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Vignettes: Chapter 64
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“You said it earlier. You’re in love, Bette.”
Bette put her head down between her knees and moaned. “What the ***** am I going to do? I have to end it.”
Alice pulled her back up. “End it? Are you crazy? Why?”
“I can’t be like this. It’s not me.”
“Not you? Look at her.” Alice pointed across the parking lot at Tina who was getting out of her car and heading towards the bar door. Three other women were checking her out and approaching her. “She is gorgeous and into you. Look how she ditched those ladies.”
“So?”
“So if you mess this up I’ll kill you. You have never admitted to being in love. Now act like a big girl and make nice with Tina in other places than the bedroom.”
Bette was already moving out of the car, being drawn towards Tina. Alice rolled her eyes and followed, hoping some of her advice didn’t go unnoticed. Bette immediately found Tina once in the bar.
“Hi Tina.” Bette smiled.
“Hey Bette. What’s up? Care for a drink?”
“That’s my line.”
“Beat you to it. What’ll it be?” Tina asked.
“Nothing. I don’t feel like drinking tonight.”
Tina scowled in confusion. “Since when don’t you feel like drinking?”
“Since I already feel intoxicated just being with you.”
“Some pick up line.” Tina rolled her eyes and smiled.
“It’s true.” Bette pulled Tina close and breathed her in, smelling her neck and lifting her hair. “I can’t get enough of you.” Her breath on her neck sent goosebumps down Tina’s back.
“Do you want to get out of here?” Tina asked, barely able to stand.
Bette started to answer then hesitated, staring into Tina’s eyes. “Not tonight, T. Let me miss you a bit.”
And just as quickly as Bette had entered the bar, she left. Tina was standing in the middle of the floor, speechless. She was used to going home with Bette or vice versa. Ever since the beginning, their ***** had been amazing and Tina enjoyed their nights together. Now she stood confused and alone. Alice had witnessed the entire scene and rolled her eyes. Leaving her chair she moved towards Tina to explain what just happened.
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Fareast,
A big Hello and hope you are all rested and recharged after your vacation.
You have been missed.
I fell for the line “You can learn from them because they have the most amazing love story.” Because it could be written as “I can learn from you because you have created the most amazing love story.”
The tale just keeps up such a high standard that have never dropped. If anything it gets better.
The interactions are beautifully crafted and executed. The story flows majestically from one memory to the next and like pooh sticks are carried along by the current.
Your wonderful imagination has created such a rich vein of storytelling that are chapter expertly mines.
Awaiting their next encounter/adventure.
Your Loyal Fan.
The daughter wants to make a DVD on her Mothers life, In any relationship you take the good and the bad Love this welcome back. thanks
Excellent!!!
I’m looking forward to see hoe Dakota’s gift is received. Hopefully her mothers’ love will inspire her to be more open to love.
They have the most beautiful love story indeed, and you are the genius who brings it to us! I love the flashbacks, they just add so much more to their relationship. I just wish the show did more of that- they should really hire you as a writer. I hope you had a great vacation because you deserved it (although im glad your back because I can’t get enough of this story) Can’t wait for more :)
It was nice that Dakota took the time to seek out someone that could fill in the gaps for her. Alice was certainly the right choice – she does have more dirt on them than anyone else!
Dakota needed to see that even with such a terrible ‘down’ that occurred in her mother’s lives that you can survive something like that to be rewarded with such an incredible ‘up’.
I think that Dakota is quite a bit like Bette and afraid of love. What a wonderful gift to hear the stories that allow her to see not only her similarity to Bette, but the possibility of love that she has within her grasp with her boyfriend.
Welcome back! Excellent chapter, just the right mix of humor and romance.
Greetings Fareast,
I’ve been reading this story sporadically during my limited time on the boards, and am finally all caught up. Your writing is warm, touching and heartfelt. Your words convey such depth and meaning and your characters are easily understood. The feeling I have when reading is one that I’d like to keep throughout my day. Too bad I give in to my surroundings and easily change moods. It’s nice to remember the feeling though. Thank you for sharing your wonderful story and wonderful writing.
Great chapter! good to see you back. I love the reflecting and thinking more about the emotions they went through at the start of the relationship.
Glad you are back. I went to the party and had a great time.
Fareast, welcome back. Hope your vacation was enjoyable, this update sure was. You write beautifully.
Beautifully written – as always. What a treat to wake up to one of your chapters – the drive to work will be a pleasant one this morning.
Thanks for sharing with us.
Nice to see you back! great chapter!.
Btw i think its already chapter 64 and not 63 ;)
just a wonderful chapter…you tap into the romantic in us with such tenderness and hope…thanks
I meant to ask… did anyone go to the fanfic writers gathering in NYC?
welcome back. hope u had a great vacation. this story is awesome. love the way alice and kota talk so easily about b&t. thanks for the update
Just when you think that this story can’t possibly get any better……you post another chapter and wala…it’s even better…thankyou for giving us this update, the thought and care that goes into this is obvious…now…more pls
fareast, you are exceptional. this is such a wonderful, full of life, rich in detail story. im so glad that your back. thanks again for your talent you share with us.
Excellent chapter, just love your story.
Welcome back…i have missed your story..please post soon!
“Got any more stories?”
Back to the vignettes format!
Gather around the fanfic campfire, everyone. Fareast as some stories for her characters to tell. I love it!
Welcome back from vacation, Fareast. Where did you go – far east?
Sumatra? East Chicago? East-er Island?
I’m being silly, giddy at the prospect of climbing on the roundabout of your stories once again!
Thanks for posting!
so sweet and Dakota goes to the right person..lol..at least the gossip one..great chapter as always post soon
Hope your vacation was awesome. This was great. Keep it up.
The Meet & Greet was fantastic. Seahurst from the West Coast, Angelak from England, Lucia, Escacythrumusic, wheresMaria, Hackgirl from Austrialia via the West Coast, Chasemenow, Monica, Canon, MLB Fan, Betty, T, Roberta, Webmaster Jacky, Kathy, Cindy from Holland, Jwet, Jobadge and Jill from England, Equanmity and I and a few others were present. This site has such a collection of intelligent, warm, funny and giving authors and readers. It was a pleasure to be in there company. The evening was electric.
wonderful!!! glad you’re back!
Your story grows and flows in the most amazingly beautiful way. This chapter was very special very sweet for Dakota to see her moms past through alice’s telling. Sweet and so very beautiful. so glad you are back hopt he vacation was great.
Hey fareast welcome back we missed your story for awhile Thanks for writing back I Love it your still really great and wonderful writer Please continue post soon Thanks!!!