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Worth Holding On Too Chapter 8
Carmen and Jess walked outside, Carmen put the alarm on and locked the door and then ran to her car. Jess watched her confused.
“Had to get your present” Carmen smiled
Jess smiled taking Carmen’s hand as they got into the limo.
“Ok so where we going?” Carmen asked
“Wait and see” Jess smiled “you’ll like it”
Carmen cuddled into Jess. “Ok”
20 minutes later they pulled up.
“Ok so close your eyes”
“Really?” Carmen asked
“No I’m joking! Yes really” Jess said sarcastically
“Good to see the old you making an appearance” Carmen smirked “So how do I get out the limo without breaking a leg?”
Jess couldn’t help but laugh “I’ll help you”
Jess helped Carmen out the Limo and led her into the secluded cottage.
“Ok open” Jess smiled
“Wow erm okay” Carmen said looking around the cottage
Jess had arranged all Carmen’s presents to be brought here and also organised rose petals to be scattered everywhere and candles lit.
She walked over lifting the bouquet of roses and handed them to Carmen.
“Their beautiful” Carmen smiled “thank you”
“You’re beautiful and I love you” Jess stated “I wanted to bring you somewhere where it’s just us no-one else and we could chill out and relax together”
“It’s amazing baby” Carmen smiled
“I love the fact you leave clothes at mine or I would have had to sneak into yours and get your overnight bag” Jess smirked “And I’d have failed because you haven’t been to sleep”
Carmen smiled
“Let me show you the rest of the cottage” Jess smiled taking Carmen’s hand
They reached the last room in the house, Jess opened the bedroom door and revealed the bedroom that was lightly lit with candles and rose petals scattered over the bed. Lying on the bed was the teddy Jess had got Carmen and her card along with a love heart shaped box of chocolates.
“Oh my god, your so cute baby” Carmen said turning to face Jess “How did you do all this?”
“I’m clever” Jess smirked
Carmen walked over to the bed opening her card, she smiled as she read it. “Baby I love you so much”
“I love you too” Jess smiled
Carmen sat the teddy and chocolates on the bedside table, she got up and walked over to Jess kissing her softly “let me go get your present”
“Ok but I have one more first” Jess smiled handing her a small bag
Carmen opened the bag and then the box that was inside revealing a Swarovski bracelet with hearts and a key on it.
“Aww baby I love it” Carmen smiled
“Let me help you” Jess said helping Carmen to put it on “it basically means you own the key to my heart”
“I’ll guard your heart with my life” Carmen said looking straight into Jess’s eyes
“I know you will” Jess smiled
“Ok let me go get your present” Carmen smiled
Carmen came back in and handed Jess a bag.
“So what do you get the girl who has everything?” Carmen smirked
Jess opened her card first; she like Carmen smiled when reading it.
“Your better at the whole words stuff than me” Jess smirked
“Absolutely not” Carmen stated
She pulled out her single rose and smiled, she then pulled out an artificial one.
“Love doesn’t die” Carmen smirked
“See your better I’d have never of thought of that” Jess smiled
Lastly Jess opened a box with an Armani watch”
“This is the one I wanted how did you know? What one told you?” Jess smirked
“I know my girlfriend pretty well to be honest” Carmen smiled “I also got you something else but I forgot to lift it so I’ll get you it tomorrow, it’s in my locker at work”
“I love my present’s thank you” Jess said kissing Carmen
“I love mine” Carmen smiled “and I’m sorry I’m in a bad mood today”
“Not your fault you’ve had no sleep” Jess smiled “How about you get some sleep”
“Wide awake now” Carmen explained “But I’m sure I could be tired out”
“Oh really?” Jess smiled
“Really!” Carmen stated crashing her lips into Jess’s
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(9 votes, average: 4.89 out of 5)
Enjoyed it a lot, glad everything worked out with the shooting. I thought Lisa was the one to be seriously hurt but poor Jess was the unlucky one again. Thanks
Love this story and the way you move it along. Look forward to the next posting which should be the Wedding I hope?
Thanks for the update. Bette and Tina living in a full house with their kids and partners. It is like a dream come true. Thanks for sharing this dream with us.
Really enjoyed the story looking forward to the next update
I love this story because it has the daily life of a family, with their joys and sorrows.
I love the family Porter-Kennard.
Agurado new chapter.
Congratulations!
Oh my drama rama. I had a feeling Kristy would be back. I am not accusing any one of anything, but it seems to me that either you work oh the TV show The Fosters, or they must have read this fanfic. There are so many similarities in this chapter alone that happened on their show.