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Would She? Part 2
Henry hadn’t touched her in weeks, and one night when she came to him after having dinner with co-workers, her head swimming from the champagne, her thighs yearning and aching to be wrapped around him, she’d invited him to shower with her and he had declined. That was fine, she was still buzzing when she climbed into bed butt naked beside him.
He’d just laid there, clutching his pillow and staring at the television. The champagne coursing through her veins would not allow her to be perturbed, and she pulled him onto his back and mounted him.
A log had more feeling than Henry. He just folded his hands behind his head and turned his face back toward the TV.
Tina just sat there, staring at him until Henry finally acknowledged her.
“I’m tired,” was all he said, and gently pushed her off him.
She was too drunk to be hurt, but she was angry and finally fell off to sleep.
Hurt came in the morning when she woke shivering, her body curled into a ball, a thin sheet wrapped at her waist, and no Henry. He had taken the comforter and pillow and spent the night on the couch.
That was in early May, and now it was the middle of June, and Henry still hadn’t touched her. The afternoons phone calls from work waned, and suddenly there was no time for dinner, movies, or even lazy hours spent in his office.
Just a rough patch.
But one day while Tina was sweeping the floor, a thought gripped her.
Could it be another woman?
Tina’s stomach cramped. She’d had been through that before with……Bette.
BETTE
Bette got into the car heading on the journey she has been taking for the last month. Each time she had went to the hospital, Candace condition had worsen. Bette sat back in the seat and smiled. She had remember when she was warn that Candace was about to become apart of her life again.
It was almost a year after the hearing and Bette was just getting back into the swing of things. They had taken turns getting their palms read, and now it was Bette’s turn. It seemed like a good idea, a fun thing to do; well, most things seemed entertaining when your blood was swimming with alcohol.
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You really need to read and remember. Then the piece fits together. the past .and now Thanks for bring this back. thanks
I so love this story. WOW!!!! I can not wait to read more. Thank you PPS
Don’t know what happened to the rest of my previous comment, But great chapter. At this point, I think Bette should go for Candace,which offcourse will hurt Tina when she finds out,but oh well.
It’s like reading your favourite novel over and over again, you know what is coming but you can’t stop reading it anyhow. Thanks for this experience.
I really really like this story, thanks for re-posting…
Just skimming at the moment to recommit the story to memory. This is better than I remember!
At least we won’t have to wait long between posts, since we know it’s already written! You know how I feel about Candace, anyway! I’m also skimming right now, but I will take the time to really read through because I remember so much liking this when I first saw it!
Add me to the crew that is just skimming along. I did not like that Bette hooked up with Candance but I kinda like their coupling in this story. Tina, I wish I could give her swift kick to her dumbass.
Everytime I read a good story, I guess more importantly a well written story it amazes me. You have tied me up again, waiting for more on wondering where you are going to take us on the new chapter…exciting, again!!
tina= dumbass
Wow… This just makes me wish this was a book so I could skip class and keep reading. Can’t wait.
My favorite person
Love this, and if you really pay attention the bouncing back and forth makes sense and brings it together. Will just have to wait for you to do it.