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What is love? Chapter 4
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“Maybe that wouldn’t have been so bad,” Tina said quietly.
“Tina, I can see how you could be infatuated,” Val said, more in control of herself. She thought the world of Tina and was afraid of her getting involved with Bette Porter.
“You must be like Bette,” Tina said as Val met her eyes. “You think I’m a kid instead of a woman. WellI’m a woman and I think that.I’m falling in love with her.”
“You’ve seen her what? Twice? How can you possibly think that you love her?”
Tina thought for a few moments.
“When I touch her, I feel like I’ve been hit by an electrical jolt. I love to see her smile, and laugh. When she talks about art, I want to know more about art. I love the way she drives a car and how she loves food. I love how she moves her hands. I love to see her sip wine and watch her neck as it goes down her throat.”
“That just sounds like sexual desire,” Val observed.
.”Nono. I love the way she listens to me so carefully. She smiles at all the right spots; she frowns at all the right spots; she asks questions at all the right spots; she gives me encouraging looks to continue. When I’m in a room with her, nobody else exists.”
“I believe that if she took me in her arms, I would feel safe forever,” Tina concluded.
Val’s mouth had dropped slightly open listening to Tina. She closed her mouth, sighed and was quiet. She realized she had just heard a pretty good definition of love.
“What should I do?” Tina asked.
“Stay away from her,” Val counseled wearily. “You’ll be so out of your league.”
Tina shook her head. She was disconcerted that Val was so opposed to Bette. And, truthfully, she was somewhat bothered by the fact that Bette was a player. Bette had her pick of gorgeous, experienced woman. And Tina felt she might be out of her league.
“What do you want to do?” asked Val.
“I want to have a relationship with her.”
“Bette Porter doesn’t do relationships,” Val warned. Listen to me, listen to me, she thought.
“What do you mean–she doesn’t do relationships?”
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Really like the way this story is going. Look forward to you next post
this is going really great: witty dialogues, interesting turns and sweet beginnings of love. yes this is a swell job. thanks.
Love the update. They’re both hot for each other. Love it, Alice is pushing one way, while Val is pulling the other. Please could everyone just let our girls do they’re thing, especially IC, she seems to want to mess with them. Come on, Bette goes to Milk, Tina goes with Val, they run into each other, and latter Gillian. Don’t know where you are in relationship to the storm, but be careful and be safe.
We live on the highest part in Dallas County,we might get rain and wind. but no high water. Love where you are going with this. My nickle is on Tina. More than a one nighhter for her… thanks
Did I already say that I love this story? I love it! Great new fresh perspective. Keep it coming. But don’t break Tina’s heart in the process.
really interesting..cant wait to see what Bette is going to do..i just want she do not break Tinas heart maybe Bette fall for her and Tina kick her ass..lol..serious no let then know wach other better and see what happpen next..great chapter post soon thanks
“fuck, i kissed her back. fuck!” well shit porter, who wouldnt. its tina for fucks sake.
“i couldnt believe that someone that sharp was with eric.” loved that.
“your fortunate that she didnt have sex with you in the car….Maybe that wouldnt have been so bad.” well no, not too bad. a train wreak is bad. sex is good.
“theres probably a bette alert.” ROFLMAO
“well at elast you wont get pregnant.” ahahaha
“think of tina when youre having sex with gillian. well its works for me.” oh god, too funny.
cant wait to see where this goes. tina seems quite determined in what she wants. ms. porter better be on her toes. keep it coming.
this tory is kick ass
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lol yeah i bet i will but i think bette needs to hurry up!!! lol omgoodness pleease bette faster faster awww thats so sweet and tina and bette are in love so true tina embraces it bette denys it lol wel please post more soon thanx byeness<33892789
awesome update!
bette porter is in denial, i think in this story its the age factor thats tagging at bette.
hey, I’m loving this story! There’s enough angst in the world these days.
1st…..brb
“…may lose electricity for a while.”
Good Luck & Stay safe, P!
Bette had closed Tina’s car door firmly, but not before she made sure that Tina was completely inside the car and would not be hurt by the door. Tina noticed this.
We all know Bette’s attention to detail….or does that hold true in this story since everyone seems to be doing the opposite of what we have come to expect?
“So…did anything happen?” “What do you mean?” snapped Bette instantly. So, Alice thought, something did happen.
I love how the guilty respond! They snap at the drop of a dime!
It was like an innocent virgin telling her, “I met this great guy named Don Juan.”
ROFLMAO!!
She was so caring about not slamming the car door and hurting me.”
“So she cares about you because she didn’t want to fracture your leg?”
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh….my sides are aching!!
Ok, I was hoping this would drag out for a minute. I didn’t expect them to come to their realizations so soon.
Please post again soon. If your electricity will allow it.
Praying that the storm does not harm you and yours.
I love, I love it, and how the worm does turn. Bette “the Great” Porter has been struck by cupid’s bold arrow and doesn’t quite know it. It will take her to her knees when she does realize it and I want to see how she reacts. Post soon please, if you can.
you got me.definitely. this is one hell of a great post!!!!!!!!
Damn this story is awesome and can’t wait to see what’s next, thanks!
OH shizNIT! Bette sooooo has the hots for Tina! Tee hee! You’ve definitely have me hooked, post soon, real soon! Thanks for a great story!