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    Vignettes: Chapter 58

    Story written on August 8, 2005 by fareast.
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    A Promise

     

    Dakota peeked around the corner of the hallway, not quite sure if she wanted to check out her new sister or run and hide.

     

    “Sweetie, come here and meet Zoe.  Remember her?  You saw her at the shelter?  Come say hello.”  Tina walked down the hallway and reached for her daughter’s hand.  Dakota clung to her.

     

    Bette dropped Zoe to the ground and bent down next to her, steadying her step.  Dakota stood in front of her, looking down, a curious expression on her face.  She was quiet.

     

    “Zoe… this is your big sister Dakota.”  Bette reached out for Dakota’s hand.  “Dakota say hi.”

     

    “Hi.  Guess I’m your big sister.  Nice to meet you.”  Dakota said just above a whisper.  She then turned around and walked to her bedroom and closed the door.

     

    Tina looked at Bette perplexed and moved to go and talk to her, but Bette stopped her.  “Let me talk to her.  Show Zoe around and I’ll be out in a few minutes.” 

     

    Tina nodded and gave Bette a quick kiss.  She knew that as time passed, Dakota was more and more like Bette, which surprised Tina.  She was glad that Dakota had someone who could relate to her.

     

    Bette softly knocked on Dakota’s door and waited to enter until she heard a faint, “Come in.”

     

    “What’s up sweetie?”  Bette asked as she sat down on the bed next to the sullen seven year old.

     

    “Nothing.”  Dakota was laying on her back staring at the ceiling.

     

    “Why didn’t you want to hang out with us?”

     

    “Didn’t feel like it.”

     

    “Don’t you want to get to know your new sister?”  Bette asked, leaning over the small body.

     

    Dakota shrugged and avoided looking at Bette.

     

    “Just because there’s a new girl in the house doesn’t mean we love you any less, do you know that?”

     

    Bette waited, giving Dakota time to respond if she wanted to and also giving her time to take in everything she said.

     

    “There’s a special place in my heart for you, Kody, that nobody could ever take.” 

     

    Dakota finally looked up at Bette.  The sound of her nickname that Tina hated caught her attention.

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    2. Boy are so different from girls. I see my boys every day.they just stay a few minutes. and a Love you Mom. Glad you took us into the future and that Bette and Tina did make wonderful parents. Thanks

    6. That scene reminded me of the old Lifesaver commercials (yes, that does date me). Seredipitous and loving. The kind of relationship we all wish we had with out parents. You are doing a fantastic job taking us back to the future, so to speak. Love this story.

    8. Fareast,
      Just wanna say how much I have enjoyed this tale and format.
      You capture so beautifully the relationship between Bette and Dakota and how it has matured over the years.
      It taps in to each of over lives as we all wish to spend more quality time with our loved ones and let the mundane daily chores fall away. Yes, I promise to make more time but often this is an empty shell as other priorities take over.
      I love this jump it time and the way that you use it to your advantage by dipping back and pulling out this vibrant memories of time gone bye.
      Zoë is lucky to have found wonderful parents in Bette and Tina and a fantastic sister in Dakota whereas they are blessed by having someone to share all their love, understanding and knowledge with.
      Keep this fabulous fac fic rolling along forever.
      I’ll be here waiting and watching for it.
      Your Loyal Fan.

    9. just caught up on both your stories. im truly speechless. since i havent commented on any chappy all i can say is dayum girl, you are spectacular. keep it going.

    13. So touching Fareast. Dakota is very much like Bette so it makes sense that Bette can reach out to her better than Tina. I like the way you have brought this story into the future.

    15. fareast…i just read your story from chapter one to present and all i can say is “WOW!” You are a superb writer and your story made cry and laugh…sometimes both at the same time. Excellent…keep up the good storytelling!

    16. awww lovely..see kids growing is dificult but someday they will and the good part is when theyre still your friend great chapter sooo cute..i love Bette and Dakota relationship :o)

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