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WTF…is goin’ on here ch 17
Bette and Tina sat speechless. Bette’s grip tightened even harder and the coffee mug broke in her hands, spilling the hot coffee all over her hand and the table. Tina jumped up grabbed Bette’s hands. Kit came out from the back and noticed what was going on.
Kit: Baby Sis, you okay?
Bette still hadn’t said a thing. All she was thinking about was Candace and Helena. Tina could see the stern look in Bette’s eyes, it was a rage she had never seen before. Kit also noticed the look and turned to Tina.
Kit: Tina what just happened?
Tina” Well this young lady Excuse me; I’m sorry, what’s your name?
Woman: Carmen.
Tina: Carmen here saw the whole accident and was telling us what happened. Apparently Candace had planned this whole thing, and she had an accomplice.
Bette jumped up at Tina’s words.
Bette: It was Helena!!! It was her. I know it was!!!
Kit looked back and forth between Carmen, Bette and Tina/
Kit: Helena did this with her?
Tina: I don’t know. She says she saw a woman and she had an accent.
Kit: Okay we’ll get to the bottom of this. Bette calm down and take a seat.
Bette was amp-ed she couldn’t sit, her adrenaline was pumping.
Tina: Bette sit down so we can make sure we know who we’re dealing with and put a stop to this.
They all sat back down.
Tina: Carmen, why don’t you describe these women to us?
Carmen. Sure, the one that was following you was about your height and weight. From that distance I’m not sure if she was black or Spanish. She had a head full of black curly hair and she had on overalls. The other woman, even though I only saw a glimpse she had long dark hair and a slim looking face. I’ve seen them both here before. The ethnic one with you and the other one with her.
She said pointing to Bette. Bette jumped up out her seat again and got her purse.
Bette: I’ll kill her!!!
Tina: Bette!!!
Kit jumped up to stop Bette’s from leaving.
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(43 votes, average: 3.40 out of 5)
WTF, cliffies will be the death of me 2day. LOL Time for HellNo & Candyass 2 get theres!!!!
this is getting better with each chapter… i hope they beat the shit out of candyass and WHAT-THE-HELL… great chapter…please continue
umm will have to talk later about stacey LMAO cause I want details
Yep I’m all for the drama, so round of some OG’s and let throw it down. LOL I have this though of peggy and melvin c walking on hella ass. And stupid candyass needs to get some new clothes, I mean shit overall, damm I wore them when I was like 4.
And fuck why you gots to hurt the saab, I love that car. LMAO
oh my they really like ER room..lol..Candass and Helena dserve each other 2 fucking crazy..i hope Bette will be fine and wheres the back up? great chapter Neq post soon
I agree with pandora007 they deserve each other……good job…post soon
Oh that’s not fear. I hate cliffhangers, pelase post soon. Will Bette be okay? Great chapter
Helena and Candace plotting together, this could be real trouble. Nice way to bring Carmen into the story.
Okay, Neq, let’s get these bitches. Shit. give us another chapter soon so we aren’t hanging
This is so bad on so many levels. Why not have the girls go to the police? Someone had better do something to Candyass and HellNo. Please. You got me hanging now. Great story.
Candace and Helena,Wow the really are getting into a world of S%%t. Let Bette be okay and that one of the gang gets the driver. let it be Shane she is street smart. THANKS
Ohhhhhhhhh Damn! They hit the Saab! Somebody’s gonna pay for that $hyt!
Suburban, but no Kit and Shane? What happened to them?
Also, I like hoe you brought Carmen into the story.
QQg 4ward to your next 1
You guys are killing me here with cliff hangers!!!!!!!!
Oh fuck this is going to crazy and excited drama. Post soon, thanks!