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Wanna Date? Chapter 15
That sounds great, Bette replied as Tina stood up. Bette automatically rose to help her, and got a grateful smile for her solicitous behaviour. Bette felt the little flame of happiness inside her burn brighter. Just holding Tinas elbow was making her feel all mushy. She was definitely in love, and it felt even more intense than the first time round. Perhaps because she knew what she had almost thrown away.
Falling in love again. What am I to do. I cant help it.
They were dancing at a rather seedy nightclub on a warm Friday night. All around them, scantily clad women were in similarly tight clinches with lovers, or trying to lure prospective bed partners. The heat of desire mixed with the smell of alcohol and sweat as Bette and Tina gazed into each others eyes.
They had been seeing each other for a couple of months now, and to Bettes surprise, it was more exciting than ever. From the start, she had known Tina was different from her other girlfriends, but she hadnt really expected to find a life partner. It had never been about the conquest with her. Bette was slightly ashamed to admit that she had seduced women away from their boyfriends before, but it was never about that with Tina. The moment she kissed her, it had been clear that this was serious, totally unlike any other relationship.
However, even admitting that, Bette hadnt expected to fall for her so hard. She wasnt good at exposing her feelings, giving up any sort of control to a lover, but that all went out of the window with Tina. She left her feeling weak and helpless. Bette was increasingly becoming scared at her lack of control around the blonde, and consequently ended up pulling away from her emotionally at times. She felt she had to for her own survival, and her own sense of self.
Bette Porter did not intend to fall on her knees and beg anyone, but she had to fight the urge with Tina constantly. She wanted to announce her undying love for Tina and urge her to be with her for all eternity. Tina was such a beautiful person. Not just physically, although she was utterly gorgeous, but she was beautiful inside too. She had a gentleness of spirit, but a real inner strength than made Bette feel inadequate at times. Tina was never petty or mean, in the way Bette knew she was sometimes.
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(51 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
Well we live in hope knowing that Tina can’t possibly be as stubborn as Bette, right?!! A lovely warm and fuzzy chapter. Thanks
really like this story, great writing keep em comin.
This continues to be an outstanding story. Looking forward to what Tina is making for dinner…
Nice, very nice, and a great use of the flashback. A very warm and uplifting chapter. Please post again soon.
Absolutely lovely. Tina will get there I know. Enjoyed the flashback it really worked. Can’t wait till the next update.
but..but .. i love the flashbacks.. love the story
I like the flashbacks. This is really good. Please continue.
Damn fine job! I’ll have to save this one.
” Bette felt the little flame of happiness inside her burn brighter.” This and so many other lines are memorable. You got that whole flashback thing down, girl!
All frivolousness aside, this was a wonderful chapter.
Thank you!
I enjoy the flashbacks. You mean you have 15 chapters to go..right? post soon
Love the flashbacks! Was that 5 or 25 chapters…. (Only Kidding!)
Thanks so very much for writing!
K
Excellent chapter, can’t wait for more, just love it.
completely and totally amazing the eay you blended the memory and the present moment for Bette. 100 stars from me.
Aww so lovely and beautiful, love it. Post soon, thanks!
Perfect!
Awesome flashback, cogent! Excellent job. :)
Great job…I like flashbacks. They allow us to get back to a ‘pre-angst’ time in B/T’s relationship.
Bette is waiting for Tina to take the next step for their relationship. Tina’s in control and Bette isn’t at all threatened or fighting that fact. Great story. Can’t wait to read what Tina’s going to make Bette for dinner. LOL.
Thanks that was so Beautiful as Always I Love it Please continue I can’t wait to the next chapter post soon.