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    What will she do next-Revised chapter 18

    “You’ll feel better in a minute okay baby?” she asked softly and then turned to the refrigerator to retrieve a cool pot of mashed fruit, one of Angie’s favourites.
    But Angelica was not interested. In fact apart from quieting down a little to take the Tylenol, Angelica had stepped up her wailing, which was slowly starting to distress Tina somewhat.

    An hour and a half later Angie was no better. Her fever was still there and she continued her crying nonstop. Tina called Kit.

    “Hey” Kit answered pleased to get two calls from Tina so close to one another, but her pleasure was replaced by concern when she heard the baby wailing in the background.

    “Tina? What’s going on?” She asked quickly.

    “She’s got a fever and she’s not feeling very well at allcan you come over?” Tina asked evenly.

    “I’ll be there in ten minutes,” Kit answered abruptly.

    **

    It was early evening when both Tina and Kit finally got Angelica to settle. They managed to cool her down by using cold compresses and stripping her down to just her vest and diapers. Tina had called their paediatrician who had made a few suggestions but told her that should they be overly concerned to bring her in to the ER. When Angie contentedly nodded off, Tina sighed audibly and Kit collapsed on the sofa.

    They both sat quietly for a moment before Tina jumped up and reached for the phone again.

    I’ll order us some dinner,” she said.

    Kit left after dinner and an exhausted Tina thought that she would have a lie down for a bit while Angie slept. She looked in on her way to the bedroom, content that all was well. She must have fallen asleep as soon as she hit the pillow, because the next thing she knew was that she awoke with a start.
    Tina listened to her surroundings carefully but couldn’t shake the feeling that something was not right.

    Then she heard it.

    The laboured breathing coming from the baby monitor. Tina flew out of bed and swiftly moved across the hall to her daughter’s bedroom. She looked into the crib and gently touched her child. She was burning up again and now seemed to be having breathing difficulties. Gently Tina rubbed Angelica’s chest in an attempt to wake her.

    But Angelica would not wake up.

    Comments

    1. ok…first, they are both selfish, and just stubborn. Love isn’t easy, nor is a relationship. Maybe they should go their seperate ways, to find they really do need and love each other. keep on posting.

    2. Geeezz..are you going to kill a baby???..lol..you know im totally against persons be together again cuz pregnancy or cuz the baby is sick..they have to love each other and really want to be together… that is the only way their marriege survive cuz otherwise when things come calm they will find a way to fight and be apart again..Bette need to know she have a wife and a kid..be a mother is a full time job she cant run away when things go tough..your killing me..please FIX this..

    3. I can’t believe this,Tina is a dumbass and so is Bette. They both need to be in therapy and Tina needs to leave thqt man alone. Those two need to start talking to each other quickly, before they lose what they do have for each other. This makes me crazy.

    4. Great story. Both Bette and Tina are acting like idiots. I love that Tina professed caretaker that she is doesn’t know that it wasn’t the smartest move to hang out with someone who has the flu when you have a baby in the house.

    5. I really don’t know who the hell these 2 characters are, bec they are not acting like Tina and Bette, but Whatev! I mean Tina is stupid for exposing her child to the flu and for be so damned indecisive and Bette well, she should just let Tina go if she distrusts her so……tsk tsk tsk,. what the hell are these 2 are going to do?

    6. These two people are complete stranger to me, First Bette goes off on a retreat, and Tina taking care of a sick man,with God only knows what and took germs home to her baby. Some one needs to get their stuff together. So that someone can take care of Angie the way a baby needs to be taken care of. If Bette and Tina are through,Than one needs to leave. thanks

    7. Why, why, why would Tina expose herself to illness when she has a child of tender years at home? Is this a symptom of her loneliness? And why would Bette go traipsing off into the woods to contemplate the trees when she has a family at home? Now there’s hell to pay.
      They both need a kick in the knickers!

      Thanks!

    8. Wow, a lot of harsh comments on these two; first of all I don’t think Bette is being selfish by going on the retreat, keep in mind what she’s been through: devastating break up, watching her father die, losing a job that defined her, almost losing the love of her life during pregnancy, seeing her sister almost die of breast cancer, having little to no support at home with Tina who wants to “see other people” ie. rejection from the one love that’s supposed to sustain you…she hasn’t grieved, she’s just handled all these things thrown at her; Tina on the other hand doesn’t want Bette, there is something familiar in their relationship, but if she is angry with Bette for leaving deal with that, don’t start inviting the likes of Helena and Henry into your life the minute she’s gone, that’s dishonest and she doesn’t really seem to value her relationship with Bette. If she can’t commit, why bother.

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