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Would She? Part 13
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Previously
He gave her Jr. When she found out she was pregnant with a boy she was so excited. Now after all this time Henry was acting strangely, pulling away. Tina had no idea why. She thought she did a good job of hiding her true feelings.
Feelings she didn’t want to deal with. Feelings she encountered at the airport. Feelings she willed herself to disown. She was married to Henry and felt she owed it to their marriage to fight for him.
Tina stumbles to her room fumbling for the cardkey. She heard someone a few seconds later coming down the hall.
“Fuck,” was what she heard the woman behind her say.
That voice. That scent again. This time Tina wasn’t going to back down. This time she wasn’t going to let her feelings make her believe that Bette was near.
So Tina turned around and definitely was not ready.
“Tina,” Bette said.
CHAPTER 13
Henry
Henry thought since Tina was away this would be a good time to go and get the rest of his things. He entered the house that he shared with Tina and the kids for twenty-five years. Being married to Tina was easy for him. He knew that her heart belonged to Bette and that she wouldn’t see what was really going on with him.
That’s what made it so easy in the beginning. Her mind was so occupied on Bette that she never actually saw the pain that he was going through. His struggles to live a normal life. His struggles just to live. Although he loved Tina he wasn’t never in love with her.
For years he had wish that one day he would wake up and that she’ll be gone. Gone back to Bette but it never happened.
Although she would pry sometimes, Henry would always turn the conversation on her, explaining how she never stopped loving Bette. Everything was going fine until Angelica caught him crying and sweating bullets.
Henry walked around the house gathering his things. Every year around this time, things would get worse. Memories would get stronger. He sat down next to the coffee table. There in the coffee table is where they kept the gun.
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To answer some of you guys PM’S about what song Tina was humming in Chapter Two. Well it was ‘Over The Rainbow’.
i LOVE this story, its so sad, cant wait for the next chapter!
Michellia…..This a wonderful story, so many layers and subplots. PPS. I had to go back and reread the previous chapter to get up to speed again. lol.
Geez, that was so heavy and hard to read, but I think it was necessary insight into Tina’s life (via Henry’s). At this point, I’m kind of just hoping Bette lets her in.
awe goodness please dont say u’re gonna include the rape of Angelica or any of the B & T squad in this!!!!!!
Now it all makes sense. I kept thinking the comment about penguins set Henry off, but that wasn’t it. It was the panther comment. Damn girl this is rough. This story is far from sucking, but definitely rough. Looking forward to the next chapter.
They need to talk even after all these years. Maybe they can get some clouser on the past. After all Bette has been writing Angie all these yrs and Marcus is in the picture .for Tina. thanks
you know i love your work… and this story is right there on top… please please don’t make us wait to long for them to finally talk… and i have a feeling angelica walked in on henry killing him self… tough stuff…
Wow…so deep! Of course, baby, one cliffhanger wasn’t enough for you! What a web you are weaving in this story, and we are all ensnared! Please don’t let any distractions–or the flu–get in the way of a quick follow-up to this story. Get well soon!
WOW!!!!!! PPS
This was a tough chapter to get through. You brought Tina and Bette together. There’s hope for the future if it’s not overwhelmed by the past.
Wow….so detailed, painful…full of emotion….Wow.
way too much Henry time..sorreeeee…more Angel, more B and T please…25 years later huh?? how old does that make ’em?
You most definitely have my attention!! PPS!
Poor Henry, is he kill himself. B&T need to talk and let see whats happen!
It was a long time coming, and truly worth the wait! Its chapters like this which causes one to literally feel Henry’s pain. Baby, this was excellent. Although Henry is a grown man, I sat here feeling like I was reading the actual FEAR a 9 yr old would have had. Henry didn’t seem to have a storyline; yet the one you gave him raises the question of how he was able to handle this all of his life? YOU know I am not a Henry fan, but this chapter was so deep that I didn’t care if Bette and Tina never saw each other in the hallway. But, now that they have, let’s talk about it. 25 years go by and Tina has the nerve to stand there and ask herself, “What the fuck just happened. Why couldn’t she say anything?” For clarity sake, was Tina asking this of herself or wondering it of Bette? You know I have more questions; ones you’re NOT going to answer so HURRY UP & POST AGAIN!!
wow Mich baby this is beyond words. I really don’t like Henry butt he things he went through you don’t wish upon your worst enemy. Your stories are so wonderful and I realy keep enjoying them. PPS thanks
I forgot to add…I am loving this story. PPS
Damn this story is like watching a train wreck – or season 3 – are you IC in hidding? giving us little bits of hope. Making us feel something for the unliked character (IC Jenny – you – Henry).Please give us some B&T happiness…
Wow…I held my breath this whole chapter…the writing was so awesome. No one should have to go thru what Henry went thru. I am anxious to see what kind of conversation Bette & Tina will have. I can understand Bette’s pain still being fresh…she lost her daughter for 25 years (I know she connected with a pen pal but she didn’t know who she was). Please post soon …like today.
great update.. i am glad the prev is dead bette and tina need to talk longer you need to post more often 4 this story
You’ve made me speechless…and I can tell you this isn’t happening frequently. But damn those cliffhangers, girl you’re killing me overhere.
Painful memories for everyone….please post soon.