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White Lie 8
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“I’m going to get another martini,” Bette said to Kit. She didn’t follow up the declaration by asking Kit if she minded. She simply turned toward the bar and started scanning the crowd for a distraction.
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“Thanks for the evening,” Tina said with a smile. “It was nice to get out, but it kind of makes me realize how much of a homebody I am.”
“I’ll walk you to the door,” Brenda offered.
Tina tilted her head to the side and smiled.
“I cut your evening short, take you away from a night out and you’re still being so agreeable,” Tina observed. “Why is that?”
“I guess I’m hoping you’ll share what happened between the dance floor and the exit without my having to explicitly ask,” Brenda said.
“You tend to say what’s on your mind,” Tina laughed.
“It’s the only way I know how to operate,” Brenda replied. “Surgeon humour not intended.”
“Honesty begets honesty,” Tina replied, and sighed.
Brenda reached across the console and took Tina’s hand and let her ponder what she would say next.
“It’s Bette,” Tina admitted.
“I figured.”
“She caught up with us just when we were by the door getting ready to leave,” Tina said.
Brenda merely nodded.
“She broke up with her girlfriend tonight,” Tina finally finished. “And I don’t have to tell you, that kind of shook me up.”
“Well, it’s not often that a woman goes from suggestive comments and not so innocent touching to wanting to spend the night on her own,” Brenda replied. “I had to assume it was something Bette said to you.”
“It’s not fair to me or to you to pretend I’d be anything but distracted if we spent more time together tonight,” Tina had an apologetic tone.
“I appreciate the candor,” Brenda replied, squeezing Tina’s hand lightly. “You’ve got things to figure out. And we barely know each other. It’s only reasonable for you to get things settled.”
“Thanks for understanding,” Tina replied.
“Thanks for telling me what was really going on,” Brenda replied. “If you decide you want to go out again, give me a call. We have fun together.”
“I will,” Tina said.
“But just for the record, I don’t truly expect to hear from you again,” Brenda winked and leaned across to kiss Tina on the cheek. “Good luck with everything.”
Tina was soon putting a sleepy Angelica back to bed after having retrieved her from the neighbour.
She spent a restless night trying to figure out what she should do next.
(tbc)
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What should she do? She should phone Brenda and take the implants out for a test run, play a little doctor, etc., that’s what she should do! Bette’s gonna be moping around for who knows how long. Make her wait. Give her 17 reasons why tractors aren’t sexy. Tina should go the guilt-free badoinkidoink. She’s got the rest of her life, should she choose, to be wrapped up in Betteness.
Dammit :) This is not what I thought would happen. I’ll just wait for Bette’s next move. Or is it gonna be Tina’s? Thanks for posting.
Had no ideal what would happen, Bette is the one to do it.She broke up with Candace one morning ang went looking for Tina to take her back, now she is doing the same thing again. She need to get her life together. Then try to date Tina and stop thinking only of Iwant for Bette thanks
LMAO I thought Soapy meant to removed Brenda’s implants and play with them. XD Well hopefully Bette didn’t find a “distraction.”
I’m glad Bette was honest. Yeah, it comes off like it could be manipulative but she should follow it up by telling Tina she knows what she wants..and is waiting to see if it can happen. It would have been worse to see Tina..and let her think she was still with Jodi until Alice dropped the bomb when Tina was already with Brenda. Brenda seems cool.. and for that I hope Tina stays away from her because we all know that people in the middle of TiBette are just people they are passing the time with who will likely get crushed. So, yeah, I actually like what you had Bette do here. Be honest. Let Tina make her own decisions.
I understand. Bette is sitting on a bar stool, sipping her martini, distracted by counting the number of Jimmy Choo’s? It’s distraction by fashion!! At least I hope so. (BTW, when I read DropTheSoap’s comment, I thought ths last word was “BetteMess,” which is kinda fitting. In the nicest possible way, of course.) Thanks for another great chapter.
Wonderful quote! I know exactly where it is from, and it has touched me every time I hear it. What will Tina do? Well, here is another quote that will give away my age, “I’m leavin it up to you ou ou, you decide what you’re going to do.” – Donny Osmond LOL Thanks!
Interesting, interesting, Ms. Swimmie. Rather than going for the quick fix we’ve got reunion delayed? Destracted? Belayed? Hmm.
I like Brenda…BUT…I hope Bette doesn’t get trashed and agro…no suggestions of where to and how to this time…I’ll leave it to the expert…but more soon plz.
Great post!
i think bette should pay tina a visit…just in case ;)
its always wonderful that your stories give us people actually thinking before they leap. just love it as always. but wonder what your gonna do with us. thx
Oh damn…now Bette’s going to think that Tina spent the night with Brenda. More misunderstanding between them. I hope Bette isn’t going to get drunk and pick someone up for a one night stand. Hopefully Kit will be there to steer her straight! Great update JKS!
i see drama.. Tina should call Bette at least.. otherwise Bette will get the wrong msg of what she saw..
Damn, damn, damn! The “Next post by this author” link doesn’t work! Damn, damn, damn!
Wow. a drunk Bette is never a good Bette…
Since I know you thrive on plot points, here’s one from me. Bette should go from the obtuse c_ _ k-block to the full-out interception: She needs to get herself over to Tina’s with the objective of laying in the bed between them if need be. Never say die!!! Any woman who would drive a tractor pulling a sign has no shame anyway. Go for it, Bette!
I hope that Bette is not in the Planet picking some one up. I know that Tina is trying to do what is best for her, Angie and for Bette. My vote is for them to make up and date each other.
Noooooooo Lamentapotato…. Brenda’s chesticles should stay where they’re currently implanted and Tina should take a wander through the mountains. Maybe Bette can spelunk to find her in a few weeks or so.
Damm good post.
Bette’s timing is i dunno crazy.manipulative a bit did she think tina would leave with her. tina is not going to blow off brenda just bette had some revelation here…isee bette is still running and playing games, she needed to say more than that to tina… why does she always leave tina is this spot to fix everything??? this is not what i was expecting… but a great chapter and kudos for bette finally speaking up… :)
Thanks for writing.
I don’t expect Brenda, the BBBW, to hear from Tina again either. Heheh :P I think Bette did the right thing…and Tina did the right thing…and now you gotta do the write thing… :) Thanks, swim!
Great update. Looking forward to more.
I didn’t think you would take the easy route and have them reconcile so quickly. Where’s the fun in that ? Alright, I’m buckled in for ride JKS. Let the drama ensue. PS
I really like where you took this chapter, especially the bit where Bette put it out there and left Tina to decide. Nice going! But seriously though, we need more.
Bette thinks she is giving Tina free information, but she doesn’t tell Tina she still loves her nor does she say she wants to figure out where to go from there. Bette needs to pull her head together and decide if she is really ready to sacrifice for Tina and Angelica.
Okay, I know I’m a little late, but I’m going to leave a comment anyways. Why did Bette just leave like that after telling Tina that she broke up with Jodi?? Did she want Tina to feel sorry for her??? Anyways, thanks for the update…
That was good, well she should call Bette and have a talk!