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What is love? – Chapter 7
“I’m on my way to pick up Dana and thought I would say hi,” Alice announced.
“OK, hi.”
“Whyuhtwo blankets?”
“I’ll let Tina pick out the one she likes better.”
“The one she likes better?” Alice began laughing, choked out a goodbye, and was still laughing as she went through the front door. Alice shook her head. Bette was a piece of work.
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Tina arrived at Bette’s and they began to carry items to the car. . Bette loaded all the stuff in Tina’s car including the many bottles of beverages. These Bette had put into a rolling piece of luggage which Tina looked at curiously.
Bette had to concentrate on the picnic supplies to keep from staring at Tina who was dressed in long shorts, and a green tank top. Almost every curve worth seeing could be seen beneath Tina’s clothes and they were all worth seeing, Bette thought.
She seemed so casual and cool in her tank top that Bette had no idea that it was about the tenth top she had tried on before settling on one. Tina thought the top looked especially good without a bra and she had noticed at Milk that Bette seemed to like that. She wanted to look sweet, but deadly, and had no idea how much she had succeeded.
They loaded everything into the car and set out for the park. Bette usually preferred to drive, but enjoyed being a passenger this day. It gave her plenty of time to look at Tina.
Al was right. Tina was built just the way she liked.
Tina was sorry she was driving because she couldn’t look at Bette as much as she wanted. She wanted to look atto touchto kissthat naked expanse of abdomen.
It was a little uncomfortable walking through the park because many of the couples there, straight and *****, were making out. Bette found a place somewhat away from all the foreplay going on, and they spread out the blanket, the one that Tina liked better.
Tina seemed so calm and organized that Bette had no idea how much Tina had rushed around to prepare the food. She had run to the store, bought food and run home where she worked feverishly to create wonderful picnic dishes. There was crisp fried chicken, a pasta salad, asparagus spears, cheeses, pickles.
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(133 votes, average: 3.48 out of 5)
hey im first! love your story…post soon!
Can’t wait to see what happens when they walk through the front door. Bet it’ll be hot! Next post please.
Get them in the house…fast! loved the chapter.
Looking up in a dictionary? Hahaha, Little B is just so cute!! I mentioned it before? Never mind. Did I say you are so adorable, pancha? =D
haha, I really think there will be an Alice inside the house.
“Is this a liquid picnic?” asked Alice, looking at all the bottles..lol..serios..you know i want them “doing” and a lot but i hope they have sure about the consequences i dont wanna see Tinas heart broken..ok bring it on next chapter thanks :o)
ok so i loooove this story im so excited and cant wait to see what happens will they continue or will they talk mmhmm who knows lol ok well please post soon thanx byeness<33
Love this Bette seems so unsure of herself. thanks
Great chapter. I love the interaction.
Why stop at the good stuff. I want to see if they will go through with this so please don’t keep us waiting to long.
” Bette had actually asked about her “intentions. ” Wow.
Your Bette is so cute,I bet you are very cute also I love your storie Thanks.
very nice- hope there’s more soon.
Great Story..I really like it…please post soon !!!
I love the direction this story is taking!!! Well crafted so far.
Damn…….this story is good! Post again soon….I need my update fix!
Damn this is awesome and love it. Love what they have right now and let see what they do when they go into the house. Post soon please, thanks!
Please don’t make us wait long
please post soon,,,please post soon!!!!!
Nice place to leave us hanging. This story just keeps getting better!!!