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    You (Part the Second)

    Story written on October 10, 2006 by MutedTempest.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=62779
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    Getting to the core issues.

    “I think that’d be really good. And there’s no need to feel bad about it, Dana. I’m sure they all sided with you after the radio thing. Hell, I would have too, I still can’t believe I did that. But I miss everyone too. And I’m really sorry about the thing at the Planet…”

    “Forget that, Al. I know it was the pills, so I’m just letting that one slide. Just like you doing your little Peeping Tom thing last night.”

    “Shit,” Alice whispered, the color draining from her face.

    “Hey, I know you’re sorry, okay? And I know it was the pills. Still, it creeped me out a little, you know? So can you promise me you’ll stop the stalker shit? I know it’s gonna take time, but you have to try, Al.” Dana searched Alice’s eyes and was happy to see some strength in them again. She knew one conversation wasn’t going to solve everything, but she really felt better about things.

    So did Alice, apparently, because she nodded and laughed at herself a little. “I will. I don’t want to be this…thing anymore. I’m really going to work on this, Dana. I promise.”

    “Good. It’s gonna be okay, Al. It will.”

    “I know,” Alice replied, sure of something for the first time in months. “Shit, my meeting’s in an hour. I should get home and change before Helena gets there.”

    Dana just nodded. She wanted to tell Alice about the lump, but she just couldn’t bring herself to. Besides, it was probably nothing, just like she’d told Lara. Still, at any other time in the last decade Alice would have been the first one she’d have called. It hurt a little to realize she couldn’t tell her best friend something so important.

    She had to admit that it was good to see Alice a little bit happy again, though. And as she watched Alice back out of the driveway – “Wash that fucking thing, Al!” she yelled, happy to see Alice flip her off as expected – she figured she could call her if it turned out to be anything more than the sexy, sinewy fibrous breast she’d assured Lara it was the night before. If it was, she was pretty damn sure she’d be calling Alice again, self-imposed avoidance rules or no.

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    1. This is so much more real than what IC told us I hope she is reading as well. You lived up to your talent without a doubt. I love what you are doing with this story and will continue. Maybe even keep Dana alive because that’s what all us Danish readers want. Anyway please keep writing! You made my day a little better.

    2. Great job! I really enjoyed it. This is a much more believable direction that Danish is taking. It’s good to see them talking it out. In my opinion, they need each other. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait to read more.

    4. Ok, totally love this story. If only IC could have written something so great… and Danishy believable. This is so much easier to grasp than the shit IC put our girls through. Please update again soon, because I am really enjoying this story, even though this was only the second chapter! :-)

    5. Even thought it’s breaking my heart that they did break up and Dana did go back with Lara — an Alice turned to the pills, so far you’re doing it in a way that at least has a direct relationship to the characters as we know and love them. Although I gotta say the above things were also three of the top four reasons (and that’s jus the Danish!) S3 is just to painful to think about, so I hope you’re gonna fix it, otherwise I just might need Alice’s meds all over again. Really looking forward to your next update.

    6. Just got caught up with this fic, excellent job, Muted, it’s like the lost scenes we’ve needed. Yay! Danish friendship is not dead, and having this on the real show would have answered so many “WTF?”-type questions of how things played out on-screen. Is Dana going to let Lara know about her reconciliation of sorts with Alice? I like that you don’t have D and A just jumping to getting back together, but rather, talking about misunderstandings and…moving on (in whatever way/s you’re taking them…?). Can’t wait to keep reading the next updates, please post soon!

    7. I like that you are allowing them to slowly heal. Dana’s illness will probably crop up soon, but I hope you give Alice some time to get stronger. In an out of character move for myself, I hope they don’t get together any time soon. I really like your story.

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