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Worth Holding On Too Chapter 8
Before anyone could react Jace had kicked the door in
“Don’t come near our I will blow her brains out!” Kirsty stated pointing the gun to Carmen’s head
“Jace don’t” Lisa managed to get out she was bleeding
“What the fuck is your problem” Jess snapped “It’s me you want shoot me if it will make you feel better”
Andrew and Declan both were trying to gain entry round the back of the cabin.
Jess moved towards Lisa.
“JESS GET THE FUCK AWAY FROM HER!” Kirsty shouted “Our Carmen won’t be breathing for much longer”
Lisa was beginning to get weaker. Jess froze on the spot she felt she was getting pulled in two directions, to help Lisa she jeopardised Carmen and she couldn’t do that.
“Let me help Lisa” Bette stated
Kirsty walked over to Lisa she shook her causing Lisa to open her eyes again
“She’s fine”
Carmen moved her hands free out the knot they were in, she noticed Andrew and Declan at the side door. Andrew signalled for her to be quiet.
“Kirsty police have this place surrounded” Declan said calmly
Kisty jumped noticing them both at the side door she turned again to Carmen raising the gun and before anyone can do anything Jess had pushed Carmen out the way falling to the floor. Declan raised his gun shooting Kirsty.
“JESS!” Carmen shouted rushing over to Jess
Jace ran over to Lisa cutting the releasing her from the ropes holding her to the chair. “Baby talk to me,”
“GET AN AMBULANCE NOW!”
Police swarmed the cabin, radioing for medical assistance.
Bette and Tina both ran in covering their mouths both their girls shot, Lisa was unconscious and Jess wasn’t far off it.
“Baby why the hell did you do that!” Carmen said holding Jess in her arms and trying to hold the gunshot wound. “Bette come hold her so I can put more pressure on this!”
Bette did as she was asked
Bette stroked Jess’s hair, tears running down her face. Tina was at Lisa’s side.
“Mama is Lisa okay?” Jess asked
“I’m not sure sweetie”
Paramedics rushed in taking over.
“Mama go to hospital with Lisa and Mum” Jess said
“Jess you’re not running the show here, I’m with you, Mum is with Jess” Bette stated
“Carmen?”
“Yes babe” Carmen said looking at Jess
“I love you, don’t ever attempt to break up with me again over the phone” Jess smirked
Carmen smiled “If you know me like you say you do then you knew it was force”
“Lindsay and Kirsty are both dead” Andrew said “Hey you, what did I say about you playing hero?”
“I’d do it again” Jess said coughing and scrunching her face
Paramedics were working around her.
Jess’s eyes were starting to close
“JESS STAY WITH US!” The paramedic said loudly
“Baby…don’t even think about it, baby!!”
Jess opened her eyes
“Carmen will you do something for me?”
“Off course I will baby”
“Marry me?” Jess said closing her eyes again
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(9 votes, average: 4.89 out of 5)
Enjoyed it a lot, glad everything worked out with the shooting. I thought Lisa was the one to be seriously hurt but poor Jess was the unlucky one again. Thanks
Love this story and the way you move it along. Look forward to the next posting which should be the Wedding I hope?
Thanks for the update. Bette and Tina living in a full house with their kids and partners. It is like a dream come true. Thanks for sharing this dream with us.
Really enjoyed the story looking forward to the next update
I love this story because it has the daily life of a family, with their joys and sorrows.
I love the family Porter-Kennard.
Agurado new chapter.
Congratulations!
Oh my drama rama. I had a feeling Kristy would be back. I am not accusing any one of anything, but it seems to me that either you work oh the TV show The Fosters, or they must have read this fanfic. There are so many similarities in this chapter alone that happened on their show.