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    Wanted Chapter 15

    Story written on March 4, 2006 by justkeepswimming.
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    "You can use line two in the office if you want to call home," Helena offered.

     

    "Well, I did tell Tina I’d be away for two days, so it’s not likely she would have called anyway," Bette worked through her thought process verbally. "Maybe just a quick call to check in. Just in case."

     

    Bette stood and walked back into the office. The term did not do the room justice. Floor to ceiling mahogany bookshelves lined the far wall of the tastefully decorated room, and a contemporary matching desk took up a significant amount of space. A rich leather chair invited her to sit as she made her call.

     

    She was careful to pick line two, such that Tina would not recognize the number from which she was calling. The phone started to ring.

     

    "No answer," Bette thought aloud. She chose not to wonder at her whereabouts.

     

    The voice mail picked up and Bette left a brief message.

     

    "Hi Tina, I wanted to let you know I think I left my phone somewhere in the house," Bette said. "I’m sure everything’s fine, but I was just checking in, to see if you needed me to bring anything tomorrow. We have a lot to talk about. I’ll see you then."

     

    Bette made her way back out to the deck, where she noticed immediately that Helena had replenished the wine in her glass.

     

    "Are you trying to get me drunk so that you can take advantage of me?" Bette asked playfully.

     

    "Now I know for a fact you can’t blame drunkenness," Helena responded in kind. "Because for you to have been drunk for as long as this has been going on would mean you had a serious problem."

     

    "I am completely aware, and have all my wits about me," Bette promised. "Anything I’ve done has been because I wanted to do it. And right now, the only think I want to do, is you."

     

    Bette reached her hand out, and Helena took it as she rose from the chair.

     

    They walked silently, hand-in-hand back to the bedroom. Once inside the doorway, Bette turned to face Helena. They both paused and wondered at who would lead the intimate dance this evening.

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    1. Another wonderful chapter. :) OK, it’s one thing to show respect for your lover… but “vous”? Please tell me that it wasn’t intentional that Bette uses the formal pronoun “vous” and Helena uses the informal “tu”? This would completely add another dimension to what you wrote. Believe me… you don’t really use “vous” with someone you’ve *ahem* …tasted. At least I’ve never said, “J’ai envie de VOUS”… now hearing “J’ai envie de TOI” makes me go weak in the knees. I must admit that as an anglophone, it is difficult to continue speaking in French while in the throws of passion… that’s why I highly recommend French-speaking lovers and plenty of practice in order to get it right. Can we have Bette and Helena practice their French again? ;)

    2. Excellent chapter as always, but not the one I wanted to see. Hope you get to the chapter(s)where Tina has to face lots of hurt…either in a scene where she is thinking about Bette and Helena or a scene with Bette…or both.

    4. You are just amazing. Another fantastic beautifully written chapter. I was feeling quite faint by the time I completed the chapter and realized I had forgotten to breathe. The things you do to me!

    5. well, as ally nicely put it, merde is about to hit the fan…moaning in french? ain’t it interesting, i always thought french was the most erotic language…but i do too wanted to see Tina’s reaction and thought to the news…hopefully next chapter (but i’m still wanna let you know, i’m only reading because of your writing, even though i seem to give up on tibette myself with each episode)…helena said i love you and bette smiled, does it mean she’s falling in love as well? anyway, is there any chance for more smippets of bliss?

    7. I don’t know French so don’t look for any critiques of your phrasings from moi. I do however, know a darn good chapter when I read one and this is it! “I love you” – holy mother of the goddess and whatever hand she dials the missing cell phone with! Whew! Big step there, Helena, but not at all surprising, I’ve felt that peeking around the corner for some time now… Man can you write a scene – NC17 or otherwise!! I revoke my previous comments about Tina’s reaction, I don’t care one way or the other… I just want Bette to get some more love… and I don’t mean the NC17 type. I mean I do, I just mean love – in the love-love sense… See why I don’t speak French, I can barely manage English. JKS – keep it up, please. So so so good.

    9. JKS ~ What a great chapter! To hear Helena express her feelings for Bette (outloud) certainly takes their relationship to a different level. I just hope that Tina doesn’t make Bette feel guilty when they finally have their discussion. Make Bette be strong and make Tina be the one full of regret.

    10. I really expected Tina to come storming in, using her spare key. This was a peaceful, delightful chapter. Seems the dragon has a soft side and a soft sport for Ms. Porter. Bette is wise to wait for her own declaration. That breakfast tomorrow should be a doozy. I wonder if Tina will have any regrets? Thanks!

    14. I thought Tina would break in before their doing somethin’ somethin’. It seems she’s more calm than me. Thanks for the new chapter. Please update again in no time. =)

    16. I used to be fluent in French, but given the circumstances, I doubt I be overly talkative even in English. My verbalizations tend to go rather primitive at times like that. So Helena loves Bette and Bette isn’t freaking at the news. Interesting. As I’m sure the talk Bette and Tina will be having. Can’t wait.

    17. Hmmm, I too think this is the calm before the storm. But who knows how you will write Bette and Tina’s conversation?! Perhaps the storm will just blow over without much damage. Afterall, Tina can’t really blame Bette this time around… Ok, I won’t get ahead of myself or your story for that matter. This is your story to write and I’ll be happy to take it however it comes. Thanks, swimmie.

    18. “The task at hand” indeed. Handle your business, Bette! I’m sure Tina didn’t answer the phone when Bette called because she had fainted from seeing Bette and Helena on TV. Ooh, Tina is gonna catch a fit when she’s finally face-to-face with Bette…and I’m looking forward to it! Nothing humbles a person like not being in the know. I hope when Tina asks Bette outright if she’s sleeping with Helena, Bette looks her in the eyes and says, “Damn right I am and it’s been fucking fantastic! Literally.” However, memo to Bette: if Tina’s rage gets out of control, just run and don’t look back…it’ll only slow you down…and take off your heels….you’ll replace them with the loot from your new and fancy job. Please, please , please post THE chapter VERY soon JKS. I have beer chilling and popcorn waiting.

    20. is it drama next chapter – poor Bette doesn’t know what shjes walking inTo does she. I’m perversely looking forward to Tina letting rip – I bet the embarassment of all their friends seeing it live on TV will fire her up like an LA Wildfire – hot, vicious and destructive.

    23. This is an absolutely brilliant story! Wouldn’t it be a nice suprise for Tina to comfront them at Helena’s house. Then, perhaps, Bette will be forced to vocalize her feelings for Helena? Please post again soon :)

    24. Hi FIns, thanks for the hot chapter…looking forward to the update. I was half expecting Tina to call looking for Bette under the pretense of an “emergency”.

    26. All kinds of stuff is going to hit the fan,when Bette start to tell Tina about Helena. I do like Helena and Bette together,If they can be true to each other. Tina still is going to come out the loser in this, Sometime what you ask for and you get it,its a bitter Pill to take. and it will be bitter for Tina. thanks

    28. Nice to see Bette having a good time while she still can……b/c when she gets back home all hell is gonna break loose. And Helena dropped the L bomb already, then again I’d probably be madly in love w/ Bette after 5 minutes so i gues it is to be expected. ost soon. I know the group reaction has to be coming in a chapter soon, can’t wait.

    29. Hot as ever…lol… as only you can make these 2 sizzle,So Helena Loves Bette…and who wouldnt,But im glad Bettes taking her time responding to that…so bring on the drama…looking forward to all the reactions ….

    30. Geez JKS, I thought you would never post!!! I haven’t figured out yet if getting two chapters last weekend was worth having to wait ALL WEEK for the next chapter!!!! LOL So, am I the only one who is worried that Bette smirked when Helena said I love you? She didn’t smile…she smirked. Then again, maybe I am reading WAY too much into one little word…God, I hope so. Thanks!

    41. No doubt that they’re hot and sexy when you are the puppeteer. Bette had better enjoy the respite before she goes to talk to Tina, could be rough given that Tina already knows. Thanks for writing.

    42. I really like this story. You make each character full (I have to say in lack of a better word), instead of just mad/just bitter etc. Great writing!

    43. (dont think my comment went thru so am posting another one)always love ur stuff JKS and this one kicked ass as always.but i’m a lil concerned that B didnt feel ready to respond to the L word. oh pls dont let her crush H. Helena’s adorable like this and Bette *sigh* i’d love her more if she didnt leave Helena hanging…

    44. A handful of confused friends and Tina await. Yes, bewilderment wrapped in discomfort…even if they had time to process after the reveal. I think if any anger is simmering, it would be for a presumed ‘predatory’ Helena. I hope we find out soon how it plays out in your head. Thanks!

    45. ah i thought the confrontation would have been in this chapter…oh well next one then :)))lol, no offence, and completely understandablethe french translations came right of babel fish translator right?it’s ok though, would have done the same, heck i know french and even i sometimes use it, but just for the translation, because i know the translation of a whole sentence is sooo wrong (meaning the structure)ah never mind, none will notice :p

    46. little do they know that the merde is about to hit the fan. brilliant as ever JKS – I assume that Tk will have worked herself into a state of self righteous piety – thanks j

    47. Oh Shit!, The calm before the storm? “The silence of the room was interrupted only…” that line absolutely terrified me, I thought Tina busted in. Wonderful story, glad Bette heard Helena, while she pretended to sleep.

    48. Bette needs to be getting a little lovin from somebody, and Helena seems ready to make it happen…this story is very intriguing…can’t wait for the fireworks.

    50. Somehow, with you as the writer, I accept this unlikely but erotic pairing. I am very curious for the next chapter. I want to hear the dialogue between B & T and really know Tina’s thoughts and how Tina is effected by Bette’s coupling. I imagine that she will be hurt and jealous, n’est pas? La langue de France est tres belle.

    52. You have made me so so, so so, so so happy! Long live l’artiste! ( I make up languages I don’t know.) You must be Picasso, ? non? Rodin? Michelangelo? Renoir? Manet? Monet? Matisse? Mary Cassatt? Is that you Leonardo? Whoever?…Thank you for this masterpiece!

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