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When New and Old Collide: Chapter 5
Bette: Yes I am Kits little sister. She says patting Kit on the back, waiting to get a reaction. Which she does not, and that does not go unnoticed by Jaime or Bette.
Jaime: So what are you doing in L.A.? I am assuming you live elsewhere due to the fact I have never seen you around here before. She says hoping to get the response that Bette is just visiting and will be on her way shortly.
Bette: Well I live in Florida and I am here on business, which I should be getting to here pretty soon. She says looking at her watch.
Jaime: Well why else would you be out here. Jaime says in a kind of sarcastic tone.
Kit jumps in at this time so nobody (meaning Jaime) gets hurt; and asks if they need anything else before they leave. Bette just shakes her head no and gets up to walk out the door but before she gets there she sees Tinas sister Anne walking through the door with her two children and the little girl from Bettes dream. When Bette sees this little girl she instantly looks at Kit; who looks down at the table not wanting to look her sister in the eye. Before Bette got the chance to walk over and say hi to Anne and to find out who this little girl was, Jaime jumped up and ran over to Anne.
Bethy: Jaime, Jaime. The little girl yells across the caf.
Jaime: Hey Bethy, I missed you so much. She says grabbing the little girl out of Annes arms and taking her into a big hug. So Anne thank you so much for dropping her off I wanted to do something special for Tina and I need this little angels help.
Anne: No problem, call me and tell me how things go ok. She says as she turns to leave.
Bette is just staring at Jaime and this little girl in front of her. Bette looks over at Kit with the saddest look on her face and says one word.
Bette: Bethy?
Kit: Yes baby sis thats Bethy. She is Tinas 3 year old daughter. I really wanted to tell you Bette you have to believe me. She says trying to convey to Bette that she didnt keep her in the dark on purpose.
Bette: 3 years old?
Kit just shook her head yes and Bette walked out the door of The Planet only looking back once to see the little girl from her dreams one last time.
TBC
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(64 votes, average: 3.61 out of 5)
Draemi that was sad but good writing. I am very interested in this story. I hope you continue. Some authors have started in this direction but never continued. Hope you have a nice dinner. Post soon.
Good story. Want more. I wanted Tina to tell Bette herself.
Well, you can’t leave us there…How about another chapter? I’m intrigued as to what Bette will do now.
omg, so sad, please post soon, lover your story
Just got caught up with your story. Great job. Can’t wait to read more.
More please! Great job there Draemi, I can’t wait for you next update. So what is Bette going to do? Is she going to let her dream fade away or is she going to do something about it?
Your story is really good.
K
Great chapter, sad but great. Looking forward to more.
Well I feel ya on the family dinners, I hate them. So bette is looking at the little girl, for the last time. The last line has me worried. I hope she tries to be part of it.
Well I feel ya on the family dinners, I hate them. So bette is looking at the little girl, for the last time. The last line has me worried. I hope she tries to be part of it.
Damn this is sad and hope Tina and Bette will have a talk and see how’s work. Post soon, thanks!
this is good man keep it up
good story! can’t wait to see what happens next.
This is truly a great story. You certainly have caught my attention. Hopefully B & T will find each other again after a bit of turmoil .
Please don’t let Tina break Jamie heart.