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When We Were Young
When We Were Young
Tina doesn’t believe me when I tell her that I loved her from the beginning.
It may sound terribly cliché, but I did. Honest to God, I really did.
I know for sure, because those kinds of things, those memories, they stay with you. I have nursed them for almost twenty one years; and that was more than enough time for agonizing and reflecting on such memories to validate the truthfulness of the emotions invoked at that time.
I was certain. I loved her from the beginning.
I was eight, she was seven. I was a rambunctious, hyperactive kid – preferring to play rough with the boys than stay clean and nice and dainty with the girls my age. Tina, on the other hand, was a spunky blonde who, despite her strong personality, preferred the company of her dolls and teddy bears to the otherwise messy and muddy world that I thrived in. The Kennards had just moved into our neighborhood’s quaint little cul de sac, living two houses from my own home, settling at the long abandoned place that old Mrs. Hewitt had sold before her kids had sent her off to a retirement home in Florida. Young as I was, I had absolutely no concept nor did I even pretend to possess the vaguest understanding of what romantic love was. But despite this fact, when she entered our house for the first time during my cousin’s seventh birthday party with her blonde hair in pigtails and her tiny frame decked out in a gaudy bright pink dress, I thought she was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen.
Tina’s mother, a kind but rather unfortunate soccer mom who was severely lacking in good taste, had the penchant for dressing her three daughters in identical clothing. I’m sure something like that was normal and seen as cute by some; but if your kids were aged seven, ten and twelve respectively, the cuteness factor gets marred by the absurdity and ridiculousness of it all. An all-pink ensemble only works when you’re in preschool, definitely not when you’re at the verge of puberty – as exemplified by the two older Kennard siblings. Her two sisters kept on tugging self-consciously at their clothes. Tina on the other hand, couldn’t care less. She was rocking that frilly pink dress like nobody’s business. I was impressed.
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Gosh….that was phenomenon!!
A new story,nice surprise.
I really really enjoyed reading it even if it was hard somtime to feel Bette pain.Thank you for this fantastic story. Wow wow wow!!!
Great story. Your depiction of Bette’s feelings were so clear – her love, her pain, her happiness. Just wonderful.
Oh my Goodness!! That was the sweetest, funniest and greatest story! Made my day. Thank you so very much!
Brilliant! You captured beautifully the awkward, crazy pain of a first/forever love! Thanks for sharing!
A very gorgeous story. Thank you for sharing it with us. “You’re it, Curly tops!” So charming.
Wonderful. Thank you enjoyed every word. Thank you for giving us another story.
This, was perfect. Yet, if you decided to rewrite the phone book, I would read it.
Wow…I’m speechless–this was great! I’ll take your long one-offs anytime! Working on the sequel for JTG 2.0 yet? :)
Seeing this post just made my day loved it what a nice surprise thanks
Wow.. It was a long post. But am I greedy if I tell you I want more? :P Thanks much for sharing this sweet and fantastic story with us. You have portrayed Bette’s thoughts and feelings so well and articulately. Look forward to your next post ^^
This is just as “AMAZING” the second time through as it was the first time. Thank for this incredibly well written story.
oh so cute I love the way they find each other every time in Ur storys
Nice to hacve you back with this one. I love the long postso I am already enjoying the reading before even starting reading it lol. Okay going to read now!!
Really enjoyed reading this
Thoroughly enjoyed this story. It capatured all the feelings and nuances of first love. All that one feels, the heightened feelings of joy just seeing her, being in her presence and the misery when she wouldn’t acknowledge you. Great story. Thanks for sharing and posting.
Dearest Alchemy10, you always write very mesmerizing stories. Bette becomes very human, clumsy, cute but nevertheless attractive under your pen. Thank you for the entertaining story, I hope you will continue to spin more tales.
love stories like this.. a nice look into tibette love….great!
Pure genius
I’ve just joined this site and here is a short I wrote about Bette’s thoughts during Jenny’s Lez Girls party. Please let me know your take on it. I’d be grateful. https://lesfan.com/?p=83822