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What will she do next-Revised chapter 20
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“She’s so smallshe shouldn’t be suffering like this at her size” she spoke aloud and the nurse who was in the room to monitor the baby walked over to her side thinking that Tina was talking to her.
“She’s very comfortable Ms Kennard, and she is not in any pain.” The nurse replied.
“Then why wont she wake up?” Tina asked bluntly without really acknowledging the nurses presence. The nurse did not have an answer to that so she went back to her duties of monitoring the machines and making notes on the charts.
Tina gently caressed her daughter’s tiny stomach.
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Henry had been trying Tina’s cell phone all morning. He wanted to try to gauge her reaction to their Friday night kiss, and also he wanted to know when he could see her again. He was determined to get her into bed and maybe even away from her ***** lifestyle, but first he had to get to talk to her.
After leaving two voicemail messages and receiving no call back, he decided to call her home. When that also went to voicemail he became a little concerned. He figured that if he hadn’t heard anything that evening her would drive round to her home to make sure she was okay.
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Alice was on gofer duty. She was the one who ran out to the front of the hospital to relay information to Kit about Angelica’s status, and when Kit informed her that Bette was on her way, she was the one who ran back into the hospital room to relay this information back to Tina and to try to console her. She too was exhausted, and she had noticed on her last call to Kit that her phone battery was about to die.
‘The next time I go out I’ll take Tina’s phone’ she had thought, rather than use a pay phone.
Alice had tried several times to get Tina to eat or drink but the only thing Tina would tolerate was water.
“Okay,” Alice relented, but when Bette gets here you’re gonna take a break” she hoped that Bette would get there soon, as Tina’s eerie silence was beginning to unnerve and unsettled her.
By four in the afternoon, Alice decided that she needed a break. There had been no significant change but the doctors were very hopeful and positive. She decided to relay this information on to Kit and also find out when Bette was due to arrive.
Taking Tina’s cell phone Alice headed towards the front of the building, reserved for smokers and other cell phone users.
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I typically do not comment on a lot of stories but have followed yours all the way and love it. I loved the way that Bette rushed back and Tina allowed herself to feel only when she got there to support her. Please continue!
yeh, go bette go…now what’s with tina back and forth…she really needs some retreat…Now don’t be doing anything to our Ang….pls….tks for the quick post!!
wow..that was great…finally some good news and some attitude of both of them..your story really catch me..i hope Angie will be fine soon and B&T happy again as well..thanks for the lovely update..cant wait for more soon thanks..
B.& T. are so meant to be…. and that is all there is to it.
Hi, I agrew with Gumby. I don’t typically comment either. Yours has been a great love story. I love the way Bette came back and did not go ape on Henry. You do a good job. Please continue.
Enjoying the story. Please let Bette and Tina talk this thing out. They both need a retreat together… talking.
I love Bette and Tina together but Bette puting up with Tina going back and forth back and forth is beyond me. I think Tina has some kissing ass to do. Love the story and please post soon.
Loved this line “She belongs to me as do I to her, we are tied to each other and we’re not letting go”. Does this mean that Bette has truly decided she can be happy with Tina? Seems to easy but then again a crisis can usually force you to resolve many things. This continues to be a great story.
I think this chapter should have been entitled Showdown at Cedars. I almost feel bad gor Henry…..ALMOST! Great Chapter
I’m with Chasenenow Bette has an inter peace that we have now seen before. Tina needs Bette like she need to breathe. Thanks
I hope Angie will be fine after this.I hope this is the end of the back and forth of both of them.They need to recommit or move on.I loved the lines “She belongs to me as do I to her, we are tied to each other and we’re not letting go…I’m sorry you got caught up in all of this…” “Babe…that’s Henry, he’s obviously concerned about Angelica, and maybe about me, but this is our time and no one else’s so I’m going to get rid of him okay?” and then she pulled Bette close and kissed her tenderly and passionately on the lips in such a way that left no doubt as to who Tina was going to bed with that night.
Tina needs to show Bette that she means what she says.They need to reconnect emotionally and physically.
Bette’s handling of Henry was Awesome!! And even though she keeps wanting to stray, Tina truly knows that nobody can compare to Bette! As if any male ever could! I love it! You totally rock at storytelling!! This is a fabulous chapter!!! Pls post again soon!
Please let this be the end of Tinas foolishness. Why can’t she be happy with what she has.
sweet, perfectly sweet. Bette handled that perfectly.
Bette is awesome and you go Bette. Glad Angie is awake and hope she will get well soon. Post soon please, thanks!
This story is CRAZY…GREAT JOB..PLEASE POST SOON……
3 snaps in z formation *snap*, *snap*, *snap*!! for BETTE.i love her so much in this story. she is absolutely brilliant in this chap. well i guess that’s the end of henry. maybe he should pick up his bottom jaw and just leave.
BRAVO!!
BRILLIANT CHAP AS ALWAYS!!! PLEASE POST SOON!!!
This is just soooo Bette !!! Classy and stuff !!!! Thanks !!!
I would say Henry got slam dunked, run over by a freight train, etc., etc.
this chapter was sooooo perfect crush! can’t wait to see them reconnect! thanks
THNK U..THNK U..THNK U…(Henry has left the building..The picture..The L-word gurlz lives!) THIS HAS 2 B ME FAVORITE CHAPTER..THNK U!//POST SO0N!
you go Bette!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wooo hoOooOoo!!!
I’m sorry crush I love your story but is your Tina suffering from multiple personalities? I mean everybody is all happy and I’m like, huh. She kissed the guy, nursed him back to health probably almost killed her child in the process and now she scrapes him off the bottom of her shoes like a lump of dog shit. I’m sorry but I expect my girl Tina to crawl right back to this guy the minute Bette goes back to her quest of finding “the answers”.
Hey Yep I’m just chaching up to comment too now it’s about time to Tibette together again I hope this guy Henry it’s out of Tina life! Ok! Thanks for posted Please continue!!
Loved this chapter very much!!