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with no limits – chapter 9: when denial’s walls collapse
Carmen was unquestionably blindsided and tried to hold back a smile so she just said, “I don’t want to be totally rude to your friends… We could bounce, if it’s all right with them.” She looked at the direction of the swimming pool, checking to see if the group cared less without them in the background.
Shane glanced at her friends as well. “It sure looks like they’re having the time of their lives…”
Shane took the keys to Mark’s car from the key holders just beside the front door. Mark disliked the idea of having to go through the garage to get to his car so he always parked it up front, raining or not. He was always on the go; being a “filmmaker”, he was ever ready to point the camera toward the latest action happening around West Los Angeles. “Perfect.”
Shane jumped in Mark’s sedan, started the car, and waited for Carmen to go out the door. Carmen was still notifying the group where she’ll be heading. In just several minutes, Carmen was already riding shotgun beside Shane, on their way to the Planet to grab a decent bite.
9:30pm Morales’ Residence
Shane stopped the car across Carmen’s two-storey house. It was nowhere as big as hers but the house sure gave out a very homey feel even from the outside – perhaps, because of the Mexicans’ family traditions. “See? I told you I remember the way to where you live. I’ve been driving around everywhere for too long and I guess I’ve developed a great nose for direction.” Shane smiled.
“You wanna come in for a while? You know, meet my sister and her husband. I promise you, it won’t take too long.” Carmen requested.
“Meet your family? I’m not too good with that kind of arrangement…” She scratches the back of her head… “But okay… Since we’re already here.”
“Thanks.”
Carmen was taken aback to find a note from her sister saying she and her hubby had already gone to the airport to pick their mother up. “Oh, no… I completely forgot… My mom was arriving in LA tonight.”
“Really? Sorry, I guess it was my fault then…”
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(8 votes, average: 4.13 out of 5)
i love this fic, always leaves me wanting more. love that shane and carmen are finally sort of getting together, also i cant wait to find out what this underground thing is about sounds interesting. anyways another great update and pps, i cnat wait for more. :P
Will Shane EVER learn to stop letting that damn phone interrupt hot times?Great story. Please update soon.
underground hmm interesting!great update post again soon plz