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WTF…is goin’ on here ch 10
Alice: You know Porter for a very well educated women, youre acting really thick right now. Cut down some of them ***** hours. You should be at the office at 11pm.
Bette: I cant do that. My work is very important to me.
Alice: More important than Tina?
Bette: Damn you sound like her. Of course not.
Alice: Than you need to take care of business. If you love Tina like you say you do, like I know you do than you will make it work.
Bette let it all sink in. Whatever it takes, she thought.
Bette: Ok. Now what should I do,
Alice: First, dry up them tears and pull your self together. Second, get your ***** together. And thats all I can say. I cant help you with the rest. If you want to get your woman back, its gotta be all you. Your idea. Show her how you feel , dont tell her
Bette: Ok Al thanks. Im not gonna let Tina get away.
Alice: Good. If you need anything let me know.
Bette: Thanks, goodnight.
Alice: Night
Bette picked her ***** up off that floor and did exactly what Alice had suggested. She got her ***** together real quick.
Bette cut down her hours by giving James and the other employees more responsibilities. She did everything she knew she was doing wrong, right.
A week later Bette found herself coming home at 6:00 on the dot, to her empty apartment. Tina still hadnt come back. Whats the point of cutting back if she still isnt here. Bette was tired of not having Tina in her arms when she went to sleep. She was tired of waking to cold sheets, instead of Tinas warm loving smile. ***** this. If she wont come, Im goin to get her *****. Bette picked up the phone and started to make ***** happen. She got her plan together and it was ready to be put in action tonight.
Back at Tinas apartment, Tina was feeling the same depression Bette was. She missed Bette. She missed being help in Bettes strong arms; she contemplated on picking up the phone and forgiving Bette. But she knew Bette was wrong and that if she didnt fix it herself she would regret it.
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Damm Neq look at you getting all mushy on me. LOL
Have to give you mad props for using Aaliyah!! she is one of my favorite singers R.I.P. Aaliyah
Ok so are you going to give me some hints about who going to throw down??
nice update you know I like your story
Neq baby youre feel inspired today huh? great chapter i´m so glad Bette was able to work this out with Tina and i hope for good and i´m glad Tina waited for Bettes move, she is not a toy…ok great chapter Neq post soon please thanks :-)
Gotta pour out some of my water for Ms. Dearly Departed Aaliyah. So glad Bette got over herself. Thanks for another great post Neq. This is what i like to see….regular posts. =D
so sweet…can’t wait for the making up! post soon!
Pull yourself together
Since you already made up your mind
If you’re gonna leave me
There’s no sense in you crying…
Buddy Miles – Vintage Funk/Rock!!!
K
Wonderful chapter, so sweet. Just love it. Can’t wait for more.
Just found your story, good job! Very sweet! :)
hey m8te. gosh songs i love… BOTH!!! u couldnt have picked better songs!! n i love that u posting quite regularly hehe n i enjoyed this chapter. thanks!!!
Hey Neq I’m just gat so excited to read this so WHOA! you are doing a Great job to write this really Awesome story right now they both really getting a long together I know I’m just so FREAK OUT I thought they broken up but you doing a Great job you really Amazing writing Neq Thanks Please post soon.
This was great…. really nice good choice in songs to.. post soon :-)
Very sweet Neq – keep up the great work. Please post soon
I love your story. As others mentioned, great choice in songs..one thing I know a little about. “We Belong Together ” is def a slow dance fav!! .. I hope I can add the same flair as you do.. Can’t wait for the next chap.
Bette has learned her lesson for now!!
Damn this is so sweet and awesome chapter. Glad they work this out and can’t wait to see more. Glad to catch up with your story and excellent of all of the cahpters. Please post soon, thanks!
Bette singing to Tina….in public? Mad props to you Neq….you did an OUTSTANDING job on this 1