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    What’s thy passion? Chapter 3

    Interpret the question whatever way you want, I just want you to be honest.
    Carmen looked away from Shane

    I think youre beautiful. She watched her nose as a tear dripped from it.

    I think youre caring, sweet, kind, considerate
    She sniffed a little and then looked directly at Shane

    I think youre a heartbreaker she concluded.

    Shane didnt speak so Carmen continued afraid to face the silence

    I mean youre all these wonderful things and you let people feel them, know them and then you just move on, its like you dont even think twice. You go through girls like I go through records, a different one each night. Why Shane? Why do girls fall in love with you, why do you let them? Why me Shane, why did I fall, why are you here now? Am I that good? Or are you that desperate that you need the same girl more than once? Carmen was filling up with tears but she couldnt stop herself I just feel like every time you come by its gonna change, like maybe if I act the way you want me, maybe then youll fall in love with me. You know how happy it would make me to have you to myself? Shane sometimes I just want a relationship and all you do it run away.

    She looked at Shane who was still staring at her showing little emotion.

    You know Shane, its not like Im asking you to marry me.
    Carmen sniffed and dropped her head. Shane smiled inwardly and placed her hand on Carmens chin, bringing up her head and finally she spoke

    No…
    Shane began; she looked at Carmen with eyes so intense they looked like they were ready to explode,

    But, what if I was asking you?

    Carmen stopped sniffing and stared at Shane, she was in shock, complete shock, of all the things she had expected Shane to say, that definitely wasnt one of them. Carmen swallowed hard

    Did I hear you right?

    She looked at Shane unable to move. Shane reached into her blazer and pulled out a small box. She stared into Carmens eyes and flipped open the box revealing a pink diamond ring.

    Marry me.

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    Comments

    1. Wow,that was quick!I love your stories to bits and pieces but marriage?They aren’t even dating.i’m a bit confused …Can they date a bit?You are a good writer ,let them date a bit:)

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