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You Found Me Chapter 164
Morning. Jeffery where were you last night? Tina asks
Out, did you miss me? Giving his usual big Kennard smile
Yes … after they hug he gets a good look at her lifting her hair up off her neck. Have a good time yesterday? Saying with a smirk on his face.
Yeah.. why you ask like that?
Well by the looks of it …you’re a bottom.. he gives Bette a hug and she cringes and Jeffery feels her stiffen… which mean you’re a top…
Tina swats him. Behave.
Why is it a secret? Earning him another swat. Ouch …he whispers in her ear… you shouldn’t let her give you hickeys if you don’t wanting anyone to know you two fucked around in a field somewhere….
Grams caught the whole conversation as she was walking in. She just snickers. Jeffery notices and points…See even Grams knows.
Bette takes a seat worried where it will go next. Leave Grams out of it.. Tina made Bette and her Grandmother a cup of coffee.
What about mine? Jeffery asks.
Get it yourself!
He does and smile while doing so, Lynn walks in. Jeffery Behave.
What makes you think I’m not?
You’re awake aren’t you?
Tina lets out a snicker.. That goes for you too young lady.. Jeffery sticks out his tongue at Tina and has a seat. Tina rolls her eyes Bette looks over at Grams who is shaking her head.
Where’s dad at? Jeffery asks.
Oh he ran over to the Simpsons for a minute Jim needed his help with something, he said he would be back for breakfast. Every things done I’m just waiting on the biscuits you girls sleep alright last night?
Bette looked at Tina …I slept like a rock. I was ready exhaled.
Me too Tina says.. Jeffery sees the look and clears his voice smirking at the two. Tina kicks him ooch..
Joe walks in the back door, Sorry he kiss Lynn I wasn’t too long was I?
No you’re just in time. have a seat. Joe sits beside Tina.
Morning girls, Jeffery.
Morning dad… Jeffery says.
Morning Daddy Tina says kissing him on the cheek.
Morning Joe. Bette says.
Breakfast went well, they cleaned up and Bette went to make a phone call to Peggy to get the time they were to be picked up. Joe and Jeffery had things to do outside. While Tina talked with her Grams and Mother.
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SassyGran says
Way too short but welcome none the less :-)
Look forward to more soon.
Bibi28 says
Wow BnTinmyhead, that was amazing, i am speechless! And yes i mean your story about yourself. I am proud of you and i am happy that you finally live the life you denied yourself for so long. I was and still am very lucky that my family and friends accepted and supported me when i came out. It is sad that in so many countries and cultures it isn’t accepted and in some were you get lock up or beaten or killed. There is still so much to fight for acceptance even in my country The Netherlands.
I am also happy that you stick to your promise to finish this story, your writing style is good enough for me, i have seen worse, like mine :-)
Thanks for your background and the update! A loyal fan.
Ps, my profile photo is from my dog, she has beautiful eyes and is much better looking than i ;-).
@Shaggy56 says
Hey girl…GREAT writing!YOUR personal journey to self truth&happiness is profound!..brought me to tears– GREAT ADMIRATION FOR YOU! Let NO ONE STOP THE FLOW…U DO U
dunnthat says
Truly an amazing coming out story yet you have to defend yourself and for what?whoever doesn’t like what she has to say or the way her stories are written then they can just step the fk off.BnTinmyhead is telling this story not you or me so she can tell it any damn way she pleases.str8 like that and i DUNNTHAT approve this message.LET’s have a wedding yall. thanks
Dee22 says
Love it glad they’ve set the wedding date and plan to have it at the farm. Jeffrey is funny.
wkm says
I really enjoy this story. Thanks for the update.
ceetime says
love this story keep on writing
cellphone48 says
Thanks! You do you and DON’T worry what anyone else thinks! I love this amazing story! PPS
btporter says
Hi. I read your comment and am not sure who or what was written. I do want to let you know I love your writing and this story. I read it from the beginning a few years ago but it was not finished I was bummed. I ended up reading it a second time. I was so happy when you started posting again. I read these stories every night some are not my cup of tea most are, but this one is my favorite. I usually don’t comment I am one of those silent readers that just like the way the writers on the site have so many different stories about Bette and Tina. I just hope you continue writing and know you have a fan that looks forward to the next post. :)
els73 says
love it thankyou
jalex says
Brave and generous at the same time.
Thank you very much for giving us this story
so entertaining, funny, sweet and nearby.
I love it!
michelle.tibette says
I rarely have anything to say but I love your story. Please continue writing it because I’m addicted. I recently started it while at my boring job and it makes the 8 hours fly by. I love this version of bette and Tina.
lu4ever says
Ok, it is very rare that I post comments, as a matter of fact it’s probably been over a year ago and those comments were for allyemmerson and BenMac. It’s not that I don’t enjoy the stories, it’s actually just the opposite. I love this forum and the creativity that abounds here, but I like my anonymity better. Our life stories are very similar, I was also trapped and The L Word and this forum and these stories became my saviour and also lead to beautiful changes in my life. I’m so disappointed when there are beautiful stories that draw me in and then the writer suddenly stops writing and the story ends without closure. That is why I was elated to see you posting again and I love your style of writing and look forward to your posts. Please continue posting and more importantly continue being you. You don’t need to change anything just because one person takes issue. I have always felt that this forum was a great source of friendship and comradery. It’s so sad when one person takes public issue with what is a petty personal grievance. I have read hundreds of thousands of stories since this site originated and I appreciate and am thankful for each writers willingness to open their souls and share with The L Word fans their unique views of the BnT life. Yes, there have been some that are very hard to read, and yes, there have been some where language barriers or poor grammar made them nearly impossible to read. Please keep in mind, these stories are someone sharing with all the readers a private part of their lives and that needs to be respected for what it is regardless of the form. RESPECT, that should be the guiding principle! BnT thank you for sharing your personal story and continued success and happiness to you. You have loyal (although primarily silent reader) fan in me!
trecelovinit says
Well said!
bubcris1 says
great update, I love reading your story, it brings a smile to my face everytime I see a new posting
murmeli says
I love this story. And i love the way you write. The banter between T&B is great. So Please, keep them coming.
PPS Please!
trecelovinit says
I love this story and I love your style of writing. It amazes me that people can be so judgmental that you feel you have to defend your writing and your story. It’s just that….your story and your writing. If the person(s) don’t like the story/your writing, they have the right and should exercise that right to discontinue reading it and commenting on it. No one is forcing them to read it. Continue to share your story with us, unapologetically!
majicspider60 says
BT, your comments mirror many of the lives of the people that visit this site. Just be true to who you are. Don’t let the judgments of others determine the value of your life. Be yourself and keep writing. Your posts entertain us every day. Thank you
mscully says
Guys! what was that?
Blackbird why do it? In the author box itself Perfio there is one thing
Called “Send a private message !!!”
There are a thousand ways to give tips to fellow writers, as it was done not
was cool … it is a phrase that says, “always worth that maxim, praise in public and
correct in partucula to act so people who want to add something
good to our “cup of life”. and all I have to say …
My dear, my friend come here publicly to say how much
I am fortunate to know him, we are no longer reader and writer,
I consider him a great friend !, In mid-September I
I stopped to comment on the site, the reason was that my mother was hospitalized,
and I had to split me between work and hospital, BNT and LadySovjet (which
also consider a close friend) I knew the anguish, fatigue
and stress I was going through and finally I fall sick of a fever and
flu, and they were there to comfort me, even not being physically
but their messages were there. This website and our refuge, the place
It has the greatest writers of fanfic world, and each has its own Author
favorite and his writing style, because for every author has
a reader and this should be respected, and there are ways and ways to give
a tip or assistance to a written colleague.
I have no problem with how you write BNT, not
dare change anything you do, I love your NC 17! I love how
you give life to Bette and Tina, I can understand their history, there are several
people who love the way you write. You write to us, people
common and not for the TV studio or an editor, I am a simple person you
You know that at facebook, it’s me in the photo published in site.Eu not know
speak English properly however, when I read your story I understand everything,
and why I so love this story.
I lenbro when you told me your personal story, I spoke to write
she, tell your story with the characters of Bette and Tina, people need
know your love story and how long it took for you to finally be happy altogether.
You are an inspiration ..
I will not read yet, because I have to work today, I just came here to give my support.
I still have the flu, but has no fever, my mother gets better every day, thank all the support
and encouragement they gave me.
BNT, my bottles of water turned to ice! Kkkkkkkkkk
and I need them to read his story, rsrsrsrsrsrs
The whole constellation of the universe !!!
Bear hug !!
I love you !!!
tibettenation1 says
I so love you right now BNT! Awesome notes!