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We all make mistakes ch.9
Alice nodded her head so Dana wrapped her up in a hug and wasn’t intending on letting go anytime soon. Both girls were crying their eyes out with Dana’s arms wrapped around the writer who could barely hold herself up. They sat there on the ground sobbing for the best part of three hours, it had finally hit Alice that their baby was gone and she just cried and cried. Dana had cried about it and felt that she was slowly getting back to herself and forgetting the heartache, but the minute she saw Alice like this all her feelings of hurt came rushing back not just for the baby but the pain her girlfriend was suffering.
Dana stopped crying but was still comforting her broken girlfriend.
“hey Al I think that it would be a good idea for me to call Dr Green and get us booked in with a psychologist as soon as we can.”
Alice looked at Dana and tried to put on a half smile. All Dana could see when she looked in the blonds eyes was sadness and it broke her heart that she couldn’t do anything to fix it.
“Do you really believe that it wasn’t my fault?” Alice ask wiping the tears from her red puffy eyes.
“I know it wasn’t your fault, you couldn’t have done anything to prevent what happened. I need you to believe what I am telling you… would I ever lie to you?” Dana questioned her girlfriend
“no.” Alice sniffled
“Well then believe me when I say that you are not responsible, there was nothing you could have done.”
“Dane ive really missed you, im sorry about the way I treated you, but I felt like you blamed me and you would hate me for what happened.” Alice’s tears started again
Dana kissed Alice on the forehead as she used her thumbs to wipe the tears from Alice’s face.
“Please don’t cry Al, I cant stand to see you cry because when you cry it means your hurting and it breaks my heart when I see you like this.”
Alice sniffed and tried to stop herself from crying.
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(15 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
OMG that would have brought tears to a glass eye, but I did enjoy it, sorry for the lack of comments on my part but believe me I have been here reading them PPS xx
That was a nicely written albeit sad chapter. However it was appropriate to include a period of mourning for the baby. Now I feel bad for jumping to the next step prematurely. Hhmmm…I’m all contemplative now. It seems though, that I have much to look forward to…
I just wanted to clarify that the ‘Techie’ posting on this story is not me. I’ve been known by that nickname on most of the L Word sites for several years now. It seems I may have a doppelganger…or not!