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    Why did she do this? chapter 42…sorta….

    Story written on December 22, 2004 by wildtouch.
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    Okay, everyoneI am not sure whether to make Chapter 41 the last chapter to this fic.or to continue on..I have brought Tina and Bette back together through a very rough timeand they have finally made love since the breakupwhich is how I wanted it.but, unfortunately.now.I am stuck…I am not sure what to do..I would appreciate any comments on this.and any suggestions as to where to go next..or whether I should even continue..
    Thanx to all of the loyal readers and followerswithout all of you..I would never have been able to write past chapter 5.u all kept me goingnowhelp me decide what to do
    Thanx to all..Wildtouch

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    1. i think you have done a great job so far. some ideas could be that something happens to eric, candace returns, tina gets pregnant….something with a twist of drama. life is always filled with twists and the unexpected. hope this helps.. i envy you and your writing capabilities. you have put a lot of feelings, emotions and warmth in your story keep up the great work….

    2. Making love doesn’t solve all of their problems including Tina’s initial motivations to cheat. Nor does magically prevent Bette from ever feeling insecure in the future. You definitely have potential for many more chapters. Basically, I think, it depends on whether you feel that there is more story here that you wish to tell. To me, the entire point of writing is that you have stories which you wish to tell. What stories do what to tell us?

    3. i totally agreed with all that you did a great job and much as I like the story to continue – why not have a closure on their 2nd commitment – make it something beautiful and more meaningful than the first commiment ceremony and get the rest of the gang have their thoughts abt this. It could be a ‘growing’ up session for shane, jenny etc
      Merry christmas

    7. Hey Wildtouch… how about you rest that creative muscles of yours for a bit I mean this being Christmas and all. Go on have a blast! You sure as hell deserve it. Personally I have enjoyed this story of yours immensely. You know the fact that these two are back together it doesn’t mean that’s the end of their journey. Personally I think you can still stretch the HIV thingy for a tad bit further (duck quickly from Tina’s fans for rotten eggs and broken bottles * grins *) I see it as your trump card to give this story the punch, twist, drama it needs. It would be nice to see how strong the bond these two have in the face of adversity. That said, fret not dear bard a good storyteller that you are and I am sure once that creative juice deep within you stirs you will come up with something spectacular your fingers will dance away on the keyboard with a vengeance!

    8. Please continue, this story has grown on me. You could explore why Tina cheated and how she is going to keep from doing it again, how her cheating has changed the confident Bette we all know, introduce a couple of new characters and have them play off B&T, let them try for a baby with Bette carrying and Tina taking on the provider role. The list is endless. Basically, go where your heart leads you. If you write it…readers will come or should I say follow.

    11. i think you have done a brilliant job so far …. i think i would be great if you continued maybe with their future together maybe family … but i definatley think you should continue i love this story! … :-D

    12. I agree…enjoy the holidays, have a blast…I loved this story and I’d like to know why Tina cheated too…I probably couldn’t have gone back so “easily” as Bette did…anything you write Wildtouch will be awesome.

    15. Wildtough, i’ll be here waiting for you to continue this story or start a new one…i enjoy your creativity very much…

      (that’s right lovenhonor, you better duck quickly…as i’m throwing everything in my fridge at ya)

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