forward.
It was great to see that the families have grown up together as Shane, Fred and Damien are all still around.
Thank you for this splendid and stunning spectacle.
Please post real soon and continue this brilliantly realized yarn.
The format is awesome and keeps me coming back for more.
Your Loyal Fan.
very nice- love the angle that you are approaching this story with. adds an additional layer to this already multi-faceted story.
Beautiful chapter! Bette has such a wonderful heart. Can’t wait for more
another master chapter… sweety just like you