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    Would She? Part 3

    Story written on October 10, 2006 by Michellia.
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    “Uh-huh,” he said, and stood up.

    “I have to get up early.” he said, and brushed at his pants.

    Tina eyed him.

    “Earlier than usual,” he added, and shoved his hand inside his pockets.

    Tina accepted his reason, even though she felt he wasn’t being completely honest with her.

    This was how the other thing, the other affair began, she thought to herself.

     

     

    BETTE

     

    Bette walked into the hospital. She wished that Candace would get better and come home. Deep down she knew that Candace wouldn’t make it home this time. She walked into the room and saw Candace lying there and Marcus sitting by her bedside.

    Marcus was now twenty-three and back from Paris. He had finally came home to help run the Gallery while Candace was fighting her illness.

    Marcus had brought joy into their life’s; he had been happy from birth.

    When they laid Marcus on Bette’s chest, pink, wiggling and wet, the first thought that came to Bette’s mind was that John Carpenter movie, The thing.

    Well, her mind was still twisted from the contraction, still pounding from the doctors, nurses, and Kit telling her to breathe and not to; push and then not to push. They wouldn’t let Candace in, so she spent the whole time outside the delivery room pacing and cussing at the front desk nurses.

    “Okay push,” the doctor said somewhere down at her feet. Her knees were up and her legs apart, and the doctor was crouched down on the stool at the foot of the bed, white mask stretched across his face, white knit cap pulled down over his blond curls. Bette thought he looked like an umpire.

    “Push, Bette, push.”

    Where was the baseball mitt? Bette was delirious.

    “Baby girl, please push,” Kit said, her eyes all puffed and red from the lack of sleep and the sobbing she fell into whenever Bette cried out in pain and remembering the lost of her baby.

    Bette couldn’t push, as much as she wanted it out and the pain over; the only strength she had left in her she used for screaming.

    “Push!” the doctor demanded firmly.

    Bette just screamed.

    “Goddamnit,” the doctor muttered, and in one frustrated move he jumped up and snatched his mask off his face.

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    1. I realized reading this, that you’ve taken a back to what we knew before, but have added a bit more. Great job. Love the way this keeps pulling us in more and more. Forget Henry and Jamaica, Tina should go alone and Bette should be there.

    2. Love how you take up from the present to the past and back. Henry is still a numbnut. and Tina a little bit wackie. Bette seems to be Just Bette. thanks

    4. Glad to see u started up this fic again. It is truely remembered and was wondered about. I hope you continue u it until the end this time. I am going to make the same comment I made when I first read this fic, and it is the same as coop. Forget Henry, sorry Candace died, but it is time for Bette and Tina to get back together and what better place than Jamaica. Let them both find HEALING and LOVE again!!!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!

    5. Is it me or does this Tina seem a little…I don’t know (shaking my head) can’t put my finger on the word I am looking for, but she just doesn’t seem herself. I can’t tell if she actually is in love with Henry and happy with him, or if she is just trying to convince herself of that because she is still in love with Bette. That whole part about her being addicted to Henry confused me. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks!

    7. It seems to me that Tina is trying to convince herself that she loves Henry, and she really just doesn’t want to go through another failed relationship. I don’t know, she seems a bit off right now. I’m glad Bette found a life and a family and contentment, but, somehow, I can’t help wishing they will find each other at some point.

    9. Thanks for all the recaps…question…If Henry isn’t cheating…is he dying…I mean something is up. Maybe he can meet Candace in another life (I know that was cruel…but hey that’s me…lol) Tina does seem not all there but that must be the guilt she has for almost destroying Bette’s life…for what she did to her she dosen’t deserve to have memories of Bette…if she left Bette for Henry that was her decision we have to live with that…but she stripped Angelica out of Bette’s life…that was uncalled for. Keep posting.

    10. “Tina you have brought Bette to bed with us for years. She has been in OUR life’s to long.” This one says it all, you actually can feel it when you’re lovers body is with you but her mind is elsewhere. Loved this story then, love it even more now. Thanks for sharing it again.

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