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    What is love? – Chapter 40

    Story written on December 6, 2005 by pancha305.
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    Author Notes:

    Bette and Tina’s Hawaiian honeymoon comes to an end while they continue to discover new things about the other. Also…this story comes to an end with this chapter.

     

    “Give me that tongue,” Bette whispered.

     

    “Maybe,” Tina said coyly.

     

    “Hmmm.”  Bette licked several of her fingers and then began to tease Tina by lightly touching and rubbing her nipples and then withdrawing.  Tina arched her back, but Bette’s hand was already gone.  After a little of this, Tina took Bette’s head and drew it toward her face and they began to kiss again.  This time Tina gave her wife what she wanted and Bette began to suck gently on Tina’s tongue.

     

    Bette caressed her ***** while they kissed and as Tina’s breathing grew stronger and more ragged, Bette moved between her legs. Bette’s gentle rubbing of her slippery wife caused Tina’s hips to begin to gyrate and lurch, very powerfully-much more powerfully than Bette had ever seen.  Bette actually thought that Tina had lost control.  So Bette stopped.

     

    From the beginning of their relationship Bette had thought of Tina as somewhat fragile.  Although she had made love to her vigorously, she had never been nearly as dynamic as she could have. Tonight Bette had passed that invisible boundary she had set for herself and it seemed too much for Tina.  So Bette stopped.

     

    “Bette,” Tina gasped, with a wild look on her face, “why did you stop?”

     

    “I thought you were in trouble.”

     

    “No.  Please. Don’t be soft.” Tina said, reaching for Bette.

     

    So Bette resumed her powerful lovemaking, until Tina began to buck extremely hard, almost violently.  Bette swallowed and entered Tina harder than she ever had before and they thrust forcefully into each other…over and over.  Finally Tina climaxed powerfully.

     

    “Bette…Bette….Bette…Bettttttttte,” she screamed, not bothering to tone down her shouts because she knew nobody could hear them.  Bette had cried out, too, as she climaxed but her cry was drowned out by Tina.

     

    Often after they made love, they cooled down in each other’s arms and talked a little.  But not tonight.  They were both so spent that they lay on their backs and quickly went to sleep.  Before they slept, however, Bette rested her hand softly on Tina’s abdomen.

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    Maui – the fourth day

     

    “Get up.  Get up,” Bette ordered as she turned off the alarm and rolled out of bed.  This morning they had planned to observe the magnificent sunrise over the Haleakala volcano.

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    1. I’ve really enjoyed your take on the beginning of B&T. Really, this story was more about the evolution of Bette as a loving partner. We watched her go from not giving a damn about relationships to at least liking Tina but remaining clueless to outwardly loving her completely. If you were to write a sequel or at least another B&T story, I’d like to see an evolution of Tina. It can be light and fluffy or dark and cold just as long as we get to see that change. Best wishes to you. :D

    2. Thank you soooo much for sharing such a wonderful story with us. Although I’m not yet satisfied with the length of the story, I know ‘endless’ is not applied to most fantastic things. So what I could do here is to thank you again and again.BTW, I’ve made an electric version of your story so that I could read it more conveniently at any time. I’d like to borrow that to make a gift of it to you, as my sincere thanks and respect to you. Just give me your email address, I’ll send it to you. ;)

    3. im so happy that im sad..why that story ends here???? iw ant more and more…that was a really grea story Pancha cant wait to see the next one.. thanks for share your tallent with us :o)

    8. this was truely a story of what love is and how it grows to something wonderful. li really enjoyed your story ‘i do hope you will write another sometime-will be watching . happy holidays to you

    14. Aww thanks for extending your story for us, pancha. I hope you know how much we appreciate you sharing your talents with us. I’m crossing my fingers that you’ll come back to us soon with a new story. Until then, please know that you will be sorely missed. Thanks for bringing a little happiness into each of our lives with your story. :)

    15. I really appreciate all your remarks. Glad you’re pleased I wrote the Hawaii chapters. Lamentimini – Interesting thought on Tina. You’re right in that I wrote more about Bette, partially because she had more of a struggle addressing her feelings, but also because I’m more like her than I’m like Tina. I’ll think about your suggestion. Maybe I can do something like you suggested.

    16. Thankyou so much for shareing your story and your talent with us i didnt comment on every chapter but read all of them its a beautiful story, romantic sexy and really what alot of us need pure escapeism,so truly a big thankyou and i really hope you decide to write again more of this one!!! or awhole different story either way you already have a fanbase here…cya

    17. It’s first time that I’m writting and I have to tell this… I love your post . You are a very good writer and I hope you post really soon… Your store made me feel so good… A really good escape from the real life. Thank you very much !! I’m a big fan of yours now and I’m already miss this post. Post soon!!!!!!!!

    18. Pancha..it was truly a pleasure and honor reading your creative thoughts on the lives of B & T. Thank you so much for sharing your talent…I truly enjoyed this enchanting encounter and look forward to your next. Happy holidays.

    20. pancha…thank you from the bottom of my heart for this wonderful story…i hope you will continue, and i prefer B&T lite, if it matters…i really enjoyed the romantic and fun part of the story and the whole thing in general…please come back soon and happy hollidays to you too…limeric was great and i’m glad it’s not farewell: you need to remember my friend, ‘good bye’ doesn’t always meen ‘end’, I know you must go, but come back tomorrow, and take us to your ‘neverland’ ;)

    23. i would like to see a continuation of this story set 10yrs later bette ,tina and there two kids and bette carring there third child and bette getting ready to deliver. i so much have enjoyed your story.

    24. This will be my first time commenting on this story , which ironically will be the last time until you decide to continue. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this story and it will continue to be one of my favorites. In fact I will probably re-read this story before the new year and thereafter. I do hope you continue to write more stories. I like the drama of stories, so feel free to write a darker version of bette and tina( with a happy ending in mind, I’m a sucker for them). If you do continue this story maybe you could just write snippets of it, make a capter be the beginning and ending. One again, thanks for a wonderful story!!!

    25. Thank you for sharing your story w/us. There is a great tenderness in how the characters treat each other. Of course it is you doing this. I am so happy that your Bette and Tina care truly, deeply and madly about one another. Thanks again and I’ll look for your moniker on the FanFic site.

    26. You are awesome. Loved reading your story and am sadden it has come to a halt, I’m in denial, so I won’t say it has come to an end. Please come back to us soon. It was so neat to see your writing style, dialogue and characters unseed themselves and florish. Please come back soon our hearts will miss the images your words create.

    28. Wonderful story! I have to admit I am one of those “stealth readers”. I would love to say something new after each chapter but I’m just not that creative… otherwise I would be writing the stories and not just reading them :) I can’t wait to read your next story. Just one request: not too much drama! I’m going back to stealth mode :)

    31. pancha..thank you for this wonderful story. It brought smiles to our hearts. I love your writing and I hope you come back to us soon…lite or dark..it doesn’t matter. peace and love to you.

    32. Pancha I have truly enjoyed this story and hate to see it end. If you are listening to us I would truly like to see you continue with this story telling us about their lives, the chldren they will have, who carries the children, maybe both of them will give birth to children and it would be a real stretch and exercise to see Bette pregnant. Although we now know she would know how to act that challenge out since she now has her own child. Still to see the Alpha Bette pregnant would be lovely and watch her turn into a doting overly protective mother. I think you have a lot you could do with it if you decide to continue and please keep it light not necessarily fluffy. But not too much drama please. Thanks again for the story.

    33. Well…thank you so much for sharing such a beautiful story. Funny, sweet, thoughtful and very loving. I’ve enjoyed every chapter and will definately miss your posts.

    35. What a great ending for this great story :) Thanks so much for taking the time to write, so that all of us fan fic obsessed fans can read it. I’ve truely enjoyed your story and would love to see another one from your briliant mind. please please please write again :) much love from San Diego Cali- betteishot. keep writing. I’ll be reading.

    36. *Sigh* It’s too sad that this story has come to an end.. Esp that I don’t really read many fanfics like i used to but I tried my best to catch up with this one whenever i got some free time to read fics, It’s been one of my favourite B&T journeys so thank you for that.. I hope you’ll come back with another story which is as wonderfull as this one.. Good luck in whatever you’ll do next..

    37. Your stories intrigues me.Always. TQ for sharing your side of B&T.Love.It!!Hopefully you will come back fer more?*finger-crossed* Warm wishes from Malaysia – .: wo~wo :.

    38. What an amazing talent you are. I have loved to read each and every one of your chapters. The journey has been like this enchanted vacation and now I must come home. Thanks for the journey and the ride was awesome.

    39. thank you pancha. it was breathtaking this journey you took us on. i have so enjoyed your writing. have a good holiday and be safe. dark or lite, doesnt matter. would love to read anything you write. thanks again for the gift.

    42. Thank you so much for this story of Bette and Tina. I appreciated the quality of your writing so much and your spin on Tina which I think was quite unique and refreshing. I was quite surprised that this story didn’t win an award–it was such a treat to read. After months some of the scenes still play themselves out in my mind. And as I wrote before there was something therapeutic about the sweetness of their interactions. Sometimes after I watch the TV show or read a Bette and Tina story I feel totally bummed, but I was always left with a feeling of delight with your rendition. There’s something to be said for happiness and joy.

    43. Great chapter. Bette and Tina are lovely. Thank you for sharing this story with us, I’m sad to see it ending like this and hpe you will write the new one soon. Thank you!

    44. thank you so much for the nice story. Ive been a reader to this story and so happy from the beginning so hopefully you will make more lovely stories.. thanks again and keep up the good work (philippines)

    47. love this story very much. I read with joy, tears and happy…your writing soooo… beutiful. This is my favorite couples, you wrote about Bette characters very well look like you’re the one. Thank you Pancha. God bless you and your talent.

    48. To my readers I can’t tell a lie.Your comments have oft made me sigh.I so hate to go,But what we all knowIs sometimes we must say “goodbye.”These words have more meaning now than ever before. I am sorry to have discovered this story late. Too late. RIP Pancha. And thank you.

    49. Oh Pancha…I was reading this story again, enjoying it just as much as I did the first time…and the second time I read it. :) And, then I came to your poem…and couldn’t help the tears from falling. My heart aches that your family and friends have to live without your physical presence. My heart aches for the stories you still had to share with us. Although…I have visions of you sitting on a cloud, smiling as you put your story ideas into our heads, all the time allowing us to think we thought of them ourselves! LOL Think fondly of those of us who will always be just a little addicted to our Bette and Tina. You are missed Pancha.

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