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World In Static
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In the next two months Tina had been learning to be functional in the world again. Her friends stopped badgering her every 2 minutes, instead it was every 10. One morning at the Planet she made a startling revelation to the group.
“I think I’m going to see Bette” she blurted out in the middle of
Everyone at the table looked up startled as Shane put her hand gently on Tina’s.
“Are you sure T? I mean, last timeno offense but you were a wreck for a good couple weeks. And you didn’t even get close.”
Tina smiled sadly at her friend’s concern.
“Yeah, I remember. But I think it’s time that I start to get certain things back to normal. I just don’t want to hurt so much anymore. I think it’ll help to be honest.”
“Do you want me to come with?”
Tina smiled sweetly, “Thanks Al. I think this is something I need to do alone though.”
With that, she said goodbye to the gang and started her day.
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As her day wound down she grew increasingly anxious. Leaving the office she went by the florist to buy a single white rose, all the while feeling the urge to turn the car around and go home. Finally arriving at her destination she pulled the car over and got out.
As night settled down around her, with faint pink and orange streaks melting into the dark, she made her way down the gravel path and over the grass to her waiting love.
Releasing the rose from her sweaty palm she gently placed it on the marble headstone as she knelt in the soft earth. The coming night’s wind swept across her face, it was then she realized that her face was dripping with unnoticed tears.
Without wiping them away she let out a choked and short laugh. Running her fingers over the words carved in stone, words that would serve to let the world know that this person was loved endlessly, for eternity; she decided that she wouldn’t waste this trip like the others. After she had filled Bette in on everything that had been happening she found herself unable to stop talking once she had started.
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You sure know how to shock a girl!! I missed you and am so happy you are ok and BACK!!! I think you’re one of the best authors on the site and I am so looking forward to this new journey…
So very good and so very sad, hope you continue.
Nice that you are back.
Thank you.
Fergz – im with you. this is way to painful.
Honda – yes do a different something. wow
didnt know you were gone. so i guess ill have to go and read your others. hopefully by the time i get back to this one, bette has been abducted by aliens and shes fine. cuz a dead bette. hell no, i cant go there. written beautifully tho.
my heart broken into pieces… how could you… ok.. GREAT STORY!! love it..
WOW!!! I’m actually crying…well done….if i were tina i wud just lie there and rott away!
OMY FU**ING GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i CAN’T BELIEVE YOU’RE BACK. WELCOME BACK. You were soo missed. Great comeback, can’t wait for more =)
(can you tell I’m happy. WTF with all the capitals???)
Wow, when i began to read I didn’t think it would lead to the cemetary.Beautifully captured.
Here I am reading normally, really enjoying the story and getting into it…thinking Hmmm did bette stay with Candace??? Then BANG!!!!! A burst of tears…Glad your back, but I can’t take this sadness, breaks my heart too much…pls do a different story..plsssseee How is it that we can get soo emotional over ficticious characters…good writing!!! tks
6 That was a shocker. I just through that they had broken up. Never though of Bette dying. .Welcome back Thanks
Welcome back! I hope to see the return of little Wey and also see if Tina overcomes her addiction in your other story.
wow..never thought it would end up in the cemetary…beautifully written…poor tina…
My dear friend,
I am sooooooooooo glad you have decided to come back and keep writing. I have missed you immensly. What a fantastic piece of writing. I have always believed in you SpUnKy, and if you don’t know it by now…. then…. you better get back around so I can keep telling you. In just 3 days I am leaving Australia, and you have missed the build up….. I can’t wait to talk to you again… just like old times… Anyway… hit me up with an email. Luv ya bunches!
Giz
Sorry dont think i can continue to read this unless you can change it to something like Tina thought Bette died in a plane crash but really survived and been in a coma. Tina had the stone laid just as a memory. Am i telling you how to write a story? Sorry. This is just to sad
DANA… baby how are you… i am so srooy you never made it to CAL. hope all is well… where are you living and i hope your happy… drop me an e mail let me know…
now this story.. your killing me… so just have bette move over… i hope its a dream or tina is in a coma … something..
welcome back…
SOOOOO Glad your back!!! That was one powerful(sad) but very powerful. Please continue to write you really get to my heart with your words..I am sorry things haven’t been going to well for you but I hope you are getting back on track..Post soon and again welcome back…
Please let this be a really really really bad dream. I can handle Bette’s infidelity, I can cope with Tina staying with Helena, or whatever else people want to do to Bette and Tina to keep them apart. But death? I really didn’t expect that as I read down the page. Not to say that this wasn’t well written, because it was, but if there’s no chance of them being back together I don’t know if I can read another chapter. I know they’re not real but you get invested in these characters and…please don’t let Bette be dead!
OMG..please let this be dream. You made me cry…and that is something. thank you
i love bette and tina together they make fan fiction the bomb. but plese bring bette back.make it like she was in a bad accident and cant remember who she is,u know tina will be a basket case without her bette.
welcome back!!! haven’t seen you in a while and been missing you. more refined that’s for sure. i really didn’t expect Tina would be talking to a headstone.
Glad to see you’re back, but sad with the story, it’s so heart breaking. However, even I can’t like Bette is dead, I would like to see whrere it goes. Good writing.
How are you it’s been a while Whoa! I hope everything it good! and Thanks for writing back I’m happy that your continue writing this Whoa! WELCOME BACK FireCracker I’m so happy to see your back that was great PLEASE continue this Story and I’ll know that you still alot of Fun in here LOL! Whoa! I Love it Thanks!!
Very very good but to sad, we want our two favouite girls to be together. Welcome back though and post soon