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WTF…is goin’ on here ch 13
Tina had been jogging for about a half hour now. She decided to head to The Planet. She jogged up to an intersection and saw no cars coming and preceded to cross the street.
All of a sudden to her left she heard a woman call out to her
Woman: WATCH OUT!!!
Tina heard tires screeching and turned her head to the left to see a car flying around the corner.
Before she even had a chance to move out the wayBLACK.
At that exact moment at Bettes apartment in the bedroom, Bette sat straight up in bed. She looked to her right, then to her left. All she saw was the note Tina was nowhere.
Bette: TINA!!!!!!!!
Bette picked up the note and read it. She hopped out of bed and frantically searched her apartment for her love. She was hoping Tina had returned and that the feeling she had in her gut was nothing.
She looked in the living room, dining room, kitchen, and bathroom even in closets and under the bed.
She picked up the phone and dialed Tinas number.
No answer. She fell on the bed crying.
Over her sobs she thought she heard a faint knocking and scratching sound. Hoping, praying it was love she went into the living room. She heard the sounds coming from the door. She ran to the door and practically ripped it off its frame.
She gasped as she took in the site of her lover.
Bette: Tina!!! Baby what happened?
Tinas arms and legs were scraped up, there was blood coming from her head and you could see her bone coming out from her shoulder while her arm hung lower than the other.
Bette grabbed Tina and hugged her tight. She let up a little when she felt Tina shiver in pain. She pulled Tina into the apartment and sat her down on the couch.
Bette: Tina, Baby what happened?
Tina: Bette you would never believe what happened to me. My head hurts, Im so dizzy.
Bette could see the dizziness in Tinas eyes. She wasnt a doctor but everybody knows that when you suffer a head injury you shouldnt go to sleep or close your eyes.
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damm this is some good shit.
I’m gonna guess: Candace?!!! I can’t see Helena running and tackling anyone or caring enough to risk messing up her clothes. Post soon, this is exciting!!! Thanks
oh my… and angel save her..i do believe in this..i hope she is fine now..great chapter Neq post more soon
this is too much…the cliffhangers keep me coming back…of course it could be the stories are wonderful…happy anniversary…post soon.
Thanks Neq I’m just So happy Neq Whoa! Thank Gosh you don’t really to put her in really BAD injured Okay Neq I’m love it Please post soon.
lol – if i seem to be jumping to conclusions but i was rite in one thing, someone did get hurt and end up at the hospital! now dare i make a guess that the knight in shinning armout is ???? :D good story as usual ?
OMG! Was it Candyass? Carmen? WHOOOOO?!?!?!? HAha, please post again soon!
My first question is “Doesn’t anyone in this story know how to call 911? Tina leave the scene and walks home, and then Bette drives her to the hospital rather than calling 911? I am not understanding this in mordren day America. I agree with moonshadow, and vote for Candace. Good story, please post again soon. It is a change to see someone else besides Bette get hurt or injured.
ok had to come back cause I was in the middle of something when I tried to leave the comment but at last I’m here.
OK my best vote Angleina Jollie cause I can say that. HAHA
Ok my real my real vote is……………?
yeah those dots is someones name I just haven’t put the name in yet. LOL
and it better not be that fuck up candyass cause NEQ your better then that!! Peace girl have a fucking good night
OMG!!! What a cliffhanger…I can’t wait to find out who it is. Thanks for not putting Tina into a coma!
who is it?-post soon
love your story. Who is the mystery woman. Don’t keep us waiting too long, Neq.
K
Wonderful story, can’t get enough. You are a big tease. Love it.
i love ya story……keep up the DAMN good work…….But next time lets not leave everyone in such mystery…….(you tease)
Very interesting!!!!
Btw, I dont trust anyone who says trust me (McLeod’s Daughters, episode 74, Turblance, I’ve escaped back into my little MD bubble again…)
Great writing
Damn Neq – I´m on my toes here. This is an interesting twist. Keep going
Glad Tina ok and who the hell is that saving Tina, I guess is Candace or Helena or maybe Peggy, hahaha that’s just funny of thinking about Helena or Peggy safe Tina. Ok I’m sorry for not trusting you and hope you forgive me and please post soon, can’t wait to see who’s that and what’s next. Thanks! Good chapter! 5 stars for you!
this fic kicks arse! … cant wait to find out who it is.
always with the suspense Neq!! girl i need a new update NOW! FAST! yeah i loved this thank u…
Evil!!!!!!!!!!!You enjoy torturing me I think was it helena please don’t make us wait forever