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What will she do next? Finale (part one of two)
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Finale – All good things (part one)
Bette found herself dozing off when a gentle buzzing suddenly began near her head. At first she thought that it was some sort of insect in her light sleep, but quickly jumped when she realised that it was her phone.
“Hey baby, did I wake you?” the sultry voice asked softly.
“No, no,” Bette lied but not convincingly as her voice was thick with sleep.
“Baby go back to sleepwe can talk tomorrow, and maybe you might want to stay over?” Tina asked suggestively.
“Hmm yeahthat sounds nice,” Bette mumbled sleepily, “I’ll call you when I’m leaving okay?”
“Okaynight babyI love you.”
“I love you too,” Bette replied before turning over and going back to sleep.
*
The next morning Bette made herself busy by putting her stuff together for the journey home. ‘I should really ask Tina if she would like for us to buy this place as a weekend getaway,’ Bette thought to herself as she walked around the spacious and comfortable beach house.
She found herself being hypnotised by the motion of the waves as she stared out of the large glass patio doors facing the ocean and felt herself calm again. ‘Everything is going to work out fine,’ saying it as if it were her new mantra.
Back at WeHo, Tina got up early and dropped Angie off at the Planet while she went off to do some shopping for her date later with Bette.
When she had walked into Kit’s office she had been surprised by Kit’s ebullience regarding the (re) commitment ceremony.
“Hey!” Kit had yelped and for once did not ignore Tina because of Angelica, “I heard last night, congratulations! Are you happy? Are you ready for all of this again?” she had asked in a semi frantic state causing Tina to nervously back up against the wall of her office.
“Yeah I think it’s timeI meanI really need her again and I need to do this for us to keep our family together. Do you understand what I’m trying to say?”
“I think so Tinayou love Bette and you’re willing to do this again because the trust is back?” Kit answered and continued, “But make certain that you are also doing it for yourself because you want to and not because you’re afraid that she might go off with someone else or that there’s no one else out there for you”
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errrr….
Holy crap! I’m uh…SHIT TINA!
Sorry….thanks crush, that was really great writing! I was just frustrated with T and her lack of good judgement…AGAIN!!!
LMFAO
well that’s one way to start ending it, although I’m way more pissed that your are ending it!!!!!
oh oh..not good..but i have something to say about Bette if they are really willing to try get back together Bette need to start listen what Tina have to say and not jumb in conclusions… she must talk to Tina and see what she have to say to after that say what she is thinking and feeling..it is about time to them to do it the right thing if their love are strong enough and worth…ok it better you FIX this and quickly..
DAMN..THATS NOT GOOD CAUSE BETTE EVEN THREW THE PHONE OUT THE WINDOW! PLEASE POST SOON
And their getting married??? Yeah right I know you wrote this ending so you can decide whether you want the entire fanfic reading population who love Bette and Tina to hate you or love you. But go with whats really going on in this relationship not what we want. You can have a happy ever after ending or a real ending…Which one is it going to be?
She knew Bette was coming home, and she left Angie with the baby a long time. Bette should be up set,yet give Tina a chance to tell her what went on. I would be up set thanks
this tina is a dumbass! what a fucking idiot. in one breath she is talking to Kit about her recommitment ceremony with Bette, and the next she is doing drinks with henry…..what a dumb move
As much as i adore Tina she needs to wake up and see things from Bette’s POV. I don’t like this idiot Tina but it is realistic. G8 writing
What kind of drinks could she have if she is still breastfeeding? Ix-nay on the playdates, Tina! Henry might get grabby! Cell phones are too expensive!
No way she can be friends with Henry and start a new relatinship with Bette. Tina needs to think about what or who she wants. post again please, like right now.
I would just like to say 1) good writing and my next comment does not pertain to the first 2) jesus fing christ: whenever I see spoilers for season 3 the first word that comes to my mind is BULLSHIT. One guy writes an article that says a femme character dates a guy, one fan says thats tina……..and all the freakin sudden its like 100% gospel….
sorry had to vent
oh but still: great writing
No Fucking way..SHIT..GREAT CHAPTER
crush whoa whoa u aint ending it like that r u ok..next chapter!!
UH OH!
And now it hits the fan!!!! What is Tina thinking? That was just the last person she should have been having drinks with. Post soon.
CRUSH:
DONT END THIS WAY!!PLEASE POST SOOOOOOOON.OR START A NEW CHAPTER.
LOVE ITITIT!!!!!!!!!!
OMG ok that was SO SWT..GREAT post..GREAT stry..Tina=Idiot…Ok…2 b honest I dun want you 2 end it cuz..it’s jus way 2 much drama 2 end&you got me craving 4 mre…yet on the utha end that was a fabulous way 2 end it leaving me wanting mre…SO ya either way you got me luving your writing..dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
Are you kidding, what the hell was Tina thinking. Maybe, maybe eventually they could be friends, but damn how about making sure you and Bette are setteled. Your committing to Bette again, and while your out shopping, and Bette’s sister is watching your child, you go have drinks with Henry. Crush, you need to add to this, Tina needs to Find Bette, cos you know she’s taken off, and fix this mess she’s created. OMG, I am so like what the fuck.
Damn that bad and Tina need to do something now and find Bette and talk to her soon. This is crazy and is so good, let see what’s next. Thanks!
“Just read…scream at me later-thanks!” (Is it later yet? ;-)
Tina is having drinks…
Bette is heaving phones…
Do they deserve each other?!
I can’t imagine a scenario in which Bette shoud marry this Tina anytime soon. The trust isn’t there and Tina’s judgement is way off. She could have simply told Henry that things were good with Bette and they were getting married again, end of story with that dude. But this is the same Tina who hasn’t told Bette that she’s been seeing Helena, as friends, behind Bette’s back. This is the same Tina who took her baby on a booty call and now left her at the babysitters for hours without enough food so she could have witht this dude. What could have taken hours with Henry? Duh, she was planning her date with Bette and seeking his advice, right. It’ll be interesting to see Chapter 2 of the finale and how all things turn out good…thanks for the distraction!
This is not good!!! (the situation, not your story—that is great!) What is Tina doing? she still seems way too attracted to Henry to be thinking of hooking up with Bette. I think they both need to say “Mother May I Take Two Big Steps Backward?