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What will she do next? 7
All Tina could do was stand there and groan.
“Tell me Tina?” Bette continued her assault. “I’ve had it, I can’t live like this anymoreyou want an open relationship, you’ve got it.” Bette said in finality and suddenly plunged her fingers deeply into Tina’s dripping *****.
“Oohh!” Tina was startled, but immediately began grinding her hips on Bette’s hand and moaning loudly under Bette’s ministrations while desperately trying to remove Bette’s shirt.
Bette’s emotional connection and Tina’s pent up desire meant that in no time Tina found herself flying off to that place that she currently could not get enough of as her ***** washed over her.
At that instant she had opened her eyes to connect with the only love of her life, seeking the comfort and safety that was always present during this moment, but instead she was met with a cold and unfeeling stare which oddly pushed her even further over the edge as another ***** was ripped from her.
Bette continued by flipping her around and pushing her face into the wall, “I gave you everything Tina, all I asked was that you love me in return, but one mistake has caused you to despise me and I have had enough.”
She said while spreading Tina’s legs wide and pulling Tina’s hips into her groin. Bette began raking her fingers over Tina’s spine and placing bites on the fleshy parts of her body.
Tina was speechless. She was barely able to hold her body up much less speak and she so desperately wanted to tell Bette that she had been a fool, foolishchildish even to suggest what she did and behave the way that she had, but she was left breathless.
Bette was raging an assault not only on her body, but also on her soul, and even though Tina was enjoying the sensations coursing through her she also was terrified.
As another ***** faded she felt as though Bette’s unending love for her was also fading away.
Silently Bette stepped away from a naked Tina and stared at her once more. Bette thought that she was even more beautiful, if at all possible, all flushed and ***** weakened. Bette picked up her shirt and moved towards the door.
“I need to live Tina, and feel alive. Too much is happening all around me as I stand by and watch unable to react.
If you don’t want all of meif you wont or can’t commit to methen I need to get away from you and find someone who can.”
And just when Tina thought that she could hear no more Bette said,
“You’re killing me Tina,” and with that turned picked up her keys and left the house.
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(54 votes, average: 3.74 out of 5)
*Standing up and clapping* You go Bette. Its about time she stood up for herself and lived. I am telling you season two was like Bette couldn’t get a break. It was a long rough road she travelled and I think if Tina is gonna treat her like that in season three then Bette had better have a scene where is she stands up to all the BS going on for her. Great writing. I know the story line is hard for everyone, but I think crushonlu should keep on going.
THAT’S RIGHT!!! bette show her what you want and what she is gonna miss. and why is angry sex the best??? C this story is so raw and deep and I’m lovin every step along the way.
WOOOOO HOOOO!!!!!!!!! GOOD 4 BETTE!!!! Now Tina better wake up and smell the java, and talk 2 Bette if she don’t then it’s time 4 Bette to move on!!!!!!
It’s time that Bette stood up for herself. That’s the person that Tina fell in love with in the first place.
Good job. You tell her Bette. Yes, Bette made a mistake, and she’s apologized for it, eaten humble pie for it, and gone about as low as you can go. All the while Tina was like, I can do no wrong and I deserve all I can get for what Bette did. But it take two to mess up a relationship, and two to fix it. If Tina really wants to be with Bette, then I think its time she start proving to Bette that she’s worthy of Bette’s love versus Bette doing all the work. As far as the spoilers go, I’ve only glanced at some of it, most of which I did not like. Hopefully they are not what were are going to be experiencing next season. Already seems like to much drama and things that are a bit unreal, hopefully they know enough to get back to what brought us all on board in the first place.
i never thought that i could say something like that but i will GOOD FOR YOU BETTE..she said right if Tina cant be with her and only her someone will love to..im here Bette..lol..BUT i hope after that Tina wake up and realize that no man or no other woman could love her like Bette..sad chapter
I believe the roles are reversed now Will Bette ever be able to Trust Tina again. Tina wanted a open relationship. I believe she will be the one that is going to get hurt. Go for it Bette. sees who will weep and moan in the end. thanks
WOW..that a girl Bette u tell her…take it all or leave it all…great post…please post soon!
well holy shit if thats not a wake up call i dont no what is..had my heart poundin the whole time
excellent…
GOOD FOR BETTE NOW TINA WIPE YOURSELF UP AND GO GET YOUR WOMAN!!!!
GO BETTE GO!!!!THAT WAS A CRAZY CHAPTER..POST SOON.PLEASA..
Bravo Crush! I love seeing alpah Bette come out and play. Now Tina has a decision to make doesn’t she?
OH WOW! That was so satisfying! You go Bette! Thanks!
WOW!! that was a great chap. I am glad Bette finally told Tina how she feels. I hope Tina makes up her mind and voices her true feelings to Bette. hopefully it won’t be too late. but maybe Bette needs to be without her for a while anyway. good story. I am truly guessing, what will she do next?
FINALLY!!!!!!!! GO BETTE!!!!!! Now the tables are turned…
OMG I am indeed a fan….your writing just gets better&better.SWT post.That was it…That was what I was waiting 4..thnk you..Tina needed 2 hear that..Post sO0n..
Wow – thats some wake up call. How will Tina respond? Hope Bette got through to her.
whoa-please post soon–read this post 3 times-it’s good
Yes! Tina needs to get on her knees and beg Bette’s forgiveness. Good for Bette.
Bravo. Bravo. Bravo. Yippee for Bette!! If I were Tina, I’d be mighty scared. Your writing is superb. Outstanding chapter!! Really, really well done.
Yeah..it’s probably the best time for Bette to leave. Tina!! WTF are you thinking?!?!?!
Great post!!!
Go Bette!!! Good for you girl…
Wonderful PLease continue post soon!!
Damn Bette is awesome and yeah that’s right, Bette tell Tina all of her feeling and now its up to Tina and can’t wait to see how Tina gonna react. Post soon please, thanks!
AMEN!!! What a fucking awesome chapter….when she let her broken heart speak I believe she spoke for all of us who’ve ever felt that way and couldn’t gather the brass to let it all out……thank you…I feel utterly vindicated.
Oh No!! Tina needs to stop her!!! Thanks for making her puke when she went to Henry’s lol :)
all i have to say . is that IC and TPTB really need to read your work and the work of others at fanfic and take a good hard look at their sinking show and incorporate the talent and storylines that are so wonderfully represented on fanfic!
“Are you okay?” Tina is kidding me right? I can get with her trying to find something for herself that she feels she is missing but I can’t get with her punishing Bette this way, that’s just cruel and maybe she doesn’t feel like she’s hurting Bette but damn to expect your spouse with whom you have a child to stick around while you fuck other people. Na Bette should not play that game….I hope to god you have Bette leave her ass….
Well done, excellent chapter. I glad Bette finaly told Tina how she felt and now Tina needs to make up her mind. Thanks so much for this story.