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Who am I? But more importantly who the fuck are you? (7)
The source of light within the first floor of the building was a single bare bulb. It cast harsh shadows against the concrete walls. There were several figures scattered around the room some in dark corners and others sitting on crates among the debris playing cards on a makeshift table. The smell of cigarette smoke and dust was mixed with scent of stale beer which added to the dilapidated feel. The situation made Bette slightly uneasy and she thought that the sooner she got out of here the better. Ok the situation made Bette very uneasy.
She turned to the man who had answered the door Im here to see someone about an artwork she said. Her voice came out on a single tone giving away nothing.
The grizzly door man grunted something and motioned towards the stairs. Bette stood her ground and indicated for him to lead her. There was no way that she would trust this guy at her back.
The small creek of her heels on the stairs was dwarfed by the disgruntled thudding steps of the man leading her. Once they had reached the head of the tired pine stairs. The man stood to one side and gestured to the other. The grimy walls of the corridor led to a single door. Bette strode along the length of the corridor her progression slightly muffled by rotting carpet. She reached the door and grasped the *****, hearing the mans heavy footsteps descending behind her.
The ***** turned quietly and the door swung open with ease. Bette had a brief flash of a thought that she should have considered knocking. But it was gone in an instant. Her jaw dropped in recognition at the person sitting behind the heavy mahogany desk. The room was almost the opposite of the downstairs part of the warehouse like building. It would have originally been the managers office. There was thick rich burgundy carpet underfoot and the heat given off by a marble fireplace gave the room an almost cosy feeling. Despite the warmth Bette felt the icy tingle of fear sliding down her back.
Um Hi Dana..? she stammered. Bette was very confused. Under Danas stare she felt like a naughty school girl sent to the principals office she dropped her eyes and scuffed her foot I came here to pick up a painting, uh, the artist is Rosita Betts words died on her lips. She had realised just how ridiculous this was.
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It seems that im the only one that poisted . Luv it 5stars please post again!!!!!!!!!!
The site was down for awhile. I’m going to help your percentage rate. Love this. Alice is so combatage. really do like this thanks
Great story….. You know I love it…… I don’t even know why I failed to comment on your last chapter. BAD ME!!! Stunned Mullet!! LMAO. I know what it is…. I KNOW I KNOW….. PICK ME!!!! PICK ME!! *jumps up and down* DER… you already explained. PSSSHHH Lucky we have you here to explain these things. Can’t wait for the next chaper.
i love the fact that dana toyed with the idea of killing bette so perfect. The slap priceless.
bravo bravo
ok this sucks Ass!!!
I swear I had already written like two comments!!! Did u see them? and then the site went down…. ok, here goes again!!
Firstly thanks for the leather chair and Mr P shout out dude MWAH. Can we see Dana in an Elekta outfit next??! Also I had the sweeetest dream last night about “Naughty School Girl Bette”, niiiice!
My favortie part of this chapter by miles was… “Dana leaned forward coming closer to Bette with an equally warm smile on her face. And with that she gave Bette a forceful slap across her face..” wot I would give to see Bettes Face after that!!!PRICELESS! *insert Evil Dana laugh here*
ok ok, winding down the comment now… AWSOME, OUTSTANDING, ORIGINAL and HILERIOUS!! Hopefully there will be another amazing chapter before monday *wink wink* if not, see ya when I get back!!
I forgot to ask….Where is Marina???????? hehehehe. And u really need to stop encouraging me to piss off my lecturers they have a hard enuff time with me just being there!!
But this line i definetly have to work into my day, some how…”well its not like you get paid any differently” ahahahaha! *walks away trying to concoct evil ways to piss people off*