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We all need friends around us…Final chapter
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Previously…. “Tina?”
There was no movement from the blonde, indicating she had heard her.
“Tina? Are you okay?”
Chapter 2
Turning her head slowly, Tina finally allowed the quiet, tentative voice to penetrate her spinning thoughts. “Hmmm?”
Jenny hesitantly reached out, and gently laid the palm of her hand on Tina’s upper arm. “I’m sorry Tina,” she whispered. “I heard you crying, and just wanted to make sure you were okay.”
Embarrassed, Tina looked down at her hands, and then back up, staring into surprisingly warm, and sympathetic grey eyes. “No, I’m sorry.” She attempted a reassuring smile, and pointed back towards the house with her head. “It’s just hard some times.”
Running her hand down Tina’s arm, Jenny took hold of her neighbors hand, still damp from wiping tears, and gave it a gentle squeeze. “Yeah…I’m sure it is.” She looked back into the bedroom window, noticing the suitcases.
“Do you need some help?”
Staring into the pool, with tears flowing freely, Tina managed to whisper, “No…there’s nothing left for me in there.”
Jenny knew that Tina was in no shape to drive. Knew that Tina was not really in her own head at the moment…that she was just drowning in excruciating pain. God…she didn’t know what to do to help this woman! ‘Is this what it was like for Tim?’ she wondered. Once again, guilt flooded her body, as she thought back to the look that had been on Tim’s face, as he stood in the doorway of the garage…his eyes never leaving Jenny as Marina proudly grabbed her shirt, and with her back straight, and her head held high, walked out of the garage. She never meant to hurt the man she thought she had been in love with…never meant to break his heart.
“Oh God, I am so sorry.”
“Thanks…but you don’t need to apologize.”
“Hmmm..what?” Jenny blinked her eyes, not realizing that she had spoken her apology to Tim out loud.
“I said, you don’t need to apologize.” Tina’s voice cracked. “It’s over. There’s nothing anyone can do about that.”
Jenny didn’t know what to say. Still sitting in her own guilt, she asked Tina, “Would you like a cup of tea?”
Looking up into those beautiful grey eyes, knowing the gesture was genuine, all Tina could think about was getting back to the guest house, so she could mourn the loss of her relationship in private.
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You met that challenge for an odd pairing with your usual incredible vision and language. think of the stink this would have made on the boards if IC had played it as you’ve written it. WOW.
*Shudders* I’m sorry Sea, I couldn’t make myself get through it! It’s you though so I know you did a fantastic job anyway. Anyone have a Men in Black memory flashy stick thingy? Hehe
P.S. – I give you major credit for having the courage to even attempt this! ;)
No no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no, but wonderfully written as always
oookkkkaaaaaayyyy….this was REALLY weird! i guess the pairing does make sense though. jenny felt that she had to bring pleasure and get rid of the pain for tina b/c she couldn’t for tim.
I wish i had read the title for this chapter before I read it, because I would not have read it and going to bed now with nightmare’s Cheers
I love it! I was howling… and i think…yeah, you should keep on going! YEAH!! Oui la belle.. you should…~WG~
well, this was unexpected but since it’s for the challenge…it was masterfully done though, and i had a feeling that if you would continue with that story, that would be the only encounter they had…in my perfect world Bette and Tina belong together no matter what…your writing is excellent….the most weird pairing though would be Kit and Bette LOL…really weird, perverted and weird…do we have to vote for the challenge? seems like there’s some kind of competition is going on, my vote is for you then
I am typing this with my blood, my red dripping blood that pouring over the keys as I scream, “No, No, No No!” But, you did handle the impossible beautifully. P.S.: I hope Bette did not hear the moans from next door. She might just stay in that pool and sink to the bottom. Thanks!
IS pouring. IS pouring. This pairing made me dyslectic and dyspeptic! But, you wrote it well…
I feel “disloyal” to you Seahurst, but I cannot make myself read this. I tried. I know writing this must be hard for you. Reading this is impossible for me. So sorry.
Very nice, Seahurst. You made an unlikely pairing believable. I enjoyed your take on these two.
I could not finish it that was just not right please don’t make me hunt you down
Thanks for taking the time to think beyond the usual parameters of our experience. You did a great job of explaining why you thought this pairing might take place, but I felt that you were a little reticent about exploring it too much…as though you were uncomfortable with it on some level. Good idea though! I hope you do more of the same in the future. It will help you grow as a writer.
OK you met your challenge. Now please can you get back to your real story about our B&T.
That was painful…I think I need a drink..lol
LOL I love this! You made them near perfect for each other, very nicely done. The writing is excellent and believable, makes me root for them.
I just loathe Jenny. There’s an L word for you. Anyway, you’re such a great writer that I forgive you.
Hee hee. I loved it. You definitely met my challenge. I just love weird, unexpected pairings. I noticed that you pointed out that it didn’t seem as weird after you wrote it. That usually seems to be how it works, and the same goes for after you read it. It seems weird at first, but then once you read or write a story like this, suddenly it almost makes sense. Did that make any sense? LOL.Anyways, great job!
Seahurst, I love to read anything you write. Somehow you made this unlikely pairing work. I am glad to see though that they both know that it is a one shot deal! I have been re reading some of your other stories recently and am glad to see that you will be continuing the seashell story….the things we do to get thru the off season!
Gees, still feel weird. Can’t give our lovely Tee to Jenny… But great try.
As always, you go where no one has gone before!!!
Alice and Tonya would been weird. Tina and Jenny That was a nightmare, Good job tho. thanks
Seahurst – leave it to you to let us see yet another side of our Jenny, oh my!
I think you can put Jenny with anyone and it would be weird…It was realy hard to picture them two together but your writting is always worth a read…Now back to the other story.
It works only because YOU made it work. Very nice job, you are just so talented. Sea, I don’t know what you do for a living, but if it’s not writing, you are definitely missing your calling. As weird as Jenny is, you made us feel every movement, hand gesture, squeal that she would make, I could totally picture it. AND THAT IS TALENT.
wow.
sea…I couldn’t even get through the whole thing. I know the writing was most likely wonderful..but Jenny and Tina. Credit, where credit is due,…you are a brave soul and I adore you for that. Please, please don’t do this again. albeez..you read this yet…greenie even wants alcohol.
i have read everything u have written and have laughed and cried in silence but now i must speak please don’t ever go ther again! please please don’t stop writting.
A very enjoyable read, but I must say, I don’t necesarily see the pairing. Thanks for the story…
*chucks memory wiper over to TBS* LOL that was weird! excellently done tho :)
Shit this is sad and but like it!
Hey Seahurst – you are so brave and talented, that you can pull something weird like this off :o)) And I have to say – you really met that challenge for an odd pairing with style and grace. I can never disown you or your wonderful story about our seashell-girls, so please post soon….
creeeeepy *shudders and shakes like a dog ridding itself of the water imbedded in it’s fur* keep writing. I’ll be reading.
SEA…..you are living proof that practice makes perfect. You took on the challange and mastered it with two chapters. Yes, this is an odd pairing but you truly made it believable and right. You are inspirations for me to live my life courageously and pursue things that might change people’s thoughts of me. you are awesome girl and I look forward to future writings. Love ya always!
“You know, a cup of tea does sound nice.” Um please add some vodka to mine cause I know I didn’t just read what I thought I did. Sea, that was pretty gutsy of you wouldn’t you say? Thank God Tina didn’t get sucked up into Jenny’s circus story or something. ;) On another note, I absolutely loved it. What ingenuity and valiance you have. Stupendous!
Nope I couldnt finish this, love your writing, but Jenny and Tina I cant read about them fucking why bette dying to not live…but im sure it turn out beautiful as I got at least to the 2nd page.