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Who’s Shane McCutchoen?
Carmen woke up from their afternoon nap to find Shane’s hand holding her waist almost in spoonigh position. Carmen did not move because she didn’t want to wake Shane up. But Shane is a deep sleeper, and also a messy sleeper, she practically occupied the whole bed, with her long skinny limbs spread out.
Carmen got up and went to teh bathroom to freshen up and get ready for their first evening in NY. She has never been in NY before. After she came out she saw Shane lying on her stomach with her hand hanging from the bed.
"Shane, Wake up!! its almost 6:30….come on Shane"
"HMmmmmmmmmmmmmm" came the sleepy reply….
"Shane I am serious….wake up"
This time Shane opened her eyes…….and looked at Carmen sleepily. Carmen couldn’t help but smile at Shane’s cute and confused look. She really likes Shane, Shane is nice, gentle and caring, everything that Jordan wasn’t. Now Carmen thinks that she really shouldn’t have married JOrdan, just because Jordan made her think that it was her Papi’s last wish.
"why can’t I sleep a little more"
"Okay…then 5 more minutes" Carmen couldn’t help but give in. Carmen started getting ready. As she was slipping in her dress in front of the mirror, she caught Shane looking at her through the mirror. As she turned to see Shane, Shane pretended to close her eyes and sleep. Carmen couldn’t help but think how cute Shane is, but she enjoyed the attention. So she decided not to notice and tried to zip up her dress and was struggling with it….until she felt someone doing it for her….She got startled and looked in the mirror to see Shane standing right behind her, Carmen felt a jolt as Shane’s finger gently brush her exposed back. Carmen took a deep breath, she felt hot….and wanted to Shane take Shane right there. But there is soo much to deal with right now…she didn’t even know if Shane felt the same way about her. God….why is Shane looking at her with those big green eyes of her….Carmen could take her eyes off….only if she knew how badly Shane wanted to kiss Carmen right now…..
’knock knock’
"Let me get that" Shane said in her low husky voice as she sauntered toward the door. It was the a messege from Carmen’s family "a happy honeymoon" card….HOW SWEET! Shane thought….
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your really enjoying leaving us hanging huh lol…wicked great chap