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When Alphas Collide Part 3
“Just as long as you’re taking care of Bette, too.” Alice stated. Tina glared at Alice and called her out.
“Why? Why do I have to take care of her too? She fucked up not me?” Tina barked. Alice’s face paled as did Shane’s.
“Are you saying you’re making Bette fuck you but Bette hasn’t gotten any?” Alice stated in disbelief. When Tina nodded her head in agreement both Shane and Alice’s eyes bugged out. While Dana and Jenny continued to look confused and Tonya continued to look like she was a god for suggested it.
“Ahh..Look Tina, I no expert at relationship you know that but do you think that’s really wise?” Shane asked trying to go for the subtle approach. But that didn’t seem to work.
“What? Why not? She’s my wife and she has duties to perform, right?” Tina stated soundly looking at Tonya who nodded her head and gave Tina a high five. Dana was a little annoyed that her fiancé was getting involved in this mess, but she didn’t like Alice’s look. It was a cross between she knew something and all hell was going to break loose.
“Great! That’s just fucking great!” Alice exclaimed, throwing her arms about to emphasize her point.
“Al calm down.” Shane stated, although she too, looked well a bit frightful.
“Calm down? Calm down?! This…” Alice rants pointing to Tonya with disgust, “parasite thinks she knows everyone and everything, gives the worse piss poor advice know to man to this…” Again Alice points only this time to Tina with absolute puzzlement, “idiot, who takes it!”
“Hey!” Came three voices: one to the idiot comment and two to the parasite comment. But Alice could not be stopped.
“Tina, really, does Tonya know Bette? I mean really, outside of a few events has she even gotten to know her?” Alice begins. Tina shakes her head slowly wondering what she was missing. Jenny’s eyes grow wide at the mere thought of anyone trying to give normal people’s advice about Bette, then her eyes widen further when she realized that Tonya gave the advice and there was nothing normal about it.
“You really aren’t thinking at all are you?” Alice questioned looking at Tina harshly. “She told you that Bette should be servicing you? That you should have Bette fuck you AND you won’t return the favor? Did you not just leave Bette because she cheated on you? I’m mean and this was when you both were fucking each other? You really think Bette will be ok with this? That she’ll survive this?” Alice continued to rant, but Tonya who was annoyed at Alice’s rant and her sudden knowledge of Bette spoke up.
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(58 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
OMFG tht was hot as fuck i came jus reading it
tina= DUMB ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
GOT DAYYYYYYYYYYUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMMM!”Tina is an idiot” I mean did she really think Bette was not going to get hers after she has been fucking Tina’s brains out? Pands, my laptop too had an orgasm! More please! I love it! Please no Helena/Tina hook-up!
Good Lord Woman….are you trying to kill me?? Whew….I need a fire extinguisher to put out flame on my computer and me. I love the warning that Emae29 put in her comments. You definately need to put something on these NC-17 posts. Tina getting advice from Tonya is hilarious. Hey didn’t she kill Mr. Piddles ? Now she out to kill B & T’s reunion. Go away Tonya. Far, far away…..
…okay I am back…I had to change my panties, for some reason they got a little wet…that was hot. What in the world made Tina take advice from Tonya? And if Tina says something to Bette she can pull a Ross (We were on a break) How in the world can you send a sexually frustrated Bette Porter out in the world? Tina…Tina…Tina. Please post soon.
I say GOOOOOOOOO Bette!I mean seriously Yeah Bette cheated!, but damn imagine that, what Tina is doin to B, coz of Tonya, tonya who da fuck made her the boss of their relationship!, well Tina an ejitt anyway for listening to Tonya lol!, Poor lady, Aghh well least bette is gettin a lil summink summink! continue the scene, it was effin HOT!they need to get rid of this new chick for bette in s4, and just hook Helena and Bette up, all these Belena stories, are just ooooozin greatness!
Allright, I’m gonna just say this okay, with no bad feelings to any of the authors ok, but for me personally HelBette stories suck. Ok I said it.An obsessed TiBette fan :)
OMFG ,HOT HOT HOT ,WOWWWW more more please
whadiufhurowroiweuigfxlk!!!!! PANDS!!! OMBG!!! Where in the hell was your PanC-17 rating hmm??? God damn woman that was amazing!!!
1st……..brb
DAMN Panda….I have to agree with the two before me. All I have to say is thank goodness I’m on my way to bed; after that cold shower! Post Soon!!!!!!!!
DAMN!! Wait….let me catch my breath…….HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!
HOLY SHIT!!!I think my laptop is about to explode. HOT doesn’t begin to describe that scene… I think I had an O just from reading it. I love your writing. Please, please, please post soon.
Whew. Okay I can breath again. Stupid Tina for listening to idiot Tonya. Oh yea, this is going to be good
OH OH Pandsy this was really worth waiting for. Djeez girl what are you doing to us. THIS WAS FUCKING HOT
Holy shit….you can even bring the Holy Virgin Mary to an earthshattering orgasm with that. Pfffftttt now I have to sit al day long on a wet sponge. As I told you before these stories of you must come with a warning printed in red. An exhausted fan.
woah that was sizzlin’ haaaaaawt! tina, u idiot!
BLOODY HELLLL!!!!!!!!!! pandamellll!!! i dont remember reading a fic this quickly!! fuck!!!
FAR OUT! that was soooo hot!!!!!!
Tina, you are one dumb b*tch! Go Bette!!!!! Got damn! That was too f*cking HOT for words! Hell, I need a cigarette, a drink and a cold shower all at the same time after that…. and I don’t even smoke or drink. LOL! that was just too SEXY! My goodness, I am panting as if I was the one having the orgasms! I love me some BETTE… but a horny, begging, submissive Bette… in hr office… over her desk!!!!… My God, could life get any better than that? I am going back to read this again. The visuals I get… Helena deserves some serious props for giving Bette the well deserved, most appreciated, highly erotic, sexiest f*ck of the day! Can I just trade places with Helena… and then trade with Bette? Cuz that was definitely a fantasy in writing. Got dman! I’m hot! Lemme go stand in front of the air conditioner. You’d better put a warning on this chapter.. ‘HOT.. SIZZLING… MAY CAUSE RISE IN BLOOD PRESSURE… MAY INDUCE THE FLOW OF JUICES… MAY REQUIRE A CHANGE OF UNDERWEAR’… something! You have definitely gone off the scale with this chapter. Thanks! Now please, continue.
HA-HA-HA-HA ‘and that sealed it, Tina was an idiot!!!!”
holy hell
I’m not mad at Tina, she has Bette servicing her and satisfying her every need at the drop of a word. However…Bette and Helena were just too hot for words, hotter than the sun, hotter than hell. Let Tina keep hogging all the lovin’, Bette is getting hers, and I hope she continues to get it.
has anyone seen the fire extinguisher b/c I’m on fire. That was so amazing! What was Tina thinking? She’s an idiot! She just pushed Bette into someone else’s arms. Did she really think that she could get Bette that worked up and never quinch that sexual thirst. It doesn’t take a genius or Alice and Shane to figure out that Bette was going to get hers one way or another. Personally I’m happy for Bette b/c Helena seems to be doing one hell of a job. And as for Tina, well this is what you get when you liste to Tonya of all people and try to play games with the one and only Bette Porter. Pandamel-I can’t wait for the next chapter. Is Bette going to be upfront w/ Tina about who is satisfying her sexually? I mean these were Tina’s rules and Bette is just along for the ride; how will Tina react. Please post soon b/c I’m dying to see how this plays out. is Bette going to be remorseful or just become addicted to Helena’s womanly ways. I almost fogot, Bette seems to have taken this baby thing in stride so i guess that is a good thing, right?
Great chapter! This is a fun story, and I look forward to reading more of Tina’s almost dominatrix (sp?) behavior towards Bette. She’ll really put Bette through the ringer once she finds out about Helena! Thanks for writing!
Damn so fucking hot and awesome. Tina you lost Bette! Ok post soon please, thanks!
Hey I can’t read this story because Bette/Helena are doing the nasty thing LOL, but please post your other story “No other love” soon, that is such a great and amazing story.
damn girl you are trying to kill me! that was pornographic in a good way. a very good way! tina is an idiot and she will not be happy when she finds out about these 2. please keep this one going. i love this story line.
Thank God Helena was womanly enough to satisfy Bettes needs over ane over. That was soooo hot! Please update this chapter soon. Love the other stories, but this needs another chapter soon. Love Bette and Helena together!!!
ok WOW…um.. you will have to forgive me i lost all speech patterns ….um.. i gotta go take a shower…a cold one
Pandamel, That was savage and sexy as hell. Helena and Bette was animalistic in their hunt for the ultimate pleasure. Lokks like Tina’s (Tonya’s plan) just bit Tins on the ass. The heat generated from this chapter could power a small city for the rest of the week. The tension and wanton lust was so visible in the display between Bette and Helena. Brilliant to have Helena in such control and Bette as the willing receiptant of all the Helena’s hands and tongue could offer. Can’t wait to see what the cold light of day brings from both Bette and Tina. This is gonna explode like a firecracker! More please, real soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Can you blame Bette? I’d be on edge too. HOTTTTTTTTTTTTT!