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When She Loved Me (5)
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"Yeah, you sure you wanna sleep at my place? It’s gonna be a few hours till we’re there."
Tina chuckled a bit to herself, making herself comfortable in her seat. She was trying not to stare at Bette, but couldn’t resist imagining herself in Bette’s lap. In those rough hands. Still, when she looked up to Bette’s face, there was something that drew her to this woman like the uncontrollable pull of a magnet. Like she couldn’t have herself if she couldn’t have Bette. "I wouldn’t leave you tonight even if I could."
As the truck made its way down the empty road, Bette thought with some confusion about Tina’s phrase. ‘Even if I could’ started making sense to her as she thought back to the few encounters with women she’d had since Tina – finding herself completely incapable of really giving herself to anyone else. She realized that she understood the concept of needing one’s presence, and she smiled at Tina’s insight before glancing over to see that the blond had fallen asleep already. She just chuckled and turned on the radio quietly, gazing affectionately at this familiar woman in her truck. Familiar, and yet she was so different from the girl she once knew – Tina wanted more than a friendship, and made it clear in the way she touched and spoke now.
Looking over once more, Bette found herself thankful that she hadn’t enjoyed even one drink, looking to her precious cargo.
They made it back to her place even quicker than she thought, and Bette pulled in behind her house before turning the engine off and looking again toward Tina. She had so many questions, but they would have to be answered the next morning, she realized. Tina looked exhausted, as sweet as she was in the peaceful slumber. She brushed the blond hair over Tina’s shoulder, ready to see some strange sleeping quirk, but Tina’s soft face leaned in perfect beauty against the door of the truck. Lips just parted.
The sight and feeling it gave her made Bette smile. She got out of the truck and walked around before very carefully opening Tina’s door and shaking her shoulder gently. "Tina?" Hardly any response. "We’re here." Tina opened her eyes with fatigue at the familiar voice.
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Very sweet. Thank you!
wow i am in love with this story :) you r a great writer
Lovely! Just lovely! I have an exam to write tomorrow but I just had to allow myself this delightful treat. I read it very slowly so as not to miss a thing. You are one of the few writers who have managed to captivate me. Well done GrindRight!One can’t help but feel the intense energy between the two of them. Love is indeed a wonderful thing!
loving this story!! ppvs!! thanks :)
Sweet chapter. Wondering what their tomorrow will bring……..PPS!!
Love, love, love it!! Thanks GR.
Lovely chapter, sweet story. Wondered why Bette lived away from everyone and in a community that was not accepting of her. Glad you answered the questions but so sorry she has to be so alone. Surely more of their backstories will be unveiled in future chapters. Really, really like the story and the way that you are unfolding it for us. Thanks for posting.
Soo sweet and gentle!Wonder how’ll they proceed from here, hope it’ll be as sweet and gentle as soo far. Love the story!
Just caught on to this story. It`s truly amazing.
Thanks for your insight into why Bette chooses to live alone and in seclusion. Love the story, this was a beautiful chapter. Thank you.
So sweet.Great chapter.PPS.
I am so addicted to this story. I hope Bette can get passed her insecurities enough to let Tina into her life.
Incredible story. Cannot have enough of it. And i am so excited now that they have found each other again. Great Great great story thank you.
That was so wonderfully sweet. You have got to admire Bette’s restraint and strength. You could feel the heat between them.
Thank you for another lovely chapter. I have to read your posts twice – once quickly as I’m impatient to know what is happening and then again more slowly to appreciate your writing! It is interesting to begin to discover the reasons behind Bette’s isolation. Looking forward to the next instalment – very soon?!
Just an amazing story. Thank you.
Awesome chapter! It gave us an insight into Bette’s background, Tina’s growing up process, their deep feelings and connection, the all wrapped up with affection and sweet teasing. It’s a testament to your writer skills that this chapter is awesome and not sappy.I love this story. Read you very soon.
L love this story, cant wait for more, thank you
So sweet and cute and funny too!