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When She Loved Me (4)
Well, that was all shot to hell when she heard a familiar voice behind her, somewhat deepened with a fuller sense of playfulness.
"You come here often?"
The simple phrase melted Bette, and she nearly sunk down off the chair to melt in a pool on the floor. She managed to clear her throat quietly, disguised by the heavy music, before making her decision. She would turn around – she’d have to now.
As she turned, Tina’s cheeky smile fell, and they just stared at each other. Tina’s friends were already busy with some joke or another, laughing drunkenly amongst themselves. Tina was glad for it, and also at a loss for words. This was Bette – the woman who had unknowingly helped her realize her own sexuality. The woman she spent countless nights fantasizing over, wondering if she was or wasn’t a lesbian too. Wondering if she had felt the same way all that time ago. She placed her arm on the bar just to steady herself, gazing longingly into Bette’s eyes.
What she wouldn’t give for just one touch or one kiss from the beautiful, quiet brunette. Her senses were so overwhelmed that she was speechless. Her heart was fluttering, praying Bette wouldn’t walk away from her now. Not now, she pleaded to herself.
"Tina …" Bette started, trying desperately to keep her sanity. Just because Tina was older now, that didn’t mean she was interested in her. ‘She can’t be interested in some old fool,’ Bette thought to herself, her eyes scanning Tina’s appearance discreetly. ‘She’s a vivacious, beautiful young woman. Besides, she probably has no idea what this place even is …’
"Dance with me?" Tina breathed automatically, letting her eyes linger a little at the neckline of Bette’s tank top before bringing them back up again. Even though she knew it was rude to stare with such obvious intentions, she couldn’t help herself – just one glance, she thought foolishly.
"What?" Bette asked, her voice cracking with disbelief at Tina’s proposal. However, the beauty of such a tender proposal got Bette off her chair when Tina held out her hand and led her over onto the dance floor. "Who are those people?" she asked quietly as they passed the girls.
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Love the update. Glad they didn’t have to wait forever to see one another again. Ms. Tina has come into her own and knows now what she wants. Kind of figured she would in the boarding room scenario. Poor stupid parents if they wanted to get her away from “the likes” of Bette. Tina’s remark of “Yeah, and girls everywhere I looked,” was priceless. Now that Tina is an adult, more or less, it is so on with them. The boarding school must not be very far away from their hometown. Maybe they can keep themselves under wraps until Tina graduates and they can go their own way together, wherever that might be. Fantastic chapter. Thanks for posting.
Ironic that they sent her away to a boarding school. Don’t they know that, if you’re going to experiment, you have ample opportunity to do so at a boarding school? Ha ha. Anyhow, Tina knows who she is now & exactly what she wants. Tina wants Bette & the feeling is obviously mutual. I can’t wait to see where you take this. Your writing always leaves me wanting more. Thanks.
I wonder if you’re going to do another flash foward within the next few chapters. When GR loved us enough to post twice in one day? It’s just like my orange billed rubber friend said, every post is a treat. I’m lovin it. I’m going to have be more creative with my comments lol.
That was so sweet. I hope Bette allows herself to see Tina as a woman and not as the little girl she used to know. I really want to see these two get together.
Amazing.Thank you.PPS
So based on the age Tina was when they met and Bette’s known age now, it has been five years since they last saw each other, if Bette is 31, then Tina must be 22 now. Just one question though why did it take five years for them to met again,if they both were going to this same bar for sometime now? Any way so loving this story.
Oh so wonderful. Now they are freely have a relationship,can’t they. thank you for this story.
That was beautiful, having now caught up with your story, I wonder why Bette has herself so isolated? It comes across to me that she lives in some backwater place where prejudice sits at every corner. Why put yourself through that everyday? Love Tibette beginnings this one is going to be good, Tina seems to be full of life with a heart full of love. This is going to be am amzing journey, looking forward to reading how the story unfolds between these two. Thank you!!
absolutely loving this GR! i could read it allllllll day! pps
Oh GR I still can’t put my finger on why your stories are so seductive, but you never fail to deliver story after story page after page. You have your pulse right on the delicious energy between our favorite girls. Every post from you is such a treat, thank you.
Beautiful chapter! Sooo sweet and beautiful! Soo Tina’s adult now, Bette’s still alone.. yay, can’t wait to read what happens next! There are soo many secrets and vague details, hope you’ll reveal them to us in this seductive subtle way. Tnx for posting!!
just caught up with this story. It is so cool that they are meeting again with no restrictions, so far. pps
I’m glad they found each other again. Bette is so lonely I can’t hardly stand it. PPS!!
Loved it! I liked how you didn’t let it drag on and on until they met again. PPVVS!
Sweet and beautiful! Your writing always leaves me wanting more! PPS!
Thank you for them back in each other life and also for a longer capter.Still cannot have enough of it . I always want more and more. So sweet beautiful and sensual, your story is sending the message of hope. Thank you GrindRight. LOve love and love for our girls for a change. PPVS.
That was wonderful and love it!
This chapter is so sweet/bitter after a heart-breaking last one. You are so good at it, thanks for that and your continued story.