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We all make mistakes ch.13
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Alice placed her fingers under Dana’s chin and lifted her head so as she was looking straight at her, “I understand what your saying baby but that makes me worry more as I think as soon as anything big or bad happens your just going to bolt. I really cant handle that…” Alice moved her hand from Dana’s chin and dropped her own head as her eyes watered. “…I think… maybe we should… should take a break.”
Dana started to cry, “Al, please don’t do this…I cant… I cant live without you.”
“Please…” Dana repeated as Alice turned her back eyes filled with tears and walked into her apartment.
“Alice don’t do this I love you!” Dana shouted as the shut slowly.
On either side of the door both girl leaned against it and slid down it crying. Neither wanted what had just happened but Alice in her heart new that Dana needed to see what she had so as she wouldn’t run at every little hurdle.
As the tears subsided Dana looked at her phone to see what time it was when she realized that it 4.15 which meant that they had broke up at around 4am. That time was meant to be remembered as one of the happiest in Dana’s life but now she looked at it and it just made her cry thinking how confused but happy she was when Alice turned up at her door step. Now when she turned up on Alice’s doorstep things did not go the way she had hoped.
Not long after Dana left there was a knock at Alice’s door.
“Dana please don’t make this harder than it is, I still love you but I need time and so do you.”
“excuse me, Ms Pieszecki, Its officer Green could you please open the door.”
Alice looked through the peep hole and opened the door, her eyes still red raw from crying.
“What is it?” Alice ask worried, “Is it Dana? Is she okay?”
“Calm down maam, its about a Mr. William Parker.”
Dana had wasted no time, if Alice didn’t want her she wasn’t going to be there, she drove straight to the airport and was on the first flight to England. She didn’t even bother going home first to get anything, she left her car at the airport and called Shane and let her know what had happened and ask her to get her car. Shane tried to convince her to let Alice know what was going on but Dana knew Alice wouldn’t answer if she called and said she would when she gets to England.
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Speaking of the devil (yesterday to MaGoose), and here you are. We were all thinking of you! Glad to see you finding the time to write again. Don’t worry about the length. Any update is more than welcome. I must admit that I have missed you stories. Back to this, would S be in trouble because of Will. That will not be good. Fine, I can live with the separation for now, but don’t let it go way out of hand. I swear these 2 could be really dense. Maybe Yoda would step in again. Really happy for your return. Thanks nbd14!!!
Welcome back,nbd14! Great chapter. I wondered what happened with Will. Dang, Alice and Dana need to get past this impass. Dana thinking running to England is an option will not do much to convince Alice of her intentions. Update when you can — I know we all have other commitments that come before fan fiction (stupid other commitments…). We’ll be here when you do. Thanks so much!!