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Work to Do Chapter 9
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Dr. Rudnick’s Office, Thursday afternoon-
Alice slapped shut her cell phone in frustration. She looked out
the window again for Dana’s car. ‘So much for time to talk before
meeting with Stella,’ she thought.
Alice had gone by Dana’s condo twice hoping to see her before
their session. Missing Dana both times, she’d finally left a message on
her cell asking her to come early to Dr. Rudnick’s.
Alice wanted to clear up any misunderstanding Dana might have had about
Alice’s conversation with Shane earlier. She knew that Shane had told
Dana that Alice said she didn’t want to get back together. “Great start
to therapy,” she shook her head.
Dr. Rudnick’s receptionist, Mary, asked Alice again if she’d like
to wait in Dr. Rudnick’s office. She was being polite, it was two
minutes after their session should be starting. Alice bit her lip,
looking at the door again.
“Sorry. I guess I’ll just go in, she can join us when she gets here.”
Dr. Rudnick was reading thru some notes when Alice joined her. “Hey
Doc. Sorry to keep you waiting. I was hoping to see Dana,” Alice
explained.
Dr. Rudnick clasped Alice’s hand in hers as she greeted her.
“Well, Dana’s normally extremely punctual, I’m sure she’ll be along shortly. It’s good to see you Alice.”
The sound of a chair falling in the waiting room announced Dana’s
arrival. She was still apologizing to Mary as she made her way into
Stella’s office.
“Hi Ladies,” she waved, blushing a bit. “Sorry I’m late, traffic.” She offered simply.
“Hey.” Alice greeted her carefully.
“Hi Al.” Dana replied easily. She gave her a little smile, “Odd to see you in the daytime,” she joked.
“Odd to see you at all,” Alice answered. “I guess the sleeping is going well.”
Dana ignored her tone. “I’m sleeping okay.”
She knew Alice was wondering where she had been all week. She hadn’t
been particularly hiding from her; she just hadn’t been looking for her
either.
She knew Alice had told Shane about her plans to join Dana in therapy.
She had also informed her that they weren’t going to get back together.
Dana had no thoughts of trying to change Alice’s mind. She wasn’t even
sure what she wanted, but it bothered her that Alice not only seemed to
have already made up her mind, but had talked to Shane about it before
Dana. ‘Why are we even going to see a therapist together?’ Dana had
wondered.
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“Would you like a kiss good night?” – Yes I do! LOL you’re an evil tease too. I love the famillarity they shared in the last scene, going about their nightly routine together without a
second thought. It’s so intimate and clearly shows the connection they shared despite the situation.
Another great chapter. Still waiting for the wild sex scene. Seriously though, loved the theraphy session and the nightly routine.
Layla Gray is right – such a tease! :-) Your chapter was definitely worth delaying my viewing of DH. I liked how they were able to talk to each other at the doctor’s office as though she weren’t there. I can’t wait to see how Dana and Alice proceed. Thank God for fanfiction. lol
Loved the way you depict Alice and Dana’s interactions with each other. Lookin forward to your next chapter. Thanks for the great writing!!!
I am one of your biggest fan Cape, this is one of my favorite story. Please post soon and hey? Check your PMs :) Both in l-word and MB
Thanks God for Mondays (never thought I would write that)! Really loving your story – you write pain and love so easily – Fantabulous!!!
I feel cheated. You lured me in here with the promise of a wild sex scene. Hmph! *sticks tongue out*
Okay, it was worth it anyway. Another great chapter. Looking forward to the next one. Oh, by the way, a wild sex scene would still be nice… =)
I am glad to see that they both want to see where they will end up even if it is as friends or lovers can’t wait to find out so please post soon I love it
I have to get up earlier on Mondays now since I know that you and layla will have both posted then (and I’m still suspicious about that). Anyway, I would obviously make a terrible couples therapist as all I could think of when Alice slid down the wall was the promise that “wild sex scenes ensue” . . . ! And since I always tell you what my favourite line was, I think this week it’s, “The look she gave Alice both broke her heart and stole it”. Ah, you’ll turn me into a romantic yet! Nice chapter.