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Well, Maybe – Chapter 5
“Hi Alice, uhh… I know you don’t want to see me right now but I just want to apologise about the last night… I’m sorry, I really am. I didn’t mean to push you…” Dana mumbled and forced a little smile as Alice struck dumb at the unexpected apology. Alice tried to cohering her thoughts so she could at least say something, but it was too hard. Lucky enough, Dana continued her words. “And… I know I should stop wasting your time like this but… actually there’s one thing more I want to make clear. Shit, I mean… I want to say that it was not mistake…at all… what I did to you… It’s not what “just” happened. I kissed you because I wanted, and I’m sorry if that makes you thought that I took advantage of you. Errm, I think that’s… Okay, I just want you to know that. Sorry…” Dana said quickly. It seemed like there’s more she’d like to say, but she just turned her back to leave.
“Wait! Apology not accepted yet! You didn’t hear my answer.” Though Dana expected she’d hear some harsh things, she stopped anyway. Just the fact that she could hear Alice again made her heart pounding. She turned to Alice, and Alice stepped up to Dana so they could look into their eyes. “If you’re gonna apologise to women, you should show them how much sorry you are, because they wanna see, not hear.” Dana looked confused. She had no idea what Alice was saying or trying. “You kissed me last night because you wanted, but you’re not kissing me now. Does that mean that you don’t want to kiss me right now? That’s so rude, Dana. If you’re sorry about this, then show me how much you are.”
Dana was dumbfounded at the statement, but it was all what she needed to hear anyway. She looked into Alice’s deep brown eyes and pressed her lips roughly without hesitation. They held each other instinctively as they deepened the kiss. After good five minutes, they parted from each other reluctantly only because they felt someone staring at them. “Shit, Helena, sorry!” Alice blushed and grabbed her things in a flurry. “It’s #4, over there.” As Alice rummaged for her key, Dana looked at her nervously. “Uhh, Alice, it’s not locked, umm… actually my friend’s here. I asked her to come with me… I’m sorry if…” Alice laughed as she hugged Dana. “It’s okay, just don’t tell me it’s your unforgettable ex.”
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(23 votes, average: 3.91 out of 5)
Sorry to hear that you have a serious task ahead of you. Good luck with your paper. This was a fun chapter to read. I lol at A swearing upon seeing D standing in front of her door. Excellent work with D stuttering through her entire speech. I was a little surprised with A’s reaction. But I am sure that with the help of Helena and Shane, A & D would slowly figure things out. Thank you very much and Happy New Year!
Good luck with the paper I’m studying econ as well and i think this whole financial crisis occurred to make assignments more difficult for us LOL but I’m on holidays till march so glad. Loved this chapter the alice Dana conversation was cute. Good work
Brilliant update here, So Helena and SHane have met previously not in great circumstances but hey they can make up fro that right?Im a little surprised at Alice’s reaction is was a little backwards but hey what can you expect from Al…so lunch hey…So im a little confused why is Helena buying dinner and making it up 2 Shane?I may have got my wires crossed a lil’ but was it Helena that said she crashed into Shane?Just dont want to get the wrong end of the stic at who said what…Keep up the good work.
this story has lots of swearing going on but, i kinda like it..its funny..you’re doing great..keep up the good work. please post soon.
Wow Shane and Helena? Hmm, I never thought of it but now it seems great if they are with each other. And I was a bit surprised at Alice’s reaction too! Can’t wait for the dinner to come. Thanks and PPS!
Hee! I hope you were able to get your paper finished!! BTW: I am happy to hear I was able to help you in some small way. On to the story… The Alice/Helena dynamic is great – too funny how they both reacted to seeing Dana. Also like the Helena/Shane history. I am looking forward to more of this story. Thanks, shanealice!!