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You came back!!!!!
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After lying there for what seemed to be an eternity, Bette fell quiet upon hearing the door open, and footsteps drawing closer.
Alice: Bette what the ***** happened are you ok I’ve been trying to call you for the past hour and I kept getting the busy signal. I started freaking out and I rushed over here as fast as I could.
Bette didn’t say a word, she just pulled herself up into a sitting and stared into space. She didn’t know what to say. How could she tell Alice that Tina was really gone when she herself did not feel that loss.
Alice: Bette are you ok. What’s wrong? Who was on the phone? Was it about Tina?
There was nothing but a dreadful silence between the two of them.
Alice: Oh my god! Bette!! It was about her, wasn’t it?
And with that Bette just completely broke down, The tears just kept coming uncontrollably!
Alice: Oh my god Bette!!!! Now Alice herself was crying uncontrollably.
I’m so sorry!!!!!!! Was all Alice could manage to say
After sitting there for about an hour or so Alice helped Bette get her practically lifeless body into bed. Bette has still remained in silence. It was almost as if saying that Tina was gone out loud would make it more real. Bette just lay there in her bed surrounded by emptiness, and silence. As she lay there she could feel herself emotionally detaching. She could feel herself slipping into that dark place inside of her, the place that she occasionally visits when things get to hard or when they hurt to much. The place that she goes to when she completely shuts down, and blocks everybody she loves out of her life. She soon fell into a uneasy slumber, but not before mumbling the one word that she has come so accustome to saying before going to sleep every night for the last 9 years. Bette: TINA!!!
4:30 a.m.
Bette awoke from her sleep, but never opened her eyes. She didn’t want to believe that when she looked over to the other side of the bed she would find it empty. She didn’t want to face reality, She couldn’t come to terms with Tina’s death. So she slipped out of bed(all the while having her eyes firmly shut)and felt her way out of the room. Once in the hallway she walked through her empty house. She walked room to room hoping she would find some sign of Tina somewhere in the house. Then it happened, She let her eyes fall upon the picture of them on their wedding day and then she completely lost it. She ran into the kitchen grabbed a knife, and briskly walked out the back door. Once outside she fell to her knees and started screaming into the sky.
Bette: God damn you!!! How could you take her from me!!! Please let her live!!! Take me!!! Please take me!!!!
With that Bette started cutting at her wrist violently.
Bette: Let me take her place!!!! Please let her live!!! Take me!!!! Please!!!! God Damn you let me take her place!!!!
With that everything started getting dark for Bette. She suddenly felt all the strength drain from her body as she fell forward upon the deck and lay there unable to move. And with a few last words she fainted.
Bette: Please take meTina.I love youplease come back!!!!!
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OK so you called this story “YOU CAME BACK” so i think i can speak for all of us that we are hoping this is some hedious mistake or a dream??? Pretty dark place for Bette,hell its a dark place for any of us but do please continue youve got me hooked!!!
Bette can’t die because Tina is still alive somewhere. Thanks
HOLY CRAP! Please let that be a butter knife! I mean, it was dark and all, right? LOL! OK, I’m an idiot, I know. But, I don’t think I could handle a Romeo and Juliet situation here. Please hurry and let us know what happens to Bette and Tina! You’re doing a fantastic job with this so far! thnx!
You and the cliff hangers are killing me!!!!!!!! FIX IT !!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
Damn this is so sad and so awesome, please post soon, thanks!
Don’t stop. Let there be a mistake…
I’m looking forward to seeing where this is going……You need to put chapter numbers in
wow I like it I meant to comment on it last night but time slipped away.
So tina is missing and the cops think they found her body?? yeah we all know how cops are, don’t call bette until you got DNA that is a match.
so where’s alice at???
and you have to give us someback ground on the whole tina disappearing thing, you know when it happen and where type of thing
and don’t let anyone hate on this story, it’s your fanfic do what you want with it. LOL
So intense… And mysterious too !
So many questions marks everywhere, that’s quite engrossing and, yes, I also ask for more chapters. Please continue, we have to know !
… to know – above all, of course ! – IF Tina is really gone forever ?
… to know if our poor Bette will be saved at time ?
… to know why Alice was silly and irresponsible enough to let Bette alone this way ?
… to know why Tina decided to suddenly fly away ?
… to know… if everything could only be a nightmare ?
… etc.
“It was almost as if saying that Tina was gone out loud would make it more real.” SO right…
“She could feel herself slipping into that dark place inside of her, the place that she occasionally visits when things get to hard or when they hurt to much.” I totally relate with that too.
Thank you for such an original beginning !
Damn! That’s heart-wrenching! I am SO ready for you to continue with this! A romantic mystery….hmmmmm… perhaps? I guess I will just have to wait and see. I just read both chapters. They are really good. You have definitely got my attention. Keep going. You’re doing a fine job.
UM…….UM