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What Are We Doing – Chapter 3-Finale
I whisper to her, “I want you, Bette. All of you.”
Chapter 3
"I want to be the person you think of first thing in the morning and the last person you think of before you lay your head down to sleep. I want to be the only one that puts my hands and mouth on this sexy body of yours.” I begin to gently run my fingers down her neck to the sides of her breasts. As I cup her breasts in my hands I slowly stroke her nipples through her bra. She moans. I am just inches away from her lips as I whisper, “I dream about making you come with my mouth, my fingers. Fucking you until you beg me to stop and then do it all over again. ” Her moans are getting louder as she listens to my words. My fingers are still torturing her breasts through her bra. She licks her lips and I want to slip my tongue back into her mouth but instead I move past her lips and put my mouth next to her ear as I whisper, “I’ve never wanted to fuck you as much as I did just now on this bed.” Her breathing is irregular as I start nibbling on her ear. “You feel so good.” I slip my hands under her bra and begin to roll her nipples between by fingertips. She gasps. “Mmm, I love the way you respond to my touch. Your breasts are perfect, baby. The way they fit in my hands and taste on my tongue. God, it’s like heaven.” She is now whimpering with need. I stop my assault on her ear and release her breasts. I pull her bra back in its place. I pull my face back to look at her.
“T” she begs….
I’m drunk with Bette Porter desire and need to put distance between us. “Sorry. I’m sorry….so sorry, Babe.” I’m stumbling over my words as I take several steps away from her. “ I know we can’t but when I’m…..” My words trail off as I look into her eyes. They are burning with lust. God! I miss that look. “When what, T?”
I clear my throat. “Bette, when you’re near me, the throb you create between my thighs makes me want to throw caution to the wind and just throw you back on that bed to finish what we started.”
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(33 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
I just read all three chapters, and I don’t want it to end!!
U MUST CON THIS, MUST
As I’ve read each chapter I didn’t have time to comment but now I do. This short story was excellent but please don’t stop now give us another chapter or two to get them together, pretty please. You can do it. Enjoyed it. PPS
There is far too much potential for additional chapters, particularly where they are TOGETHER!!!! YAY! As for your author notes, there is never one standard level of writing no matter where you look; a website, library, book store, etc. Each writer brings their own creative style. If you can weave words into a story, you are a writer period. If you have a following, then you are even more blessed. Never ever put the pen down. Please reconsider doing so, even if you don’t continue with this fic…there are more stories to be told. I’m certain of it. Thanks!
What do you mean finale. Bette still has to “pickup” Angie.
I think you should reconsider and keeping writing this story. It was great.
Oh no you don’t…get back here and finish what you started woman…you left me all worked up. Click…Click..where is it woman????
i think it shouldnt end there….you should continue pretty please with a cherry on top
I sure hope you continue this story with a sequel. Enjoying your writing very much. pps
Oh cool, some adult alone time and just between Bette and Tina. No more jodie or other outside issues.
very nice, i just read all 3 chapters… and i also agree bette should of broke up with joidie first… but now the way i see it… as long as they are together… so… now you know how many pages we have to write to get a few on this site… tell me about it… most of my chapters are no less then 25 pages on my word program… please come back… have a sequel to this…
Please don’t end this story there!! I feel a definite need for a sequel…soon! Please!
Ohhhh GODDDDD that was just so sokin’ HOT! Please please update soon, i can’t take the heat!
We need an epilogue
I hope you are not done with the story. this is good. I want see what happens when Bette stops by to “pick up Angie.” lol
wow..that was really beautiful..but why end it here? please do a sequel..to good
good, very good
***one hand under my chin*** ***the other one in my lap*** ****big smile on my face*** ***memerized*** basically I love it very much lol