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    When We Were Young

    When We Were Young

     

     

    Tina doesn’t believe me when I tell her that I loved her from the beginning.

     

    It may sound terribly cliché, but I did. Honest to God, I really did.

     

    I know for sure, because those kinds of things, those memories, they stay with you. I have nursed them for almost twenty one years; and that was more than enough time for agonizing and reflecting on such memories to validate the truthfulness of the emotions invoked at that time.

     

    I was certain. I loved her from the beginning.

     

    I was eight, she was seven. I was a rambunctious, hyperactive kid – preferring to play rough with the boys than stay clean and nice and dainty with the girls my age. Tina, on the other hand, was a spunky blonde who, despite her strong personality, preferred the company of her dolls and teddy bears to the otherwise messy and muddy world that I thrived in.  The Kennards had just moved into our neighborhood’s quaint little cul de sac, living two houses from my own home, settling at the long abandoned place that old Mrs. Hewitt had sold before her kids had sent her off to a retirement home in Florida. Young as I was, I had absolutely no concept nor did I even pretend to possess the vaguest understanding of what romantic love was. But despite this fact, when she entered our house for the first time during my cousin’s seventh birthday party with her blonde hair in pigtails and her tiny frame decked out in a gaudy bright pink dress, I thought she was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen.

     

    Tina’s mother, a kind but rather unfortunate soccer mom who was severely lacking in good taste, had the penchant for dressing her three daughters in identical clothing. I’m sure something like that was normal and seen as cute by some; but if your kids were aged seven, ten and twelve respectively, the cuteness factor gets marred by the absurdity and ridiculousness of it all. An all-pink ensemble only works when you’re in preschool, definitely not when you’re at the verge of puberty – as exemplified by the two older Kennard siblings. Her two sisters kept on tugging self-consciously at their clothes. Tina on the other hand, couldn’t care less.  She was rocking that frilly pink dress like nobody’s business.  I was impressed.

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    Comments

    1. Wow.. It was a long post. But am I greedy if I tell you I want more? :P Thanks much for sharing this sweet and fantastic story with us. You have portrayed Bette’s thoughts and feelings so well and articulately. Look forward to your next post ^^

    2. Nice to hacve you back with this one. I love the long postso I am already enjoying the reading before even starting reading it lol. Okay going to read now!!

    3. Thoroughly enjoyed this story. It capatured all the feelings and nuances of first love. All that one feels, the heightened feelings of joy just seeing her, being in her presence and the misery when she wouldn’t acknowledge you. Great story. Thanks for sharing and posting.

    4. Dearest Alchemy10, you always write very mesmerizing stories. Bette becomes very human, clumsy, cute but nevertheless attractive under your pen. Thank you for the entertaining story, I hope you will continue to spin more tales.

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