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Wish You Were Here: Chapter Five
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“She would have adored you; she was so excited when we found out that we were going to have you; did you know she painted that mural in your bedroom herself?”
“She did?”
“Yep; she was so anxious to meet you…Angie she would have loved you…in fact I know that she already did; even before you were born.”
Angelica smiled. It was only recently that she started to ask about the unknown woman in all of the pictures Tina had around the house. Tina wanted Angelica to know who Bette was; the mother that she would never know.
“Why don’t you help me with Mommy B’s things; well put them in my trunk okay?”
Angelica nodded and picked up a small pile of clothes. She and Tina carefully packed them into the trunk; along with Bette’s shoes and a few other things.
Tina looked over at the bureau; she realized she had forgotten Bette’s jewelry.
“Ange; hand me that brown jewelry box please.”
Angelica handed the box to Tina. “What’s that?”
“You’re mother’s jewelry box…do you want to look?”
Angelica nodded her head and sat down on the floor next to Tina as they looked through the box.
One piece of jewelry had caught Angelica’s eye. It was a diamond ring; a ring that her mother had left Bette when she was younger.
“This one is pretty.”
“Do you like it?”
Tina watched as Angelica tried it on each of her very small fingers; it didn’t fit a single one.
Tina found a silver chain in the jewelry box and took the ring from Angelica. She slid the ring onto the chain; and then she placed it around Angelica’s neck.
“I think she would want you to have it; her mother had given it to her.”
“Wow…” Angelica said as she carefully examined the diamond ring.
“Just be careful and don’t loose it.”
“I won’t.” Angelica said smiling.
“Why don’t you go get cleaned up and I’ll get dinner ready?”
“Okay.”
Angelica ran into her room. Tina finished putting away the last of Bette’s things and closed the trunk.
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A Hospital in Hawaii…
“Any change?” the doctor asked.
The nurse flipped through her charts. “Nothing yet.”
The doctor sighed; it was the same thing everyday.
Just as the doctor was leaving the nurse called him back into the room.
“Wait doctor…I think…her eyes…she’s awake…”
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please post again soon.. please make this a bette and tina reunion..
I just found this story and I read it in one deep breath. I can’t wait to see how Tina will react when she sees Bette. I wonder if Bette even knows who Tina is. Does Bette even know how her life was before she wakes up. So please post soon.
Man, I had the big knot in my throat while I was reading Tina putting Bette’s clothes away. I hope it’s Bette in that hospital. I say Bette and Tina reunite, have another baby, and live happily ever after. I also agree with Audi’s thoughts on Lexi. LOL
“Once again sorry for making you wait so long.” You don’t owe us a thing. We owe you for writing!
I can’t remember, did Tom get the girl back in castaway…God you had me crying right up til the end…Thanks!!
WOW!!! This just keeps getting better. I knew Bette wopuld be alive. I just hope she can remember her life. Thanks PPWYC
I’m so glad that we have some hope for Bette and Tina. I want Bette to open her eyes; jump out the bed and i don’t care if she has to swim back to Tina and Angelica.
Please, please let this be Bette!
Yes Yes yes Love it hope this would happen, nae luck Lexi, but them the breaks PPS
Yes! Yes! Yes! Please CxS … just … please!! *You know!* As far as the weather goes in WA… here’s what I wish for you: May the sun rise up and wrap her warm rays around your heart, and the wind calm to a gentle breeze, slipping right in to you and soothing your soul.
Don’t get shy now, on with it girl!
i knew it too, but bette better hurry before tina made a huge mistake….to answer hinda, no, Tom didn’t get the girl, though it was apparent that they still loved each other…i just hope bette doesn’t have amnesia
I sure hope that it is Bette that is the hospital in Hawaii. Tina and Angelica need her and Bette needs them as much as they do.
please post soon. poor Lexi. She can’t compete with Bette. I love Angie, and can’t wait for her to meet her mamab.
Like a sap I started to tear up so I skipped ahead to see if the whole chapter would be tear-inducing. It’s safe to finish it now at work. LOL
Wow. It is getting interesting now. So Bette is also alife. Good I already of beginning on suspected. Tina has packed Bette’s things away now. But I hope that there will be one Happy End for Bette and Tina. I would not want that Lexi moves in with Tina. Only strange, that no man has identified Bette after 5 years. There finally are passenger lists. Please continue fast. It can hardly expect how it goes on. Please write longer chapters. PPS
I do believe you story is going to get better. Angie and her Mama B will soon be together thanks.
I was going to say it hurt a lot, but then… then! I’m sitting on the edge of my seat!!!!?!
Awesome! I don’t really care if Lexi gets hurt. That might be callous.. but its fanfiction so.. I guess its alright. I can’t WAIT for Bette/Tina to meet again.
Finally my Bette is here and alive and let see her wake up and hope she till have her memory!