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Wanted (Chapter 12)
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"Just thinking about you aroused me," Bette said quietly. "It made me want you again."
Helena placed her hand over Bette’s as it teased lower against the skin of her stomach.
"Are you intimating that you’re going to make love to me as we sit here, on this public beach, when not 30 minutes ago you hesitated to hold my hand?" Helena was a little incredulous.
"Tell me you don’t want me and I’ll quit," Bette replied. "Under the cover of darkness, there’s so much more that’s available to us."
She started to bite gently at Helena’s neck. She knew that would drive her wild, very likely ending debate on the topic.
"Fuck you know I love it when you do that," Helena melted back into Bette’s embrace.
Bette’s hand moved lower still, easing into the top of Helena’s cotton Capri pants.
"I imagined your tongue instead of my own hand," Bette started. "Tracing light moist circles on my stomach as you moved down."
Bette’s fingers followed in line with her descriptions, drawing circles on Helena’s skin as Helena turned her head for a kiss.
Bette was more than happy to indulge Helena’s silent request, and smiled as she felt her shift in the sand, separating her legs further and once again digging her heels into the beach.
"Permission granted?" Bette asked.
"Yes Bette," Helena replied. "You know it is."
"I’m certainly interested to see if you’re as wet for my touch as I was for yours last night," Bette whispered again. "But my fantasy has a few scenes left."
"I trust you’ll be describing them right down to the last detail?"
"As you wish," Bette replied between kisses.
"I envisioned your lips kissing at my inner thighs, gradually moving up. I could almost feel your hot breath on me, the picture of you in my mind’s eye was so vivid."
"It’s the artist in you," Helena said breathlessly. "You’re good with your imagination."
"Lucky me."
"I’d say I’m the lucky one right now," Helena corrected.
"I recalled the sound of your voice asking if you could taste me," Bette continued. "Just hearing the inflection in your tone is so arousing to me."
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“I think we have to decide how and when we’re going to start telling people,” Bette said quietly.”…Tina is going to shit…I think Bette’s lucky that she already has that adoption arrangement in place, thanks to none other than Helena P…Oh what a tangled web is the Lesbo Weho community! Thanks!
sorry for being discreet and just reading without commenting, but i figure i should drop a comment and say that i am thoroughly enjoying this story. thanks a bunch!
I agree with Techgal — Tina is going to shit when she finds out about Bette and Helena. And to be honest, I can’t wait to see how it all plays out. But for a relatively new relationship B & H seem to be communicating well and seem pretty strong together. It’s nice to see.
“They silently made their way back to the house, both aware of a slight shift in the wind, that had nothing to do with the weather” Wow.. I love that sentence!!I love the story so much, you can’t imagine, I think this is the best fanfic I’ve ever read, really.. I love the idea of Helena & Bette… I dont really like the new Tina.. so I’m hoping she gets really jealous in this story.. oh, i’m being mean, I know lol…. Keep up the good work JKS!!
As always JKS, lovely, I´m so loving this pair. Can I say, I don´t really care if Tina knows about it and don´t like it? It´s her loss.Thanks again and can´t wait for the next post.
“I think we have to decide how and when we’re going to start telling people,” Bette said quietly.Woo Hoo! the reveal. Can’t wait for the reactions especially Tina’s. Thanks for the update.
When they meet at Le Bistro later Sunday afternoon, Alice is going to be absolutely relentless in trying to get Helenea to reveal who she slept with Saturday night! Maybe Helena should call and cancel the late lunch, claiming she’s ill and in bed. Which really won’t be a lie. Because more than likely she’ll still be in the sheets attending to the insatiable Bette for whom she has developed an enormously high fever. These two are just lovesick for one another. Beautiful! Thank you.
Alice is so funny. If i were Bette or Helena I’d make sure her car pulled off and turned at least on corner before leaving the house. I hope Tina is mature when she finds out who Bette has been spending her night with and doesn’t use the kid to manipulate her. Post soon!
JKS, you know how I love this story! I can’t wait until the secret is revealed! I see them getting caught together somewhere or maybe Helena standing up for Bette while undergoing one of Tina’s wraths.
I am thrilled that you are going to have Bette tell Tina. It’s the only fair and right thing to do. I look forward to B and H to be out, loud and proud.
JKS, I never thought I would say this, but I love Bette and Helena being together, but only in your story. You are one fantastic writer. You are the only one who can write this B&H story and make us love it.
Yum. Oops, promised I wouldn’t say that anymore. Is beautiful redundant? I can’t pull off “fabulous” but you get the point. I, for one, could care less what Tina thinks because she deserves to lose Bette big time – I do, of course, hope that Bette isn’t subconsciously using Helena as a pathway back to Tina, but it’s your story and I trust it’ll be amazing no matter which way it goes. The chemistry between the two of them is astounding — beyond sexual, it’s got a natural sense of growth and increasing depth and a sophisticated sweetness to it that is just touching, not to mention entirely because you’re one hell of a writer. Yum.
Magical writing! Instead of an extensive commentary on what I appreciated, I’ll restrict myself to a specific element – namely how you captured the uncertainty and certainty in both regarding their growing bond. Thank you for writing.
I stopped commenting because I kept wanting to read the next installment. So, I decided to stop my incessant drooling over BeLana and let you know how excited I am about this wonderful fanfic. Keep up the good work.
sorry i haven’t commented before. i love this story. can’t wait until tina finds out, she’s gonna flip out. can’t wait for the next chapter.
Techgal anf funnyone said it best right to the point. So very glad that the adoption is behind Bette, Tina was honest with Bette ,,Just tell Tina I met a wonderful person and I’ll be seeing LOT OF HER FROM NOW ON. tINA WILL BE VERU UPSET. THANKS
I don’t know…I thing Helena started out being a rebound, but as the story goes on, and they get to know each other better, I believe Bette is really developing real feelings for Helena. She is so respectful of her feelings…so sexy, but reverent with her as well. You write these two women so perfectly together. By the time I get to the end of the chapter, I can’t wait for the next chapter…and knowing I have to wait drives me crazy!!! LOL Thanks!
….even at this hour in the morning. As like everyone else, I wonder how Tina’s going to take it, after all her and Bette are SOULMATES! LOL! But the story is my guilty pleasure. Love it just the same! Have I ever given you a “thank you”….thank you!
So lovely and sweet chapter – I love it. I hope Tina can handle the news about Bette/Helena for Angelica sake….more please :o))
I am so pleased these two beguiling woman are being given a chance at happiness, there is a purity in their attraction and the way they found each other, that is being honoured and held safe, …… the whimsical romantic in me is delighted by this path. You write the tenderness with such sensitive grace, and as such, this story does justice, not only to the writer you have become, but the ideals of love that must circulate in your ether.Thank you.
Wow! I love the banter between these two, not to mention … I still want Bette and Tina to find their way back to each other, but I always liked Helena. Being a Brit myself, I never did see why people thought she was so evil. Aloof – yes (I call it reserve); uptight – perhaps (but Peggy was hardly a warm and affectionate parent). So I’m quite enjoying the way this is going and am on the bus for the ride. Thanks!
JKS, Again, you have wowed me with your marvellous melodrama. The care and attention that you lavish on the building of a scene along with your astounding ear for dialogue make this a must read story. I, genuinely jump and down when I see another chapter from your good self. This story is a bright beacon showing us all a way out of the darkness that has settle on Season 3. It is your wonderful ability to engage and entertain that keeps us all here waiting breathlessly for the next chapter. The eloquence and ease of you words have enticed me and capture my imagination. As always, with much appreciation and gratitude for your time and effort, Your Loyal Fan.
you keep going with Bette and Helena..I am loving it. At least we see Bette happy here
i luv this story, it’s such an interesting turn from the usual stories, and lets face it your bette and helena are hot together!!!!!!!
who knew i’d be so crazy about helena and bette together. it’s quite lovely. thanks
Once again, well done jks. With each new installment, I wait to see what game of cat and mouse these two will play, but you are writing the characters deeper and deeper – loving it! So many of us feel as if you write for a living – your words flow so effortlessly and your stories are so easy to read. I have just now started catching up on your past stories, and let me tell you, I am none too disappointed! I, too, am a B&T fan, but continue to be enthralled with this story. Please do give us some drama for the “coming out” of B&H – somehow, it would be marvelous for them to be seen somewhere instead of just the standard speech announcing their relationship. But, I leave this endeavor firmly in your very capable hands! Keep up the amazing work!
I know they have to tell friends soon but i have to admit its kinda sexy it being their little secret…adds to to intensity…or is that just me being Bad!!!lol..will it still hold the same attraction when they dont have to hide??? whatever !!!its hot and i love what youve done with these two!!!You know so many readers love this dont worry so much about comments, tho if it encourages you more then i can go on and on…lol LOVIN IT!!!
I’m renaming you. You are offically “Justkeepposting”.I love your story. Your writing is incredible. You have made me love a pairing that at one time had me gagging. Thanks so much for posting. I’m giving you big imaginary hugs cause you made me happy today.
This is a great twist, Bette needs to get herself some lovin somewhere, right??? Please cintinue, and who cares what Tina thinks, at least Bette isn’t screwing a man!!!!
This story is not only beautiful and erotic, but very real. I can see Helena and Bette engaging in a realationship such as this. (Espically with the way things in S.3 are going.) I believe Tina will feel betrayed not so much by Bette, but Helena. What a slap in the face it could be to find out the only reason you had a lover was because she wanted to get to your partner. I don’t see Tina and Bette being anything more than co-parents in this story. I hope the gang will accept this choice between Helena and Bette, but I see a lot of drama in their future.Please post again soon. I love this story.
As Kit would say “here we go!”
Your story is the best, jks. I can handle B & H here but not on TLW. It’s the way you tell the tale, kiddo!
“Tina is going to shit.” – Ah, Techgal is always so delicate———but right on the money!
ohhhhh — perfect as always == Tina is going to be mighty pissed which in this story she deserves — great JKS
i was laughing so hard at the comments that i forgot what i was gonna say..well, i’m still reading because of your amazing writing
Wow, close call with Alice. That actually made me nervous! Hmm…I wonder how they’ll break it to everyone. Should make for some good reading! :)
you know I’m happy that Bette is obviously moving on, but also sad because either way you look Helena is a rebound and she loves Bette too fierce for that type of thing…ahhh I’ll wait til you decide…tksps…Tina is gonna shit!!!!
The way you write Helena & Bette together make them seem like the perfect pair. Glad they understand ‘communication is the key. Loved the update, Post soon.
I can’t wait for Tina to find out! Please make it filled with DRAMA! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Hell, Tina won’t just shit, she’s gonna shit bricks! This is going to get interesting (as if it hadn’t been already). Well JKS, you know you don’t have to encourage me to coment. I’ve been a sucker for your stuff ever since I got wise to it. You keep it up and so will I.
OK I am indeed a HUGE TiBette fan but I so LOVE these sexy pairing you have generated and now I find myself wonderding – wouldn’t this add to nicely to the huge drama that is already on S3!? IC should so take her cues from you. Please continue with this fantastic and engaging story – You are a very gifted writer! Thanks!
To quote the articulate Ms. Kennard ” Nice, really really nice”
Hello there! Getting out of ‘lurker mode’ just for this brillant story. Really looking forward for your next chapter. Please post soon! ^_^
Yes! I know that Tina vs. Bette showdown is coming. Excellent as always JKS.
having resigned myself to the fact that bette and tina are beyond repair, i’d be all for a bette and helena hook-up…provided you do the writing. p.s. i do declare, you have officially hit your stride with this story. wahoo!
This is gonna be huge and Tina are going crazy!