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Wanted Chapter 18
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What, for posterity? The Great Indiscretion, Bette asked, and then spontaneously named the event.
It would be interesting to see what others saw, thats all, Helena defended her off the cuff remark.
Im sure I can get it, Bette replied. Its our promo tape.
Im sure you two didnt think you were being all that surreptitious, Alice said. But you obviously werent aware enough of the camera either. It might very well be interesting for you to see how blatant you were being.
Get a little play by play, Shane suggested. Know what was really going on, instead of what our perceptions were.
Sorry I suggested it, Helena said.
Were just teasing you, Bette said as she took Helenas hand. Youre going to have to get used to it. She brought Helenas hand up to her mouth and kissed it.
I dont know guys, this is going to take me a while to get used to, Alice waved her hand between the two of them as she shook her head. I mean, you know Im happy for you right, but its still kinda freaking me out a bit.
I think its totally cool, Shane said as she slumped back in her chair. If its working for you, Im on board.
You dont count Shane, youve known for a while already, Alice simultaneously complimented Shanes intuition, and then withdrew permission for its ability to provide Shane with an excuse to accept what she knew.
I dont count because Im in tune with environmental cues? Shane asked.
What I meant was, youve had time to get used to it, Alice said. I just need that acclimatization period as well.
Well, get used to it, Bette said simply. Have you guys seen Kit?
She just went back to her office, she was working the till until the 10 am staff arrived, Alice replied.
Im going to go talk to her for a few minutes, Bette said. Could you order me a spinach and feta omelette? She directed the question to Helena. Oh and a non fat latte.
Sure, Helena replied.
Bette stood from the table and went with her instinct, running her hand over Helenas shoulders as she left.
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Thank you, I just knew that it would be at least Tuesday before you posted. This was a wonderful chapter!
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww SOOO sweet!!!! And funny too “This is our promo tape” LOLL haha
Wow!! That chapter had it all! And, your timing for posting was perfect!! LOL Thanks!
Now, if I don’t see another chapter soon, I’m gonna give you 1 star! Hee hee. I really want to see where this thing with the dragon is going to go and tina’s pov. Have a good weekend. Await your next installment.
i love helbette. dont keep us waiting too long. post again soon. Pleeeeease!
yesssssssssss finally! thats to Bette (for saying THE words) and to you JKS cos i been waiting like mad for my fix of ‘Wanted’! Thanks darl, did u have a good trip?Love how you’ve made this funny too, ‘discovery channel’ heehee.. u gotta continue this *drops to a hushed voice* but keep ’em happy and T-free please! cant wait to see what u have in store for them, thanks Swimmie!
great chapter, jks! poor helena, she was hesitant to be the first one to say those three words… i’m glad kit was the one who “helped” bette say that. very sweet.
tbc?….you are kidding…right? OF COURSE YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!!! I look for this story everyday! These two so need each other. They both have had a steady diet of shit sandwiches, so it is so nice seeing something good happening with them. SO HOT……can’t wait for the next chapter.
I love to see they’re bathed by love. They’re really good match in some sense. Both are very passionate, amorous, romantic, vulnerable, strong outside… I like the pairing a lot.
WOW!!!WOW!!!! great chapter. yes we need more PLEASE and SOON
Famous last words, Bette! Enter the Tina who actually shows Bette that she cares about the dissolution of their relationship. Protect your heart Helena ’cause something wicked this way comes (I could have used that advice re: S3). You most definitely need to continue, JKS. Please post soon.
I love your writing but this Bette & Helena thing not sure of it. Will keep reading though as your are a talented & wonderful writer
run bette, helena is a dragon and a vampire LOL…just kidding…love your writing and still waiting on more Snippets
This story is awesome, I was so happy to see another installment.
So hot! Not to mention: Hee!
swimie..Your writing is un-freakin’-believable. In a good way. You should get 5 stars just for your writing . Forget that you write outstanding NC-17 chapters w/o making them seem tawdry.
This is like a big fat present. Don’t you dare stop. (I mean that in a nice joking way.) I have been more excited about reading your next post than I am about watching the finale. Thank you for sharing your talent and please take that question mark down. It is giving me hives.
JKS! Please! After yet another great chapter I have to see yet another ‘tbc?’. Seriously, its far to coy after the fine character and plot developement you’ve just offered us, spoils the effect. By the way, does anything ever get revealed the way its intended to in this story? The affair’s revealed on TV, Bette’s first declaration of love is a statement to Kit overheard by Helena.
I agree with Clarity. You can not count out Tina just yet. I want Bette to be happy and if that is with Helena for awhile then I can handle it. But as a B/T fan I got to hope that in the backs of Bette’s and Tina’s mind that they know that they are not finished yet. I hate to see Helena hurt, but Bette belongs with her first love Tina.
Another fantastic and hot chapter. TBC?–you just testing us to see if we are paying attention and yes we are, so please continue.
Glad Bette’s happy. Hope Tina’s not.
thanks 4 posting again….pls continue…love the storyline…..
oooh, to be continued or not to be? you could easily leave off here, helebette happy in their togetherness for the rest of their lives, for all we know. or you could widen the subtle cracks in the veneer of a perfect relationship. as my nonna would, say sup’a to you, but i think you know exactly where the challenge is…
Trust you enjoyed your time away. Thanks for this, and hopefully, more to come.
““I’m feeling more loved than I’ve felt in a long time,†Bette said….Good for Bette! She needs this. Let the healing continue! Thanks!
Wow, Bette’s already in love….
You’re so damn good, Swim! I loved it, loved it, loved it. Thanks.
Tina just lost the best of both world.Really dont want Tina to be unhappy.just like a two ton truck hit her and she know that she lost. Glad that Helena hear Bette confess to Kit that she loved her. Glad that Bette will be happy for a loooooong time. thanks
Bette and Helena tell each other that they love each other, thats sweet and cute. Tina lost her love and the love of her life. Ok post soon please, thanks!
This is the first fanfiction I’ve ever read. And I read all 18 Chapters in one setting — I couldn’t stop! If this is how good other stories are by you and other authors, I have to say, I just didn’t realized what I’d been missing by not reading. The story is INCREDIBLE and I hope it continues. I’m hooked!!
“…it’s still kinda freaking me out a bit.†That sums it up for me, but I still love your story!!
This post was definitely worth the wait! Too bad TLW doesn’t have you as a writer.
Super story telling as usual – thank you for your time.
Yay! New love for Bette, too bad she isn’t quite over Tina yet though. I am enjoying this more and more and more…please.
I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! we have evidence now, al and them have the confession, and i just wanted to say that i knew the spoilers would hint to a “getting together” w the hotness that is helena, and the hotness that is bette………let us pray that IC gets this one right!!!!! (by the way : bringing l word reality back, where are helena’s kids @ ? or are they at summer camp during this time?)
JKS … once again a gem of a chapter. The sudden unintended revelations [as pointed out by funnyone] are a wonderful continuation of the entire premise of this story… you just never know what is going to happen in life. Happiness is sometimes an unexpected revelation from an unexpected source.
will someone please upload the video of bette and helena at the art thing…lol..i love this story, i’m sorry some psycho rated a 1, you know that means nothing. your story rocks and everone knows it!! more please ;]
Loved it, I like this Helena better if only RS could show these emotions. Anyway JKS Thanks for the storie and please please continue, I know that it may look too quick for Bette to be in love, but heck this is fandom it can happen. Can I make a request, please let Tina see the love between Helena and Bette, and let it hurt… sorry its just a reaction to the Season 3 s/l. Thanks again
this was one fanfic relation i was waiting for a longgg time and you really made it realistic you’re a great writer i cant wait te read more!
Kuddos swimmie! I am so in to reading happy stories with the way season 3 has gone – and yours are certainly up at the top of my list. Love the way you portray these 2 realizing their emotions and love the supporting cast of characters and their take on the situation as well. You know very well that I, as well as many others, WANT you to continue on with this story!!!
I’m so happy to have you back, I was beginning to get worried. What a chapter this was, like Seahurst said “That chapter had it all” and then some, so amazing and wonderful – thank you :o)) I think it’s a bit early for Bette to know/realise that she loves Helena, but I love it anyway. When will Tina show up at the Planet to see the love birds – that will get very interesting LOL…..please don’t wait that long to post again.
This was great….ok not the way Bette wanted Helena to hear that she loved her …but coulda been worse, at least she heard it and not just Kits part…Loved the Discovery Channel reference..very funny…love the whole story..
Yippee! I’m totally digging the attentive & caring side of Helena. “Helena released Bette’s hand as she reached for her keys to open the front door. She reached back to take Bette’s hand again as she stepped inside.†Primo first sentence which set the pace for the entire chapter. I’m curious where you’re taking us, but absolutely love where we’ve been. Hope Bette’s bout with happiness continues. You probably tire of me saying this, but just in case you forgot: You SO rock.
I so love these two together, the way you write them…it seems almost too perfect, like there is some black clould waiting on the horizon to burst into showers….pls pls I like staying in this state of bliss…at least for a while…TKS!!!
I just read this whole story and it’s so good it hurts, lol. This is with out a doubt the best HelBette story I’ve read so far. I can’t wait for more.
Oh My GOD!Swimmie, this is just another fabtastic and superb edition to Helebette – Please keep ’em coming and dont deprive us of your too long at a time.Your just wicked Swimmie – top chick!