Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, November 11, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    What Matters C.16 – Revelation

     

    You love my daughter? Deciding to cut to the chase and go in for the kill, Mercedes jumped straight onto the topic Shane was expecting and yet dreading at the same time. When Shane continued to stare at the floor, without so much as a sound, Mercedes felt a little anger grow inside of her. But before she could say anything, Shane sat up straight and looked Mercedes straight in the eyes.

     

    With my life.

     

    Shane realized that this was the time to take a stand. To fight for the happiness she had worked so hard for. Whether or not it would be a happy ending, at least she had tried.

     

    Ah Mercedes nodded. She sat back and made herself comfortable, waiting for Shane to continue.

     

    You knew? Shane quivered a little. Mercedes was like an older version of Carmen, and a heavier one. The same jet-black hair that was forcefully straightened, the same intense brown eyes and the same smile. The nose was slightly different; Carmen must have gotten hers from her father. Inside the cool piercing eyes lay a spark of fire, not unlike that of Carmens when she was deep in thought. It seemed almost impossible to read Mercedes, just like she couldnt read Carmen. When Carmen was happy she laughed, and cried when she was sad, never afraid of speaking her mind and never one to back down from a fight, but when she found out about the cancer, Shane found it more and more difficult to read her. And now it was the same with Mercedes.

     

    Mercedes looked at Shane amused.

     

    Of course I knew,  the question should have been when?

     

    Mercedes shrugged a little. Carmen is my baby, the most angelic of my brood, I love her the most, how could I not know?

     

    And you never told her. Shane raised her voice a notch. All this time, Carmen had been worried and scared of her mother finding out, but it was all for nothing.

     

    Mercedes gave out a short laugh before saying, her head swayed from side to side, At first, I was in denial; I refuse to acknowledge it, or believe that it was true.

    Page 2 of 41234

    Comments

    1. That was Great, Bigprisc! Carmens mom making Shane squirm, was cute. Glad Roddy & Mercedes were understanding. Now Carmen can stop hyperventilating & talk to her mom :D Merceds confronting Shane & Carmens talk w/ her brother definitely made up for the lack of Sharmen moments. Luv your story.

    Leave a Reply