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    When Hope is Lost

    Story written on December 29, 2012 by bumsue.
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    Chapter 1

     

    After the baby’s death, both women dove into their work and left their loving relationship behind. The couple seemed to move through the motions of their daily life, but didn’t usually connect. Bette realized her mistake after a few months and tried to reconnect with her wife in as many ways as she could think of but Tina, suffering from life-long depression from a sexual assault by her older sister at a young age, and also suffering from post partum depression from the miscarriage as well, refused Bette’s affections and pushed her further away. Bette took the rejection hard after a while.

     

    She tried sending flowers to Tina’s office with a note asking for a date. Tina usually turned her down due to projects at work. Often, when she’d make dinner, Tina wouldn’t show up until late in the evening. After she’d gone to bed. Bette’s frustration level grew, as it didn’t appear that Tina had any interest in continuing their relationship… she was at her wit’s end.

     

    Then, one day, a moment appeared in Bette’s life where attention was given to her by another woman that made her feel wanted, desired and the center of this woman’s attentions. It took the woman a bit of time to convince Bette that she wanted her as Bette had turned her down at every opportunity. Then, one day she didn’t. They kissed and caressed one another but before Bette would allow her self to go the last step intimately, she came to her senses and stopped herself from proceeding further. She felt such a deep sense of remorse and left the woman’s side immediately. When she arrived home, she shamefully confessed to Tina what she had done but instead of forgiveness, all hell broke loose.

     

    The late afternoon was filled with yelling and profanity. Every time Bette came near Tina, she lunged out at her with either slapping her face or pushing her violently away. When Tina finally made it over to the closet, she grabbed a suitcase and began filling it with Bette’s clothing. She then took another bag and filled it with Bette’s bathroom essentials and threw that at her as she yelled for Bette to leave their home.

     

    Bette sat in her car for the longest time in shock. She didn’t know what to do or where to go. She knew in her heart that she’d made a very poor choice but the resultant behavior from her wife sent her into a tailspin. At some moment she realized that she was driving down the road, headed to the beach. After a couple of hours of sitting in the sand watching the waves roll in and out, she finally returned to her car and drove off to check into a hotel for who knew how long.

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    3. I know Bette’s life in NY is off to a bad start, but I hope things improve. The punishment isn’t fitting the crime. I’m most disappointed in Kit, never mind her friends and Tina. Bette deserves a little better… something to restore her hope. Thanks

    9. Welcome and well done! Congrats on getting this posted, I know it’s nerve racking. I feel badly for both women in your story, clearly they are both in a tremendous amount of pain. The friends and sister though…just want to slap them silly! :-) Thank you for taking the step to share your writing with us, I look forward to the next chapter.

    11. I don’t see a reason of why Bette and Tina should ever get back together. It’s really depressing of how Bette is depicted here. Tina and the gang are dicks for treating Bette that way. Bette needs to find happiness but it shouldn’t be with Tina. Stay in NYC Bette and don’t give WeHo another thought. Great start bumsue, you live up to your name ✌😁 glad to see get the support you need. You have my support like Bartles&James 🍻

    16. This story and As One Door Closes are great. And, I want more.

      How does the family manage life? What happened to Ozzie’s leukemia.

      Please . . .

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