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We all make mistakes ch.2
“Alice there is no one in this world I would consider better than you. Cant you give me the chance to make up for breaking your heart? I will never forgive myself for what I have done and put you through but if you will give me a chance I will spend the rest of our lives making it up to you. I love you more than anything you name it and I will do it to even help towards you coming back to me.”
“its not that easy Dane you cant just promise al this and expect me to come running it doesn’t work like that. Im sorry I have to go…”
Alice then went walking out of the fair with tears running down her face. She couldn’t contemplate what had just happened between her and Dana. Meanwhile Dana was still sat on the bench, she decided it was best to give Alice time to think. She couldn’t help but worry that she had just made a huge mistake, she wanted Alice back more than anything, today had just proved to her what she had been feeling since leaving alice but since she hadn’t been with her she could control what she felt. What was making her doubt what she had done was that if alice didn’t take her back had she lost her best friend for the second time in the one year?
Alice decided to take a walk along the beach to clear her head and figure out what to do. She still had the teddy bear in her arms which Dana had spend double what the bear was worth just because she knew how much Alice loved to win. It actually helped her as she used the stuffed toy to talk to. Alice wasn’t someone who spoke of her feelings opening but as the bear couldn’t answer she thought that it might make it more clear for her to speak her feelings aloud rather than keep them in.
Alice started talking to the teddy as if it were human, “I love Dana so much, more than she knows, I do really want to get back with her but I cant help but worry that she will just do exactly what she done last time and it scares the shit out of me. Do you no what im saying Norris?”
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(38 votes, average: 3.32 out of 5)
I’m liking it. When do i get the next chapter?
Yeesh. I mean, I’m all for a reconciliation, but this is WAY too fast to be healthy for either of them. I had hoped Will might point Alice in the right direction on that…maybe Helena can talk some sense into her. And please, please, please take this grammatical advice if none other: no = negative. know = knowing something. Writing “I no” doesn’t make any sense whatsoever! I still heart this despite that, though.
Love this story. I especially loved this line: “Will you please let me love you the way you deserve to be loved?” How could Alice say no? I am a bit concerned about the surprise, but, I’m hooked and in this for the ride. Thanks for the quick post!
muted i do KNOW what they mean lol its just when im like on a roll i get a bit carried away and totally forget!lol i will make sure in future to fix all my no’s and knows!lol and some day you will read through it and there will be no more grammar mistakes if possible!haha and you will be proud!lol