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Vignettes: Chapter 65
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“Nice. I like the other one better though.” Bette said. Alice returned to the room. “I just am afraid of messing things up again I guess.”
“You can’t live like that and you certainly can’t love like that. Give it all you got or give up.”
“If I ask Tina to marry me will you tell me who your secret lover is?” Bette stood on tip toes and peeked over the door. Alice was standing in just her bra and panties.
“Jesus, Bette this is not a peep show!” Alice threw on the last dress. “And yes, if you actually propose, I’ll spill.”
Bette grinned. “Deal. By the way, I like the first one best.”
Alice paid for the dress and walked outside with Bette. Dana almost ran into them as she made her way for the store. She didn’t even see her friends exiting.
“Dana! Hey! You almost walked right into me.” Bette said as she stopped Dana.
Dana looked confused as she glanced from Bette to Alice. “Hi. What are you guys doing out here?”
Alice blurted out. “Just dress shopping. No big deal.”
“Apparently she has a hot date tonight.” Bette said.
“Oh yeah… me too.” Dana replied. Alice shot her an annoyed look and Dana’s eyes grew wide as she realized what she had just said.
Bette raised an eyebrow. “Really? With who?”
“Yes, Dana… who?” Alice repeated.
“Um… well… it’s kind of a secret.”
Alice slowly rolled her eyes then closed them hoping something would happen to end this conversation. Quickly she said, “We’re double dating. That’s all. Dana’s hooking up with a blind date.”
Bette looked at Alice suspiciously. “Does Dana know your date?”
“Nope.” Dana replied. “But I will after tonight. I’ll let you know how it goes.” She smiled and waved as she quickly entered the store leaving Bette and Alice by the car.
Bette shook her head and laughed. As she opened the car door, she froze for a moment letting the conversation replay in her head one more time. She turned to Alice who was nervously biting her bottom lip. Bette’s face lit with understanding.
Bette’s eyes grew wide and her jaw dropped. “You two are sleeping together, aren’t you?” Bette covered her mouth with her hand.
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Far….wonderful story. Glad you didn’t change it!
This was perfect, no re-write needed.. loved it as usual
haha.. awsome.
So glad you didn’t chuck the chapter. Loved it. Very well written as always.
What’s to rewrite. Its great, this story just keeps getting better. I love hearing the stories via Alice who definitly has all the juice. The way she talks to Dakota is so cute, and Dakota’s reactions are typical of any child when hearing things about there parents. Its also nice for us, cos even though we know the stories, we never get tired of them. Keep it up, and I can’t wait for the party and Dakota’s gift.
I too am glad you didn’t re-write it..It was great I love this story please continue and keep us all at the table..Wouldn’t life be great if we all could have a planet to go to every week…Post soon.
I’m glad you didn’t rewrite it – I like it a lot. Your chapters are always wonderfully written – even if you don’t believe so.
Thanks for taking us on this journey!
Hey fareast that’s was so Wonderful Story I Still Love it Keep going Post soon Thanks.
i love Dakota she is a great kid. great chapter
even though you doubted to post this one i am very pleased you did, because it shows so much the sweetness and humour of your characters. thanx.
what part of this needed rewriting??? So glad you posted it is perfect just the way it is…I’ll take more if you have it!!!
Fareast,
Fave line this time was “As long as I hear more stories, I’ll stick around.” Because that is exactly how I feel about this story. As long as you care to write it I will be here patiently waiting to consume it.
This latest incarnation of relating the events of their lives to Kody is a masterstroke and displays your fabulous talent and fantastic skills as an author.
Your self criticism is not warranted as I loved this chapter as much as any other. The stories continued your excellent standards and expressed you eloquence as always.
We are our own worst critics although please take it as heartfelt when I describe how much I truly enjoyed this installment.
You have crafted a rich and explicit universe where memory and recollection are the messengers for love, understanding, knowledge, hilarity, pathos and human emotions. Only by looking into the past can we change and improve the future.
Awaiting the subsequent exploit/escapade.
Your Loyal Fan.
why on earth would you want to rewrite something, so fun and heartfelt. please keep this up. its great.
You weren’t going to post this? Sacre bleu! Okay, I know what you mean, lol. But I’m glad you posted this. Dakota is such a great character, and you’ve interwoven her so skillfully with the rest of the characters. Love it.
Great chapter, very cute story just love it.
Absolutely perfect as it is!
I loved the bouncing back and forth between story telling and hanging out. Nice balance. They have such an easy going and casual relationship together – Alice is good for Dakota.
I think Dakota will eventually begin to see what she has in common with her parents and slowly begin to close the distance that she has created between them. I can see Dakota becoming a regular Saturday morning visitor.
Wonderful chapter.
i liked it just the way it was- perfection!
That wasAWESOME. No rewrite needed. This is such a great story. I can’t wait for the party. That could be a wholenew story.
aww so sweet is good to see Dakota more kind and gentle with her moms..great chapter as always thanks