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Why, Bette? (Part 6)
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“Thanks.”
“Bye.” As the outer door to her offices closed, Suzanne stood at the entrance to her private office and thought that Tina and Bette did actually make a good couple. They were as different as night and day, but in session, it was evident that they felt so much love for each other.
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At home, Bette examined the wine choices in the rack before deciding on one that they had purchased some time ago. The 1998 Penfolds ‘Bin 389’ Cabernet Sauvignon/Shiraz was a special occasion wine and tonight would definitely be special. She placed the bottle in the fridge and checked her watch. The Asian Inspirations people should be pulling up any time. At least they’d better, she thought.
Bette walked to the bedroom. It was strange to see the room so empty. She and Tina had taken the bed apart last night, putting the frame and mattress out in the back for a women’s shelter to pick up. They had slept on the floor. Tonight, they’d have their new bed.
Bette scoped out the outfits in her closet. Nothing jumped out at her. At the dresser, she rummaged through her pants and shirts until she found a pair of drawstring pale blue cotton pants. She remembered that she had a cute top in the closet that she’d only worn once, but Tina had complimented her on it. The top was white and billowy. The sleeves were blousy and full, the collar rounded and it tied in front with three strips of cloth at equal intervals up and down the blouse. The whole outfit had an Asian feel to it.
Bette returned to the dresser and opened her top drawer. She found one of her favorite lingerie outfits–a cobalt blue thong and matching bra. She took all of the clothes into the bathroom and placed them on the shelf before returning to the kitchen. Picking up the landline, she dialed the Center’s number.
“May I speak with Tina Kennard, please?” she said to the person who picked up.
“Hold a second. I’ll see if she’s around.”
Bette leaned against the counter and stared out at the pool while she waited. She had been on hold at least two minutes and wondered if the person had forgotten about her. She was just about to hang up and call back when the doorbell rang. She shrugged and placed the phone in the cradle.
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Portia, your story is pure genius. Congrats on finishing, and I so look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Portia just read your series excellent!!
Please write some more. Wonderful series.
I have been patiently waiting for your new chapter, wow was I blown away. I just Loved how you told your story with so much love along with the heartache that a couple feels with infidelity. It is the most intimate betrayle ones partner can do. It opens up so many doubts which you have explored thru your story along with ” we all have our own stories of our childhood” you also explored that thru your story which tells a lot how one’s behavior is in a relationship. I hope that you write more for us readers to enjoy. Thank-you very much.
This series was amazing!!!!
Portia, I just hope that my We are Family! Series comes out a fraction as good as this series was. You’re good, write some more, please! :D
Such detail, such intensity, such love…you just let it all out with full humility…I hope you find time to give us a deeper look into your delicious imagination…I’m a true Portia fan forever!!!
excelent story
PortiaOnly, you did an astonoshing work…really truly amazing…i think it’s the best confrontation between bette and candace that i read – ” fucking is not a relationship”…really cool and strong…too bad you finished…
Portia–This series has been so incredibly well done. Your final chapters were well worth the wait. Hope that we can look forward to more great work from your talented self.
Brava!!
This is a great and captivating fanfic!! Are you sure it is the end? There are still loose ends like Bette not wanting to discuss her mother with the therapist yet, couple counseling (is it over?), hot love-making on the night of exchanging rings…you know :)
u r an amazing writer . u truly moved me and made it all seem so real . thank u for your creativity . i only wish the writers and the producers of TLW r able to create such truth, deepth, insight, dignity, and determination to rebuild their characters broken trust.
Portia, you are an incredible writer with amazing talent. This was written so beautifully, I was moved to tears on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us. I eagerly await your next story.
Thank you for the final chapter. This story tops my list…
Great work!
I’ve greatly enjoyed you story.You’ve done a great job making us feel all the emotiona that Bette&Tina feel or felt.
Portia – I loved your tory – I printed the whole thing out & read it like a novel – you write so fluidly and handle powerful emotion and angst so well and then wrap it all up neatly – what more could we ask for – a good meaty read – I admire greatly the ability to get into the head of a character – I can’t write for Toffee – but I read avidly. Please do create more of this quality – I’ll start your next story & keep looking out for your name. Thanks
Bravo! Very well done! Your descriptions were fantastic. I will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Just find out your story….
Woah, you are gooood!! Words can not describe the feelings and thoughts that keeps running through my body, heart and mind everytime I read the lines of emotions between B&T!
I’m gonna read all your stories!
Please, keep up the good thing going and THANK YOU PORTIA, for sharing!!!