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Vignettes: Chapter 62
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Spoons rested in almost empty ice cream containers and bags of potato chips littered the floor. Three women lounged in their boxer shorts and tank tops letting the sweat from the melting ice cream drop on their legs. Laughter filled the living room, along with some tears. Tina sat on the couch with her legs propped on the coffee table. Dakota’s head was in her lap and she stretched out on the rest of the couch. Bette sat on the other end of the couch, Dakota’s feet in her lap. She rubbed her feet while Tina ran her fingers through her hair. It was getting late, but Dakota made no mention of leaving or indicating a need for escape. Her mothers were truly enjoying her spontaneous company despite the unusual circumstances.
Dakota let out a deep laugh. “Mom! I was like six!”
“And after all these years it still brings a smile to my face.” Tina laughed.
“The only thing you were concerned about was giving away Dana and Alice’s big secret.” Bette said as she gently massaged Dakota’s sole. “I’m surprised you held out for so long.”
“It wasn’t easy. But I didn’t realize how big of a deal it was at the time.”
“You should’ve known the Alice – Dana relationship drama before all that, but you were too young to remember.” Bette said.
“No, I remember some of it. It’s just when they started dating after they had ended everything, I didn’t think much of it.”
“You were the first to know.” Tina said. “Though we all thought they belonged together. They are the only ones who can stand each other.”
Bette laughed. “Now look at them. After all this time and they’re still together. Who knew?”
The front door opened and closed and they could hear the shuffle of shoes being taken off.
“Who goes there?” Bette shouted.
“Who do you think?” Zoe sassed as she walked into the room.
“You’re a bit saucy tonight, huh? Hot date with Damien?” Bette teased.
“Mama! We are not dating. We hung out just as friends.” Zoe blushed and sat down on the floor with her back propped against the couch so that she was leaning against Bette’s legs.
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I so enjoy the stories with the kids, it all just kinda balances out. Glad for Dakota’s sake she’s not pregnant, but kinda sad cos I think B&T would have enjoyed a new baby since there’s have grown and are up and just about out. Thanks so much for posting again. But will allow you the break, go enjoy your vacation.
What a relief….love the family time in the story fareast..post soon
Nice chapter far, enjoy your vacation.One final post would be nice.He,Hah.
wow im with the others thats a relief..Dakota was not ready for that better when is intend..great chapter F post soon i love flashback
Great update, I really like them as a family. Fun Alice and Dana flashback too :).
Fareast,
Another wonderful chapter.
I’ll wait forever to see where this story leads.
You have captured my heart and soul with your astounding words, heartfelt and honest emotions, intimate imagery and tantalizing twists.
Seeing these women bond is a thing of beauty and well worth the wait.
Post as soon as you can because I will be waiting.
Your Loyal Fan.
It’s a relief that she’s not pregnant because she wasn’t ready. Another beautiful chapter, can’t wait for more. Enjoy your vacation!
You always manage to convey so much in your stories without losing everything to too much detail. Just a couple of short paragrapshs and I have lived an entire lifetime with Bette and Tina, or Alice and Dana.
No kidding that Dakota could have retired at an early age if she just would have cashed in on Dana and Alice’s secret! Too funny.
Zoe is an interesting one. Can’t wait to see how she plays out in the love department.
Just when I thought you were going to tease us until you returned from vacation about whether or not Dakota was pregnant…good job!
Have a great vacation! We will be looking forward to your return, you can count on that!!
wonderful!!! Al and dana, huh? sweet… it’s a shame Kody didn’t understand it before… lololol
Well, that was a relief. Great update.
What a wonderful way to start my day. Great as always Fareast. Have a great vacation!
what a way to wake up, ffc, fareeast and then mts. i think im in heaven. what a difficult time but what wonderful support. i sooo loe this story. so rich in detail and thought. thanks. please try to post before you leave. 2 weeks is a long time. but have fun nontheless.
wonderful family time. love the connection between B&T and their daughters.
Fareast,
The thing I truly adore about this story is the real and palpable sense of family it evokes.
The characters care for one another and want the best for each other.
There are times when this is not the easy option but still they persist knowing the dangers ahead but ultimately gain the spoils of love and friendship.
You capture and conjure up all of these things with such a delicate and purposeful touch.
The lessons of the past are wonderfully recalled to shape and teach for the future.
Please post soon as I can’t wait to see what other adventures, the past and present may bring.
Your Loyal Fan.
That was a nice family scene. I’m glad Dakota isn’t avoiding her moms
K
Excellent chapter as always. LOve it.